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CupofCoffeee

@CupofCoffeee

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

OMG...each update of urs brings some unexpected surprize for the readers!!😆

I never thought so much wud happen so soon😲

n this part reminded me of sumthing I am reading ryt now!! *u knw wat*😆

Asad knew it wasn't love at all and for tht matter not even close to liking ... But he definitely knew he possessed certain desires for this girl .. Maybe becoz her behaviour towards him intrigued him... Maybe becoz he failed at dominating her and wanted her to be dominated by him like every other woman he was ever with.. !

n Dilshad is such a sweetheart in ur story...she wud surely bring two of them togetha❤️

I loved this part as well Zara...🤗

I know a lot is gonna happen wen the two will be working togetha, m so excited to see how they manage being infront of each other in the office as well as at home😆...

OMG how is AAK gonna control himself...n Zoya too has some kind of attraction towards him...I wanna knw wat she exactly feels for him!!❤️

Awesome update once again!! Love Ya🤗

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

res

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bimar hone ke baad agar aisa update read karne ko milta hai to I am falling ill again !!

Now where do I start from pehli baat mein to teri fan bangayi 😆

No seriously awesome update had all elements in it !!

Asad frustrated cant get a secretary when his next secretary is sitting in his own house !

God I love Dilshad I wish I am as cool a mom as her when I become a mom 😆 (long term planning lol)

Okay coming the hotness quotient now wow bathrobe mein Zoya HWATTT and then Asad slips and falls on her and then hayee mujhe sharam aa gayi I was sharam se pani pani 😳

Cant wait for office romance now !

Ladki you are amazing !! Sorry my baby I couldnt update earlier but I did reserve on the first page 😛

Thanks for the pm and update soon 😳

Edited by Naughtynatty - 12 years ago

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome Update Zara...👏

Loved AsYa moments...

Finally both agreed to work together...

Waiting for next update what u hve in stores for us...😉

Continue soon...

Mariam...

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

she is gonna be with him 24/7

wow looking forward

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

where is the precap...we need fast update na... awesome

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

res
unres on next cmment

Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

awesome update
asya singing tu jahan mein wahan 😆
they are together forever
so cute update
next update sooon

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deedeez

@deedeez

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

This was such a fun update!..👏 The moment between Asad and Zoya was intense and pretty hot 😳.. I love it that Dilshad has unknowingly played cupid for them.. They'll be forced to stick together at work now.😆 .. Waiting to watch what happens next.. Thank you for the PM, please PM me for the next update as well...