asya os-jeene laga hunn...:)pt 5 on pg 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update plz continue soon
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awesum parts...luvd da way u r describing and writing.Thnkx for the indication of ur updated parts on fb.I am loving it.Do continue soon baby. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

awesum parts...luvd da way u r describing and writing.Thnkx for the indication of ur updated parts on fb.I am loving it.Do continue soon baby. 😆

thank us so so much..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Just read part 3b

That was awesome

Loved the way all the girls bonded



P.s. the banner is awesome

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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muslims kisi ke paer nahin choote
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Originally posted by: 121315

muslims kisi ke paer nahin choote

behan mujhe kya patah tha...tu muslim hai main toh pakistani hun
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys actually there was sum problem so part 3b was little short so here is part 4 for u al...njoy
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so here is part 4...!
zoya-ek din mujhe najma ne bola ki mein skirt pehnu toh main...usse dikhana chate kimein skirt mein main kaise lagtihun...par unfortunately...us din maulvi sahib ah gye...aur mujhe nhi patah tha aur mein skirt pehne hue bahar ah gye...
then she narrated the incident..how asad scolded her...,,
nikhat-ya allah bhabhi pp ki toh buri wali chopsey hue hoge...!
zoya-hmm...par uske baad unhone mujhse sorry bola tha...aur ek suit gift kiya tha...
nuzzat-how romantic...😳😳
zoya-hmm...aisse bahut se kisse.. hain...
humiera-baji bataye na...plzz...!😃
then zoya narates all the incidents even that bhang one,,
najma-zoya tumhare saath itna sab kuchhua aur tumne mujhe kuch nhi bataya...
zoya-sorry tamatar,,,,,,,😃😃😃
najma-koi nhi...in mean time ayyan cumes...
ayyan-mona bhaijaan aye hain...
zoya-kahan
ayyan-woh bahar garden mein hain..maine usneh sabse milne ko kaha...dadi toh nhi hai..par nikhat log to usne mil he sakte hai...
in garden...
zoya nd najma are standing beside...asad..
nikhat cumes nd hugs asad nd whispers in his ears...
nikhat-bhabhi bahut achi hai...gr8 choice bhaijaan...
asad-ikdam tumhare tarah...
then nuzzat cumes nd hugs him...
nuzzat-bhaijaan thank u so so much...
asad-ur welcum lekin kisliiye
nuzzat-itni achi bhabhi dene ke liye...
asad smiles...nd then humiera says-assalam walekum...
asad-walekum asalam... ab tumhare tabiyat kaise hai...
humiera-achi hai bhaijaan..
asad-aur ayyan jyada tang toh nhi krta hain na...!aur agar kare toh mujhe batan mein isse mukka ahmad khan se milwaoonga...
then they all started laughing...
zoya whispers to asad-dekhiye sab mere tareef kr rhe hain ek app hainjo..kabhi koi ache shabd bhinhi bolte hai...
asad-app ghar chaliye tab mein apko bataoonga...
zoya-complicated man
asad-confused ladki...
asad-acha b humein ghar chalna chahiye...der ho gye..ghar pe bhi koi nhi hai...
khuda haffiz...
all -khuda haffiz...!
zoya hugged..all of them nd bid gud bye...
at khans villa...
zoya was cooking...while...asad was helping najma in her project...!
then they all had dinner nd all went to their rooms...!
asya room...
when zoya entered the room she saw room fully decorated...!
asad then closes the door...much of zoya's presence...he then grabed her waist...!
he thenn whispered in her ears -l luv u zoya...
zoya blushed😳..he then turns her now they were facing each...other..!..!...
zoya i luv u 2 mr.khan,...
asad-asad...
zoya-asad...
asad-ek aur baar..
zoya-asad.
then waisting no more time..he captured.her lips...they both were kissing each..other...he then caried her to the bed...
he then statred kissing...her neck..nd the kissed..his jaw line...
zoya moaned...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳he then increased his intensity...!
nd their love mking conitnued...but climax was much far away...
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ah finally written...!
precap-all siblings having breakfast...!





Edited by luvushivin1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
i read it in one go...nice update... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Nice part continue soon and plz pm me for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol...suru...I cant digest the fact that u used the word "chopsey" here...haha...I mean Suvreen Guggal's Chopsey in Qubool Hai?//Omg...hahaha...cant stop laughing!!!🤣🤣🤣
Well dis update was romantic as well as sweety sweet😳...do continue soon👍🏼

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