asya os-jeene laga hunn...:)pt 5 on pg 11

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hey guys here i am with m y another os jeene laga hunn...i really luv this song nd i want to dedicate this to our asya...
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so here it goes...!
in my story asya have been married...!...its theirsecond day after their nikaah..tanveers truth has been out...read this os there is a surprise for u all...!
at dinning table all of them having their breakfast...(in my story asad has still not confess)
dilsaad-asad tumne apna zarrori kaam khatam kr diya ki nhi...?(think think kya zaroori kaam ho skta hai)
asad-nhi ammi..ajj kr loonga
najma-kaun sa zaroori kaam ammi...while drinking coffee
asad-tumhare nikaah ka...
najma chokes her coffee nd says kyaaa...mera nikaah par abhi toh mein 20 years ki...ammi yeh kya bat hue abhi tak toh maine apni padhai bhi nhi khatam ki...nikaah nhi ammi mujhe yeh nikaah nhi krna hai...plzz ammi with tears in her eyes...
asad is laughing
najma-bhaijaan ap hass rhe hain...yeh kya baat hue areh hadd hote hai..
dilshad-asad tum chup rho...faltu mein mere bachee ko pareshaan kr rhe ho..aur najma..aisa kuch nhi hai...kuch office ka kaam tha tumhare bhaijaan tumhare saath mazak kr rhe the...asad agli baar aisa mazak kiya na..toh soch lena while holding his ears...
asad-sorry ammi...
najma-hawww bhaijaan..iss baat ka badla toh mein appse le ke rhoonge waise yeh bataiye zoya kahan hai...
asad-so rhe hain...
najma-kya abhi tak so rhe hain..
dilu-ao asadusko utha ke aoo...
asad-jii ammi...
asya's room
zoya was peacefully sleeping because two days were really a hecktake for her...asad closes the door of their room he then turn towards zoya while putting her hairs behind her ears which were blocking the view of zoya's face
asad-zoya uthiye...
zoya-ummm
asad-zoya uthiye...nhi toh mein apke upar panni dall donga
zoya-daal dijiye(speaking under her blanket)
asad-uthiye
he then removes her blanket from her body picks up her in bridal style and picks her up to washroom
he places her in front of the miror...
zoya-mr.khan mujhe neend ah rhe hai..aur app mujhe washroom le aye kya mr.khan
asad-mujhe kuch nhi sunna app jake jalsi se naha lijiye neeche sab appka wait kr rhe hain...
zoua-app jayenge tabhit oh mien nahoonge appke samne thodi naa..then bits her lower lips understanding what she said...
by the time asad went outside the washroom thinking yeh ladki mujhe ek din mental asylam bhej kar he chod ge...
suddenly his phone rings
asad thinking iss sameh kiska phone hoskta hai..but when he sees ayyan's number a smile forms on his face(in my story imran has died nikhat is not angry with ayyan but she is in shock as imraan has died...)
asad-ayyan itne subah subah mere yaad kaise ayee
lady-asad
asad-dadi...app
dadi-haan tumhare daditum toh humeh bhool he gye ho nikaah bhi kr liya..aur humeh bulaya tak nhi...bhala yeh kya baat hue
asad-aise baat nhi hai dadi app toh jante hai..kin hallatoon mein humara nikaah hua hai...
dadi-theek hai par kya tum mere baat manooge
asad-ji boliye
dadi-kya tum aur zoya ajj ghar ah skte ho...
asad-sry dadi app jante hai kabhi possible nhi hai...pagar agar app chate hain toh mein zoya ko udhar najma ke saath bhej doonga
dad-theek hai asad agr tum yeh chate ho toh theek hai mein zidd nhi karoonge...
asad-acha dadi mein zoya ko chodd dunga...allah haffiz
dadi-khuda haffiz aur chinta mt kro razia aur gaffur nhi hai woh humeira ka nikaah pakka krne ke liye ajmer sharif gye hainn
and then she cuts the call
asad cumes out of the room
at dining table
dilshad- itni der kaise hho gye asad
asad-woh ammi ayyan ka phone tha par dadi ne mujhse baat ki
dilshaad-ammi ne baat ki matlb
asad-woh actually dadi mujhe aur zoya ko lunch pe bulaya hai par maine manna kr diya lekin maine zoya ke liye haan kr dii hai aur yeh bhi kaha hai ki najma bhi unke sath ayege maine theek kiya na ammi...
dilshad-bilkul theek
waise zoya kahan hai...
then zoya cumes wearing a blue colour anarkali...
zoya-gud morning everyone
dilshad nd najma-gud morning..
zoya cumes nd sits beside asad..
dilshad-zoya kya tum mere liye ek kaam kroge
zoya-woh tumeh ajj rashid ke yahan jaana hoga najma ke saath
zoya-ji theek hai mein jaoonge
dilu-chinta mt kro udhar razia aur sidique sahib nhi hai ...
zoya smiles ...
aur suno udhar tumeh asad ki dadi ne bulya hai luch pe to tumtayyar ho kar chle jaan mujhe kaam hai aur sad tumeh aur najma ko udhar chodd de ga...
to be continued
hey guys how was it..plzz tell me hit the like button nd plzz cumment
index...
part one-pg 1
part 2-page 3
part 3a-pg5
prt 3b-page 7
prt 4-pg8
prt5-pg11

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey its nice one. please continue soon...
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Continue please it was very good and if possible give some ASYA moments jo QH me aajkal Tannu ke siva milti bhi nai😡
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Originally posted by: Guguminti

Continue please it was very good and if possible give some ASYA moments jo QH me aajkal Tannu ke siva milti bhi nai😡

sureee
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Its wonderful
Pls continue and PM me
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its really nice!
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hey guys i m here with an another part of my os..jeene laga hunn...thanxx for ur luvely cumments...actually this part is dedicated to my best frndd iffat her birthday is today...!
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as the breakfast was over...najma went back to her room...as she has to complete the pending work...nd then she has to ready..for going on lunch ...
zoya was cleaning the dinning table...suddenly dilshad called her in her room...
zoya-ji ammi apne mujhe bulaya ...
dilu-zoya yeh lo...she handed her the gift it was dark blue colour anarkali suit with silver emboidry done...! on it,,,,!...
zoya-wow ammi yeh bahut khoobsurat hai...kiske liye hai..yeh...
dilu-tumhare liye...
zoya-thank u...
dilu-ur most welcum...aur suno tum pehle baar as a bahu jah rhe ho..toh tum usnke liye khuch gifts le jana..maine abhi tak asad se iske bare mein baat nhi ki hai..tum usko batah dena...acha mein chlte hun...mein 3 din baad aoonge mujhe apni khala ke yahan jaana hai unke tabiyat bahut kharab hai..toh tum log ajj bahar khana kha lena...theek hai ab mein chlte hun allah haffiz...!
zoya-allah haffiz...
nd then zoya too went to her room...nd there she saw..asad shirtless...
zoya-shit...sorry mr.khan mujhe nhi patah tha ki app yahan i mean i m really sorry ..
asad-theek hai...by the time he buttoned his shirt.,...!
zoya-woh mujhe app se kuch kehna hai...
asad-boliye..
zoya-woh mr.khan ammi ne bola ki mein waha pehle baar jah rhe hun..toh...appke behno ke liye khuch gifts le jaan to mujhe shopping pe jana hai..najma toh work kr rhe hai..toh main soch rhe the ki..
asad-ki app mere saath shopping pe chalen...
zoya-haan she said proudly...
asad-sry...main apke saath nhi chal skta
zoya-allah miyan whats wronng with u...?
asad-isse pehle u curse me..mein uskne ke liye pehle se he gifts mangwa ke rakh diye hain...thodi der mein atte he honge...
zoya-toh aisa boliye na..faltu mein mera time waste kr diya
asad-app khud he apna time waste kr rhe hain..12:30 ho rhe hain...aur 1 baje...app ko..udhar jana hai..toh acha yhi hoga ki app tayyar ho jayen mein tab tak ..najma ko bol ke attan hun...
zoya-theek hai...
then asad went upstairs to call najma...
as he opened the door he saw that his sister was sleeping peacefully..becoz she worked late night for her project which was now over only decoration was left...
asad then went to his sister..
asad-najma utho...
najma-bhaijaan sone dijiye naa...
asad-tamatarr...utho...tueh jana bhi toh hai na...
najma-bhaijaan mujhe udhar nhi jana ...
asad-kyun..?
najma-abbu ki wajah se...
asad-dekho najma..mein bhi tumeh udhar nhi bhejna chata ...mein toh isliye tumeh udhar bhej rha hun..kyunki zoya udhar jah rhe hai...aur tum toh jante ho ki uske saath kya hua tha...
aur tum chinta mat kro..udhar razia aur sidique nhi honge..nahi rashid honge...tum udhar sirf aur sirh apne bhai aur behno se milne jah rhe ho...aur dadi se bhi..chlo ab utho aur tayyar ho jao..aur haan tumhara project ho gya...
najma-nhi bhaijan thoda sa decoration..bacha hai..fir mera holiday homework complete ho jayega...
asad-ek kaam kro woh project mujhe dedo mein usko complete kr dunga
najma's jaw dropped hearing this...
najma-bhaijaan..app karenge
asad-kyun mein nhi kr skta
najma-nhi mtlb theek hai..thank u...
asad-ab file toh do...
najma-par app toh office jah rhe honge na..
asad-nhi tamatar 3 din tak chutte hai..aur meinn ghar pe baithe kya karoonga...office work bhi nhi hai...
najma then gives him the file...
asad-ab jao aur tayyar ho jao...
najma-ji...
then he went out of her room...
he entered his room nd saw a beautifull sight zoya was tryting to knot the dori but was unable to...then she felt somebody's hand on her back...
he was none other than asad...
zoya-thank u...
asad-welcum...
ap tayyar ho gye..toh ab chalen gifts car mein rakhen hai..
zoya-ji app tab tak najma ko bulaiye mein atte hun
asad nodded...
in the living room
asad-najma tum tayyar ho gye..
najma-ji bhaijaan waise zoya kahan hai.. lo ah gye...
then their came zoya who had a dupattat on her head as typical bahu she was going...
najma-woh zoya u look beautiful
zoya-u 2
najma-thanxx
asad-ab chalen...
najma nd zoya together -ji...
in the car...
zoya was sitting beside asad..
najma was at the back...
najma-bhaijaan itne gifts kiske liye...
asad-unn logon ke liye...maine sabke gifts ke upar naam likh diya hai...
najma-aur mere liye she pouted,,,⭐️
zoya-tamatar. tumhara project work kaaisa chal rha hai...
najam-zoya mere project work complete ho gya hai..aur joh decorations hai...wooh bhaijaan kar denge she said happily...
zoya-gr8...
then they reached sidique mansion...
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jatte chappals r welcumed...i know it was not a gud post but i ws really tired...doing my project work...but the next part will be awsum
precap-asya confession...nd romance

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