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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Zara ZARA ZARA! How how how do you write such romantic scenes beautifully? I loved the update. The whole door, falling, seat belt scene took my breath away. ☺️ 😆 i loved loved loved it.

And i swear this cracked me up just like Zoya.

'Its my car Miss Farooqui not me tht ur banging it so loudly ' he spoke widout thinking ..."

OH MY GOD! It reminded me our AT and the OS. 🤣

Btw amazing update! I am looking forward to more AsYalicious update. 😆 😆

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

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CupofCoffeee

@CupofCoffeee

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

OMG Zara...I was blushing like an idiot while reading the whole update☺️☺️...its just AMAZING...MINDBLOWING🤗

am loving Asad's naughtiness n his soft behavior towards Zoya☺️...n OMG again a fall-n catch scene...☺️

n Zoya's questions to him...shes so cuttee😆

He again n again comes close to her...n his DESIRES (I love each time u use this word😆) to come close to her, look at her...☺️

n the BSNGING bit was hilarious...🤣 I am in love with this all the New AAK😆

I just loved each bit of this update...amazing, awesome, outstanding😆

Love u for giving us such a wonderful update...worth the wait!!❤️

I wonder so much happened in one day, wat wil happen in the coming days😆

Waiting for more n more🤗

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

OH MAN U R SO GOOD IN WRITING ROMANTIC SCENES..ITS JUST BEAUTIFUL..I LOVE ASYA BICKERING AND THE BANG ON DIALOGUE IT REALLY CRACKED ME UP...ASAD IS SO NAUGHTY...I WONDER IF ITS STRIKING ZOYA THAT HE IS DOING IT ON PURPOSE...I WOULD LOVE TO SEE ONE SCENE WHERE ZOYA GET ON HIM FOR THIS ACT...😳

NICE UPDATE ZARA!!!👏

Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Edited baby ready now 😆

ZInky meri jaan 🤗 I blushed ☺️

Really you have this incredible talent of making us feel all emotions in one update !

Loved the Zoya DIlshad bond !

Zoya didnt eat anything all day Zara you forgot to feed her 🤣 You know I love food how could you do that to my Zoya 😆

Office romance was amazing and blush worthy 😳

Aww the ride back home seat belt and ofcourse before the door not being properly shut !

the banging bit was hilarious I actually laughed loud when I read it 😆

Dekhlo finally I absorbed it all 😳

Cant wait for the next update but I wont demand it jaldi aaj you have exhausted urself relax a bit now 😃

Edited by Naughtynatty - 12 years ago

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

res

im back!!!😆

ohhh dea it ws such a nice updt!!

loved asad zoya bickering ...

im sure d frst day of her job will be memorable 4 zoyaa... 😆

oh man... asad is sooo naughtyyy... ☺️

awwwsm updt dea...

AWWW u shouldnt hv stopped it here i ws scroling down to read more bt thn i saw UPDATE FINISH... 😭

PLEASEEE UPDT ASAP... 😳

tnxxx 4 D PM!!

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

so they are attracted to each other aha

now lets c wat happens

let the sparks fly

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Loved it please Continue soon :):):):):)

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Ilham

@Ilhamez

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Beautiful beautiful beautiful
Tnks for pm ,update sooon

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deedeez

@deedeez

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Oh God!!.. Just loved this update.. Sneaking out during my work hours to read this..😳.. I am officially addicted to this story..Thank you so much for the PM.. 🤗..