Res
Sooo you're probably mad at me. So let me have it. Chappals, tomatoes, throw in some eggs tooo...
I didn't even Res for the last chapter.. and I'm Unressing for both NOWW
Chapter 11:
Where have you been hiding??? First of all THANK YOU for the looong updateee and second of all... can I please meet Zaroon?? He sounds a hell of alot more fun than Asad right nowww 😆
I loveed this! How Asad's jealousy was clouding his judgement and it kept him from showing her the sympathy that she needed about the whole airport issue with her Aapi and Jeeju.. and poor Zoya, living a lie (or at least she thinks so 😉) just to make them happy.. AND OMG my favourite part of Zaroon and Zoya's conversation was the part about why she married Asad, and how it was her parents' wish.. that was too good.. Asad feeling guilty over his hastiness in judging her intentions and her motives behind the nikaah. Good. This way, slowly but surely, he'll learn to understand her before judging.. I'm hoping LOL but I'm sure they'll have their problems. They wouldn't be out beloved Asya if they didn't.
The part of them both thinking about how this was sham, and how they we're both mentally wondering why it suddenly felt sad to be talking about divorce, and Zaroon coming to take her away.. silly people.. not even giving the marriage a chance consciously, just deciding it's not meant to be.
The dining room scene was tooo good. Poor Zoya, she's left everything behind for him, but his jealous rage doesn't let him treat her with the civility any newly wedded wife deserves, especially in an arranged marriage. The way you described her humiliation and tears was flawless, and I could picture it all.
And my favourite part of the entire update, of course, the best for last, Najma opening up to Zoya. It was a heart breaking yet incredibly beautiful scene. Their first scene bonding as sisters, and Zoya's first understanding of Asad and why he is the way he is. Of course she's Zoya, so she won't just be nice to him, but at least she'll understand his anger and where is stems from. That and his quiet and reserved nature.
I would say looking forward to the next update but... 😆
Chapter 12:
Asad, Asad, Asad. When will you learn that anger is not the answer? I love how he was thinking of her only, the whole time. It was so sweet. They'd only been married 24 hours, and he already couldn't stop thinking about her. Granted it was mostly out of guilt, but the fact that he worried so much about hurting her speaks volumes of how much he already cares for her.
I know Asad was hurt by her words at the airport, but I stand by Zoya. Yes she was a bit rude, but the man didn't even apologize for humiliating her. Although I guess that was his way of doing it (coming to the airport). Silly man, if he could've cancelled the meeting, then why didn't he? HIS EGO! Zoya is right, when they're together, their ego's have a mind of their own. 😆
AND OMG OMG OMG I WAS SO SCARED for Zooya!!! I was seriously afraid she might have ended hurt really badly. But thank god nothing like that happened. AND I LOVE LOVE LOVE how he was holding her and pacifying her when he pulled her back up for the abyss. It really was adorable. I love how he was trying to tease her and bicker with her to stop her from thinking about the fall and what could've happened. I'm sure part of that was to keep himself from thinking about it too. And her insistence to walk instead of him carrying her, I agree with Asad. It showed great courage. A little stubbornness 😆 but still brave and strong. I LOVED that he was acting like a proper husband at the hospital.. can't wait to see more of this Asad. AWW and how he carried her to the room and forced her to sleep on the bed. Haha his reasoning with her was so childish. But cute. And of course, who doesn't love the classic, "I'm making you comfortable, and didn't notice when I dozed off with you" type scene... too good. WONDERFUL EPISODE 😃 (you didn't think i forgot, did you 😛)
Hope this makes up for my horrendous mistake
NOW I can say it: PLEASE UPDATE SOON 🤣
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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