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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

OMG I love this update. Zoya is so sweet :D
What with Najam. The mystery is already killing me.
Asad is Asad he is never going to change. Btw will Asad ever come to know Zoya is the same girl he saw sitting on the bench?

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: janestone6
OMG I love this update. Zoya is so sweet :D
What with Najam. The mystery is already killing me.
Asad is Asad he is never going to change. Btw will Asad ever come to know Zoya is the same girl he saw sitting on the bench?

ThankYou sooo muchh !! 😃
And yesss someday he will 😛

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Amazing update... Loved it like anything.. I am curious to know what is with Najma.. I am sure something very bad happened to her.. This is the reason she is so broken...

Asya.. just a small encounter of them make my feet feel like jelly.. They are so cute.. And, they turn out their moments to be more romantic and asya=-licious...

Loved this story and love the update.

Do continue soon.

Dee

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Amazing update... Loved it like anything.. I am curious to know what is with Najma.. I am sure something very bad happened to her.. This is the reason she is so broken...

Asya.. just a small encounter of them make my feet feel like jelly.. They are so cute.. And, they turn out their moments to be more romantic and asya=-licious...

Loved this story and love the update.

Do continue soon.

Dee

Awww ThankYou sooo muchhh 😃

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JJN

@JJyoN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Love your story can't wait for the next update.

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snehasya

@snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

its just my point of view your updates name resembles with every character not only asad and zoya

dilshad has the desire to see her kids happy but najmas tragedy tore her desire

zoya desires love she got but she didn't valued and now she is missing warmth in her life

asad wants a perfect happy life for his mother and sister and he is dumping his desired raised in him towards zoya

the affection the pull he feels towards zoya your each and every update moves around each and every character they are linked in such way that they have an importance of themselves and no one is ignored or felt like this could have been avoided really love the way you portray the connectivity between asad and zoya even before they now their soul, mind and body knows this is a perfect match for them selves

waiting eagerly for a long update which is full of emotions and love and longed desire meant to be tore ...loved it

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Another compliments image: (skateboard_distort) for MySpace from ChromaLuna

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

awww guys loved ur comments 🤗

Esp urs snehalparab ..seems like u analysed the correct meaning of my FF 😃

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Amazing update!!! Loved it so much! He's such an ass! Poor Zoya was hungry all day! And I wonder what happened to Najma?!? o.O I hope she wasn't raped or something!