FF: Mangalpur Madness #2 - last part on pg 41 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
I like your writing. It's different. Just started your FF & I have to say It's amazing 😊
Update soon please.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: mochhug

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FOR ME!? 😲

I had to blink 3 times before I realized it was for me! you're too sweet! And aww my pleasure! You write so beautifully! I have to gush 😆

Ok now on to the story!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE how he was tying her doris and caressing her back.. and OMG how he whispers into her hair! Gave ME goosebumps. The way he pulled her into his chest was... AHHH! 😳 You're seriously so good with words that it had me imagining the whole scene like it was on TV .

I was also so happy with their conversation. So comfortable with each other, even though their physically burning 😆. I wish Asad would stop with the damn riddles. i know he doesn't like talking about things, but if he knows she knows, is it so hard for him to just say it once to make her happy? UGH. Confused and complicated man 🤣

Loved it hun, as always! I hope Zoya is successful in getting him to say it out loud 😃😃😃 I wonder what her methods will be 😛 At least Asad knows that she won't give in that easy, but then he also knows his effect on her 😆

Haha see! Your comment made me smile to myself again (: Thank you!! And yeah I'm tryna bring across the fact that he's a complicated person haha so he won't relent just like that (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha see! Your comment made me smile to myself again (: Thank you!! And yeah I'm tryna bring across the fact that he's a complicated person haha so he won't relent just like that (:


Well I'd say you're doing a fantastic job 😊 It's a different Asad in some senses, but it's the same Asad in others. And that's what I love about this story. It's like an alternate Qubool Hai, but with a little more of the romance we crave to see in the show Well at least for me 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Hello to all my lovely readers (:

It's with a very heavy heart that I write this. I'm going through some personal stuff right now, so I won't be updating this FF for a while. I thought to inform you guys since I usually update pretty quickly. It's just that I don't think I'll be able to put my heart into writing this when my heart itself is broken. Give me some time to get over it and stop feeling sorry for myself, and I promise to be back with a bang (:

Lovelots,
goingreen
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: goingreen

Hello to all my lovely readers (:

It's with a very heavy heart that I write this. I'm going through some personal stuff right now, so I won't be updating this FF for a while. I thought to inform you guys since I usually update pretty quickly. It's just that I don't think I'll be able to put my heart into writing this when my heart itself is broken. Give me some time to get over it and stop feeling sorry for myself, and I promise to be back with a bang (:

Lovelots,
goingreen

take all d time u need honey n hope u come back wid a bang!

watever probs u have, just say ALL IS WELL😳🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
take care... not going anywhere... we will be here went you get back with a BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Take your time love! We'll be waiting patiently for another wonderful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Take your time dear 😊 all the best and come back with a BANG! Will be waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey,.. Take as much time as you need. Will be waiting.. We ain't going anywhere... Hope you come out of your problem soon and come back with a bang. Do take care dear. Hope your fine.

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
we will be waiting 4 our friend 2 back 2 us...with double full bang...tc cr

pari

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