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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Thankyou sooo much everyone 😃

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: Zara_92
Thankyou sooo much everyone 😃

So when are we getting an update?

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: janestone6
So when are we getting an update?

InshAllah tomorrow or monday :D

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

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[QUOTE=Zara_92]

InshAllah tomorrow or monday :D[/QUOTE] Insha ALLAH

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Zoya woke up at 8 the next morning and my 8'45 she was on the breakfast table already...she wore her mother's black satin shirt wid black jeans ..her hair left open ... She managed to look prettier than the previous days ...

'Goodmorning Phuppi' zoya spoke smiling

'Morning Zoya ... U look beautiful Mashallah' Dilshad spoke kissing her forehead..

'Thankyou phuppi for making this shirt like before' she gave Dilshad a warm smile

Suddenly they heard someone clearing their throat..

'Morning Ammi' Asad spoke walking to the table

But the moment he noticed Zoya ...he was awestruck ... She looked beautiful rather ummm kinda hot in black .. Her face looked prettier than ever .. Did she put some extra effort or what ? He was wondering ...

'Morning Mr Khan' Zoya spoke all smiling

Asad was startled ... It was unusual of Zoya to wish him.. Normally she would either stare at him wid a cold look or they would be arguing..

'Umm..morning Miss Farooqui' he spoke in a low tone

Zoya smiled as they started wid the breakfast ..

Something caught Asad's attention ...

'Miss Farooqui why are u stuffing ur mouth ? Eat slowly' he said disgusted

'Mr Khan ...u have so much of work in ur office .. The whole day the phone keeps ringing .. What if I don't get time to eat???' She pouted

Her pout made Asad smile inwardly but he just nodded his head ..

At 9'15 exact Asad announced 'Time to leave '

Zoya had completely satisfied herself wid food by now .. She was more happy and contend...

They bid goodbye to Dilshad and left the house ...

Zoya sat in the car and closed the door softly .. She then put on her seatbelt ... She had decided today she's not going to give Mr Khan any chance of teasing her .. She couldn't take it anymore ..one moment he's so close to her and the next moment he treats her like trash 'Stay away from Najma' still rang in her ears ... Zoya thought...Its either HATE or WANT ! Both are not gonna go together .. And since want cannot be there so she'l just go wid the hate ..

Asad took the drivers seat .. He stared at Zoya through his shades .. She was looking straight ahead .. Didn't even acknowledge him.. He checked her seatbelt , everything was fine .. It irritated him.. Especially becoz she looked so irresistible today .. Tht black satin shirt of her's clutched to her body perfectly ... Oozing out all raw emotions out of him.. Asad shook his head and started driving ...

The road to the office was silent .. No words exchanged , just a few glimpses caught being exchanged ...

They both reached the office .. Asad entered his cabin and behind him entered Zoya wid his black coffee ..
She kept it on the table and was about to leave when Asad spoke

'Thanks '

She turned around Smiled and then left the cabin..

'What is wrong wid this woman??' He thought

'Anyways for least I could care ' he completed and proceeded wid his work ...

Zoya sat in her cabin thinking... She should be happy wid the way things are going .. Her 'stay-away' behaviour was working.. Neither they both were arguing nor they both ended up being close due to tht ... But she wasn't really happy ... 'Maybe it takes time' she thought ... But its the best ...she wasn't going to let him control her today ..

Asad was busy working when suddenly he glanced up at Zoya ... She was taking calls ... And trust Asad for the fact she looked beautiful ... He was helpless noticing the cute frown on her face suggesting someone irritating over the other end of the phone ... He couldn't feel enough grateful to perhaps himself for designing this office wid the glass wall shield btw his cabin and his secretary's .. He noticed her fringes irritating her constantly as she was blowing them side ways again and again ... For a second their eyes met ... But Zoya immediately withdrew .. now she had started to bother Asad .. Why is she holding back ?? Why isn't she being to her usual self ?? Tht brought them closer ..
suddenly he was interrupted by his phone ..he picked up...

'Mr Khan' came a melodious voice from across his cabin..

Asad cleared his throat ..'Yes ..Miss Farooqui'

'Mr Bilawal wants to talk to u urgently' she spoke in a stern voice

'What is so urgent ??? Can't he wait ??' His tone irritated , less wid Bilawal more wid Zoya...

'He's saying its very urgent . And he wishes to speak to u right away' she spoke sounding formal..

'Alright transfer' he replied

Within few seconds Mr Bilawal was on the phone..

'Yes Mr Bilawal .. What's so urgent ?' Asad spoke

'Mr Khan .. The meeting scheduled for tomorrow can we keep it now ? Like in an hour ?' He asked his voice shaking

'Are u out of ur senses ? I'm not here to adjust my time according to u people . If its due for tomorrow MEANS tomorrow' Asad snapped at him

'Mr...Khann... Hamzah sir is travelling out of town tomorrow .. Its urgent.. Please try understanding ... Its important for the deal .. I can't do the meeting widout him' Bilawal stammered..

Asad shook his head is disappointment .. These uber Rich irritating businessmen were gettin on his nerves .. But this 200cr deal was more imp than Hamzah's nosy tactics..

'Fine ! I'll be there in an hour' he banged the ph saying tht

He gestured to Zoya to come to the cabin.. She quickly got up and took a deep breath...

She was about to enter his cabin , when he opened the door .. But before they could collide Zoya jerked back instantly ...
Asad noticed it , it somehow just added to his irritation more n more ...

'What happened Mr Khan?' She asked

'Ur coming wid me for the meeting' he ordered and started walking ahead ..

Zoya rolled her eyes for a second .. And followed him.. Her heart feeling something unusual..she was going to attend an official meeting tht too Mr Khan..

As they both sat in the car .. Zoya once again started reciting her kalmas .. While Asad stealing glances at her .. Her soft lips naturally pouting were soo inviting .. She looked Adorable ...
Suddenly Zoya looked at him.. Asad instantly felt embarassed ..he looked away ..

Zoya was scared of her first meeting ..
'Mr...Khan' she stammered

He finally gave her a 'what?' Look..

'Umm...wh..what do I have to do in the meeting?' She asked

'Sit besides me' he replied looking away..

Zoya's eyes got wide in shock .. 'Is tht it???' She thought

'U mean ...I have nothing to do in the meeting ?? Then why m I going wid u?' She asked feeling highly annoyed

'Becoz ur my secretary and ur suppose to accompany me wherever I go and whenever I go' he replied sternly..

Zoya frowned and looked away 'Allah! How I much hate him' she muttered under her breath..

The Car halted at a beautiful Black Glass building.. It was hugeee ... Till today Zoya thought only Asad had such a huge building .. But this building was huger than Asad's ..

As the both entered the building.. Zoya was completely baffled .. The whole interior was class apart .. Something tht can easily make anyone want to work here .. She scanned through the whole place ... Asad looked at her adoring the office through he corner of his eyes ..he felt irritated ..
They got in the lift .. And Asad pressed 12th floor..

'Umm Mr Khan?' She asked

'What is it now Miss Farooqui ???' He asked in a lil loud tone

'Actually ... Umm... Who owns this building ? I mean are we having a meeting wid the owner ?' She asked .. Her eyes gleaming ...

'Yes we are' he replied coldly ..

She nodded ..

'Ting' the lift door opened

The moment Zoya saw the corridor infront of her .. She could almost collapse .. There were beautiful paintings , showpieces ... She was sure of one thing .. Whoever owned this place had a really good taste ..

'Miss Farooqui if ur done admiring the office can we go ahead?' He asked startling Zoya ..

Zoya's face got red in embarassment ..'Sorry..sure' she said and walked after him..

They both entered a huge conference room sort of a thing ... Zoya saw 2 men sitting there already .. One was facing her .. And the other one had his back facing her ..

The one facing her stood up ..

'Good afternoon Mr Khan' the man spoke

He was in his mid 40's .. But nevertheless he had an aura ..

'GoodAfternoon Mr Bilawal' Asad replied shaking hands wid him..

'Ohhh he's the one who called ... Allah Miyan he owns such a huge building and I spoke to him like trash' she bit her lower lip..

'She's my secretary Miss Farooqui'

'And Miss Farooqui this is Mr Bilawal' Asad introduced both of them..

Zoya smiled 'nice to meet u Mr...'
She was about to complete

When the other man stood up and faced them...

Zoya's jaw dropped .. There stood a tall handsome man .. In his late 20's maybe .. He was as tall as Mr Khan ...fair and well built .. He had his hair falling on his forehead almost making him look cute .. But tht smirk wid which he stood up made him look handsome within seconds ..

'Asad...welcome' he spoke as he shook hands wid Asad

Zoya was surprised . This was the first time she saw someone addressing Mr Khan as Asad ofcourse after phuppi..

'Friends ?' She thought

'Hamzah !! How have u been?' Asad replied almost forcing a sarcastic smile..

'Not really friends' Zoya rolled her eyes

'Oopss ! Looks like we have someone new here ' he spoke smirking looking at zoya ..

Zoya's face almost radiated heat ..

'She's MY secretary ' Asad spoke stressing on 'MY'

'Hello .. I'm Hamzah Haayat' he extended his hand to Zoya

And thts when it struck her , the building she entered was named 'Haayat Towers'

'Allah Miyan !! He owns this building???' Zoya almost caught her breath..

'I'm...Z...Zoya ...Farooqui' she almost stammered shaking hands wid Hamzah..

'Please to meet u Zoya' he spoke caressing her palm wid his thumb..

It caught Asad's attention.. He felt a strange sensation rising his body ..

'Can we start the meeting?' He spoke aloud

And Zoya instantly jerked her hand away

Hamzah looked at Asad 'Ofcourse' he said wid an evil smile ..

The meeting proceeded ..and it was mostly Mr Bilawal who was giving a presentation .. More like he was proposing a deal to Mr Khan..

But Hamzah's eyes were continously on the beauty sitting infront of him.. Zoya .. He was staring at her blatantly .. And whenever Zoya used to look at him he used to smirk.. Zoya almost sank in her chair looking at his smirk..
Asad saw Hamzah Staring at Zoya and Zoya giving him looks back.. It made his grip tighten on the leather chair he was sitting.. Anger spread in his body like fire .. 'How dare he look at MY secretary like that?' Asad found himself thinking..

Then the meeting ended ...

'So Mr Khan? What do u think?' Bilawal asked

Even before the meetin could happen Asad had decided to seal this deal .. It was for 200cr ..his biggest deal ever .. He wouldn't scrap it for anything..

'We're on Mr Bilawal' Asad shook hands wid him.

'Great !! Finally I get the chance to work wid Asad Ahmed Khan' Hamzah spoke hugging him..

Asad fists tightened as he hugged him back .. Zoya noticed the uneasiness on asad's face ..

'Rivals???' She muttered

'Why would rivals work together?'

'So Zoyaaa are u happy wid the deal?' Hamzah turned to look at Zoya smiling..

'Oh yeah ofcourse ! Its a great deal .. Wid lots of money' she spoke flustering

Hamzah gave a small laugh 'Asad u have quite a secretary this time.. She's good' he spoke

It was getting too much for Asad now .. His body was radiating jealousy inform of heat .. Especially becoz Zoya was smiling at Hamzah.. Asad knew Hamzah was a charmer wid girls .. Bragging about his business which ws apparently given like a cake to him by his dad ..he annoyed Asad more becoz he was flirting wid the girl who awoke desires in Asad ...

'we'l take a leave now' Asad spoke sternly trying hard not to lose control and break Hamzah's face

'wait a minute Asad ! ' Hamzah spoke

They both turned ..

'Zoya ..can I have the pleasure to dine wid this beautiful girl?' Hamzah asked giving a million dollar smile tht melted Zoya ...

Though her plans were different .. The reason she was giving in to Hamzah was so tht she could avoid Mr Khan.. Avoid his confused state of mind ..

Suddenly Zoya felt a squeeze on her hand... She turned to look Asad's red face in anger .. His hand squeezing Zoya's .. It was much evident he was signaling a 'NO' ..

'Yes ofcourse' Zoya replied

Asad instantly left her hand.. Before his body would explode he abruplty left the room..

'Ohh I'm grateful!! I'll pick u up at 9?' He asked

'Sure' zoya said and left the room..

She saw Asad waiting for the lift door to open .. She noticed his Jaws clenching and she knew she was going to be butchered for saying yes to Hamzah... But why the hell should she let him dominate her ? Does he even have a right to do tht ??? Zoya took a deep breath and stood besides Asad waiting for the lift ..

The moment the lift door opened ..Asad dragged Zoya inside .. And pressed the 30th Floor ...

Zoya stared at him wid shocked eyes !!
'Mr Khan what's wrong wid u??' She asked

Asad held her wrist and pushed her to the wall ... 'What's wrong wid me ? What's wrong wid u Miss Farooqui???' He asked staring right into her eyes..

For a second Zoya felt her whole body ablaze .. As she noticed the fire in Asad's eyes .. But she was not going to let him dominate her..

'Nothing is wrong wid me Mr Khan' she replied trying to move away ..

But Asad blocked her wid both his hands ..pinning them on the wall ..he inched closer to her ..as Zoya tried to struggle .. He caught both her hands and turned her around , her back facing him as he pushed her against the wall , holding both her wrists at her back..
He neared to her ear 'don't u dare walk out on me ! Why did u say yes to Hamzah?'
As he spoke his lips brushed across Zoya's ear.. Making her close her eyes due to the intensity btw them.. This is what she was trying to ignore since morning .. Becoz she knew she won't be able to handle being so close to him.. She knew she would just lose it all..but she managed to maintain her compose ..

'I'm not ur personal property Mr Khan..I'll do what I please' she replied struggling wid her hand..

Her reply intrigued Asad more n more .. No one dared to Speak to him like tht ..

He turned her around and blocked her again.. He crushed his body on her's .. Zoya gasped due to the closeness .. Not wanting to face Asad's fierce eyes she turned to other side ..
Asad brought his lips near her neck .. He could see the goosebumps rising on her neck .. And he knew she would give in .. He loved the effect he has on her ..

'Yes ur my personal property ..becoz I hired u' Asad spoke brushing her neck wid his lips..

Zoya's body instantly arched.. She found herself falling weak under his dominance .. But NO ! Zoya u can't fall weak .. Its ur life .. Asad Ahmed Khan is no one to control it..

'Its my life Mr Khan..ur no one to control' she replied staring right into her eyes ..

Asad's Jaw clenched hard now ... This girl was gettin beyond her limits now ! No one refuses Asad Ahmed Khan..

Just when he was about to speak .. The 'ting' sound made him jerk off ..

The lift door opened at the 30th floor .. Zoya sighed in relief .. But her relief was short lived as no one entered the lift and Asad pressed the button of 1st floor ..

'More torture' Zoya took a deep breath...
She will still in her position..

Her heartbeat racing wid every inch of Step Asad took towards her ..
Before Zoya could blink .. She found Asad's hands gripping on her waist .. He pulled her closer to him.. And squeezed her firm waist through her satin shirt .. Zoya's eyes instantly closed .. Her chest started heaving .. Asad noticed her breathin becoming rhythmic as he started nearing her lips..
Zoya felt his breathing on her lips .. And she knew .. He was going to kiss her ..now ..Asad Ahmed Khan was going to kiss her now ... She stopped breathing ... He again pressed her waist .. Zoya's heart thumped out of her chest ... Slowly she parted her lips .. Asad was an inch away from Zoya's lips..

'Ur NOT going wid Hamzah' he spoke against her lips ..

Zoya's eyes shot open as she heard tht .. Her heart ached .. This man will never change .. She thought...they were ...going...to...kiss...but NO he can never get over his ego..

Zoya's pushed him away ..

Her body paining .. Due to the rush she felt a minute ago wich was destroyed deeply due to Asad's ego ..

'I'm going wid Hamzah Mr Khan' she spoke loudly...wid rage in her eyes

Asad's anger had no limit now...he banged his fists hard on the wall of the lift ...making Zoya fear as tears brimmed in her eyes...

"GET LOST" he shouted

"ting" and the lift door opened ...

NOTE - i would like to Thank "Nupsie" aka Noopur for giving me suggestions for this update ... ThankYou soo much Noopur🤗

i would also like to thank my friends "Natasha" , "Sadia" and "Fazia" for constantly motivating me to write this update!!🤗

and lastly A BIG THANKS TO ALL OF U READERS for liking and commenting on my work ..😃

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sadia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Unres!

Hayeee Zara! Maar Daala. Itni HOT updates kyun deti ho yaar? ☺️ 😆 Jk, keep us giving even more hot updates. and you are too sweet to mention our names at the end. Thank You! 🤗 😳

and coming back to the update I loved it as always. The whole update actually reminded me of Pachas Rang. 😆 The effect and everything. As i told you before too that Asad is so Tharki. 🤣 i love this side of him. The elevator part was just... ☺️ EXTREMELY Breathtaking. I can't wait to know if Zoya would actually go on a date with Hamzah or not. I don't think Asad will let her go and i can just imagine his anger when he sees Zoya all "Saj Dhaj" ke going shoing to the date. The curiosity is killing me. You torture us everytime like this. 😆

Update soon. 😳 even though i know i don't have to say this, as you work so hard to give us such hot updates everyday anyway. 🤗 LOVE YOU!

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Okay first things first ! It is an awesome update and you know I will always be honest with you 😳

SO get it in your head okay girl !

Black jeez I am sure she looked HOT Love that colour 😆

She was so sweet and it made me smile when she stuffed herself 😳😆 she is such a cutie !

Yes Asad you have to try harder this seat belt and door not properly shut wont work for long find other ways to touch her 😳

Okay so office was all good and then bam JEALOUSY !!

Dont we just love elevators 🤣

She did the right thing by accepting the dinner offer he does not own her so what she is his personal secretary but that is only 9-5 after that its her wish what she does. She is answerable to DIlshad as she is her guest and clearly not Asad's.

But this guy Hamzah well calls for trouble lol but his description just made me imagine Karan Wahi for some reason 😆

Anyway I wont scrutinise any more 😳 Make sure Zoya dresses HOT for the date !!

I would love her to blow Asad's mind and then we could get 18+ scenes 😆

Oh Girl you are awesome !!

Love you ❤️

Edited by Naughtynatty - 12 years ago

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CupofCoffeee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

oh em jeee Zara...It was the Awesomeee-est Update...I loved it soo soo much!!! 🤗

I just loved the way Zoya treated him rigt from the morning, making him restless, angry, curious, n more n more attracted towards her😆

n its true...Men get Mad wen u ignore them for no particular reason😆

Zoya in black wud hav just been awesome...I cud so imagine her in black

n Asad noticed each n every action of hers n then he smiles secretly thats so so cute...

n I loved the fact that he has a Glass wall shield n he keeps staring at her every now n then...all this is just so cute😆

okay so Zoya was mesmerized by the bulding n the interiors n all n also by Hamzah😲😆 Enough to make Asad go mad with jealousy!😆 btw Hamzah guy was too much😆

I just loved loved loved the last part where he squeezes her hand but she still says yes n then he drags her to the top floor n OMG watever happens there was just Mind Bloowwwinnng!!

It was hawwwt, intense, passionate, n everythin else thats needed😳

Zoya was dying to get kissed by him n he didn't ☺️ OMG Zoya wants to b kissed by Asad Ahmed Khan☺️😆 n wats with Asad that "No oone refuses AAK", this man needs a lesson, Zoya style lesson 😎😆

I just loved this update very much I am dying to read how u continue this n wat happens next, with whom Zoya goes on a date n how does Asad controls himself😛😆

I just love this ignorance, jealousy, insecurity, angst, passion wali feelings along with DESIRES in ur story[lL]

Love You for this amazing update you are just Awesome 🤗

Sorry for the super long comment😃

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago