FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2)

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

what abeautiful update
awesome hmmm👏
the seatbelt one was breathtaking so goood
u write very well zara kee pwriting these
luv themmm

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

That was fantastic!!
I am sure Asad never had such a PA!!!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

omg

that was very romatic

simply amaazing

when it ended i kept staring at the upadte wishing it would magically extend

but it didn't 😔

never mind

i know you'll update soon

this update was fantastic

love the effect the 2 have on each other

thx for the pm

update asap

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

I lovee it.plz plz plz plz continue soon

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

uprooting his desires..

banging his car not him...

he smiled..

whow what an update..love this..

hope there will be more of this off nok jhoks..

looking forward to read more hilarious scenes

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

WoW Zara SUPERB update...👏Loved it alot...❤️

This line crack me up..😉

"Its my car Miss Farooqui not me tht ur banging it so loudly" 😆😆

Love Zoya's fall in Asad's arms...😉

Loved their NOK-Jhoks...😛

That was purely AsYalicious update...

Continue soon with more of their nok jhoks...😳

Thnx for PM...

Mariam...

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

awww Thankyou all u guys ❤️ for ur amazing comments... I'm so glad u all liked it 😃

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giee

@giee

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Did I tell you how much I love this FF
babe the update was WOW 👏

I love how he feels guilty everytime he makes her cry
I love how she is affected by him
I love how he is affected by her
I love how his desires surface when he is close to her
I loved how he brushed back her strand of hair

And the best was that banging wala dialogue 😆

FABULOUS UPDATE ...please UPDATE SOON 😃

Edited by giee - 12 years ago