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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 19

She held his coat closer, smiling to herself. She was acting like a kid who just got scolded for getting wet in the rain.

He couldn't help but shake his head at her childishness.

The rain hadn't stopped completely yet and he pulled her closer, into his warmth. He was glad that she gave in easily without struggling to let go.

She was too happy to stop him today. First; it was the rain that she loved. Second; they were together like this for the first time. Third; she'd already done enough damage to his feelings today and didn't want to make it worse, so just gave in. How couldn't she anyways !? When all her happiness lied in him.

He was broken out of their blissful moment by Zoya's amused shriek, which took some time to sink in.

''Gol gappe Mr.Khan !! Mujhe gol gappe khaane hain... Wo dekhiye !!'' she said pointing towards a dimly lit gol gappa stall.

''Zoya... Bohat raat ho chuki hai... Hum ghar pohanchne hi waale hai... Wahin pe dinner kar lenge...'' came his curt reply.

He wasn't sure about her eating somethiing roadside, that too during monsoon.

She was disappointed by his reply but couldn't compromise with her need to have a gol gappa, right then and there.

Asad saw a little disappointment on her face but couldn't do much being handcuffed by her and the baby's health.

He walked a little ahead and noticed that Zoya hadn't budged.
''Kya hua...?'' he asked in a soft voice.

''Mujhe gol gappe hi khaane hai Mr.Khan !'' she pouted.

''Ye aapki aur baby ke sehat ke liye theek nai hai Zoya... Roadside stuffs are really unhygenic...'' he said trying to ignore his melting heart.

Zoya couldn't help but smile at her husband's OCD. ''Mr.Khan... He's one of the best gol gappa seller around this area. I and Tamatar have been here so many times and never ever fallen ill after eating such delicious gol gappas !'' she said as if she was relishing one.

Asad was amused at his wife. He had never seen this side of hers. How she managed to act like a kid even at this stage of life. Had she always been like this ? Ofcourse, she was, remembering her love for pizza !

And wait ! When did she and Najma have gol gappe here ? Why did I never come to know about it ? He thought to himself. Only to come in terms with the fact, how much he had track about his wife all these months. Again pushing him into his pool of guilt !

''Agar aap keh rahi hain toh theek hai... Chaliye..'' he said after a few moments, giving in to her wish.

''Bhaiya... Do plate gol gappa deejiye...'' she said to the stall keeper flashing her smile. He immediately looked up to see her and greeted her, ''Arey... Salaam memsaab... Kaisi hai aap ? Aaj aap akele ? Choti memsaab kahan hai ?''

''Wo ghar pe hi reh gayi bhaiya... Sirf mera mann tha gol gappe khaane ka...'' she replied to him, waiting impatiently for her gol gappe !

''Acha... Ye lijiye... Bilkul waisa hi jaisa aapko pasand hai...teekha !'' he said handing over her the plate with a smile.

Asad looked at them with a lost expression. He felt so out of place looking at his wife talking to someone like she'd known him for quite sometime now. The gol gappa wala too was so friendly with her like she had been visitting him every once in a while and he referred to Tamatar as choti memsaab ?! And hadn't even bothered to look at him.

He was brought of his thoughts when he saw Zoya struggling to eat the gol gappa with her burnt hand.

He silently took the plate from her hand and fed her. She looked so adorable trying to gulp down the whole gol gappa in one go. Asad could eat her up alive.

The happiness on her face was so contagious. He couldn't help but feel blessed. It looked like her wish of the lifetime had been fullfilled ! She closed her eyes and relished every bit of the gol gappa.

''Mr.Khan aap bhi khaaiye na... Its really good !'' she said, trying to look away from his intent gaze.
''Nahi... Aap kha lijiye...'' he replied coming out of his dazed state.

She knew he would never agree to eat something outside and she didn't want to push him to anything, until he really wished to. So, she ate to her full and thanked the gol gappa wala, who hadn't bothered to notice Asad till the end, like he wasn't even there.

They left the place and soon reached home. Dilshad asked Zoya about her hand and got to know what the doctor had said. She told them to have dinner and take care as she was already done and going off to sleep, after greeting them Allah Hafiz. This was just her another attempt to get them closer by leaving them alone.

Zoya felt so tired and sleepy but she couldn't leave Asad all to himself, especially when he had not even eaten anything, knowing how bad he was at all the kitchen works.


Continued below :)
Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago
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''Mai aapke liye khaana laga deti hu...'' she said stiffling a yawn.

He didn't want her to take so much pain for him, especially with her hurt hand; but he couldn't do much about it knowing how inefficient he was with the cooking skills. Still he tried to tell her that he would manage. But she had already left for the kitchen and was coming out with food in her hand.

''Ammi ne sab ready rakha tha... Aap kha lijiye...'' she said knowing what was going on in his mind. She saw him get seated and served him the food.

He ate quietly and she sat by his side watching him dearly. She did not even realise when she'd fell asleep looking at him.

Asad looked at her and her burnt hand with pain in his eyes. He could feel his heart get heavier. He knew he was so much in love with her, but words would do nothing. He had to prove it this time.

Pushing away all the thoughts, he cleaned the table and decided to take her to the room, with no intention of waking her up.

He carefully took her to their room, carrying her in his protective arms, drinking in her sight. She always managed to weaken his knees by the innocent look on her face. Entering the room, he closed the door behind by pressing his back, leaning on it.

She fit in so perfectly in his arms, like she was carved for him. He carried her towards the bed, placing her slowly on it, not tearing his gaze away from her. The rattling noise of the rain draped his eratic beats in the dimly lit room.

Her clothes were still slightly wet and the exquisite sight of her wet form send down a shiver of sweet agony through his spine. Breathtaking she was !

He brushed off the wet hair from her face, making his view clearer. The touch of electricity passed down through her by the brush of his finger. She opened her eyes only to find him staring at her with a whirlpool of love filled in his deep orbs.

He slowly bent down to her level and she closed her eyes in anticipation. He didn't want to leave her high and dry like everytime but he could not even force her into something, when they had not even reached the stage of having a proper conversation apart from today.

He pecked her cheek instead and got up to leave, when he found a tug at his hand.

She didn't want him to stop himself today, not atleast because of her. She had deprived him of all this for a very long time now, though it was him only all the while; who wanted to keep distance but not anymore.

She blushed at the kiss on her cheek and held his hand, stopping him from going away. She sat up and pulled at his hand, indicating him to complete what he had started.

He looked at her hand lovingly and sat beside her on the bed, cupping her face. ''Aap bohat thak gayi hain aaj... So jaaiye...''

''She nodded her head in negative and placed her hands on his shoulder, moving closer to him. She was so scared to initiate something for the first time in life.

On the other hand, Asad's heart was running in a marathon. He didn't want to do something that would make her regret later, thinking that she still wasn't ready for the new start.

He softly pulled her hand down, pleading with his eyes to let go.

''Aap itne ziddi kyun hai Mr.Khan...!?! Give in to my wish..Just for once..'' came her outburst at his retreating behaviour. She couldn't understand what was stopping him when she readily gave in.

He couldn't bare to see those doe-shaped eyes filling with tears. So he slowly pulled her closer by her back and placed his lips on hers. They felt so soft like feather.

She was so angry at him for one moment and the next moment she found her lips in contact with his. They closed their eyes feeling each other closely.

He kissed her deeper, prodding his tongue in her mouth. He dipped down his mouth to access the undiscovered corners of her mouth with his tongue.

He could feel how she was struggling with her tongue in his mouth and understood that she was nervous. He couldn't help but relish every corner of her mouth. He gave her space to breath and continued to suck on her lips. He took them one by one, biting once in a while.

She felt him and herself shudder, each of his muscle hardening in desire. The touch of each other had intoxicated them. She arched back as he slipped his hand to caress her bare back after pulling the zip of her dress down.

He could feel himself burn in passion and desire that was nowhere near ending. She whimpered as all the barriers were removed and the loose strings fell behind. She was about to pull away from him when a piece of linen covered her back. Sighing, she let him lead to where he takes her.

He got her rid off from her wet clothes and made her wear his dry kurta, not removing his gaze from her face all the while. He made her lie down and hugged her, snuggling in closer, drifting off to sleep.

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Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello People ! 😃

Here I am...after a lonnnggg lonnggg time ! *hides from the readers' angry looks*

Ok.. So that was the part 19 ! Hope you guys like it ! DO LET ME KNOW. If it was bad, worse or worst !? coz I know I suck at intimate scenes. I ate up most of it ! 🤣 🤣 🤣

I extended the rainy night because everyone wished for it. So do leave me huge comments, if it was a good idea or bad !

MisHumptyDumpy - Ankieee 🤗
I know I'm such a pain as a writer, but what can I do ? I've got other works too and writing ain't an easy job ! Plus my lazy ass ! So, thats why such late updates...😆

Pavi1319 - Your wish will be fulfilled too ! I'll try my best to put that scene soon ! 😃

Jassieg - Here's your kiss ! Hope it wasn't a mess...and you liked it ! 😳

Fizzi - I miss your silent likes...😔
Dont know if you're still following the story...

enrique - Welcome back ! 🤗

zan101 - Always the first one ! Stalking eh ? 😆
Love ya. 🤗

LuvUAsYa - Ye le tera update...:P

sasir, -waitingforyou- Here's your updates !

Sorry if I missed someone !

AND to all the new readers, A BIG WELCOME !!

Thanks for all the likes and comments eveyone ! I loved every single of them. You guys are really lovely ! 🤗

Dont forget to leave them this time too...😳

Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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at last you update.... 😃 🤗

Update...

very well written as usual...
at last both of them moving froward on their relationship..😳 it's really beautiful to see.. 😳

and yaar this is my fav FF on this Forum.. so i always keep my eyes on ur Update... 😉 😆


Edited by zan101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
koi baat nahi...der aaye durust aaye...love the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
thats really cute and romantic update..loved it
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Res :'( :'( :'( :'(
im baaack... 😒

4 d writer of d story... (whosoeva it is dsnt bother me nyyy moore... )

im not gonnna say tht d GOL GAPPA scene ws mooore thn adorable...

n il not evn say tht i jst loved d close bonding of asya...


like she was carved for him.
nor will i say tht i wanted to hug d writer 4 writing schh a schhh a beautiful line...

n i willl nevr say tht I LOVE D UPDT TO D CORE...

n ths i wont say tht i ws drooling over d update...

neither iv said tht i ws feeling as well as loving d warmth nd passion filled lovey dovey scene...

nor im sayn tht d updt ws...

n nooo thaaanx 4 d PM...
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
☺️ < thats all i can comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳 So romantic, lovely update, really beautiful, I am in love with your story, thanks for your update, eagerly waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is one of the cutest parts ever!
Loved it...
Bolna parega...it was worth waiting!!!
Part was jhakkas bole toh bindas! 😃
Iss bar itna lamba wait maat karwana...ap bina wait karwaye bhi jhakkas parts likhti ho!!! 😆
Cont super soon...
Eagerly waiting!

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