FF: Mangalpur Madness #2 - last part on pg 41

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Beautiful update! I hope Zoya gets him to reveal his feelings...hopefully another mangalpur fiasco doesn't happen 😆

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Res

FOR ME!? 😲

I had to blink 3 times before I realized it was for me! you're too sweet! And aww my pleasure! You write so beautifully! I have to gush 😆

Ok now on to the story!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE how he was tying her doris and caressing her back.. and OMG how he whispers into her hair! Gave ME goosebumps. The way he pulled her into his chest was... AHHH! 😳 You're seriously so good with words that it had me imagining the whole scene like it was on TV .

I was also so happy with their conversation. So comfortable with each other, even though their physically burning 😆. I wish Asad would stop with the damn riddles. i know he doesn't like talking about things, but if he knows she knows, is it so hard for him to just say it once to make her happy? UGH. Confused and complicated man 🤣

Loved it hun, as always! I hope Zoya is successful in getting him to say it out loud 😃😃😃 I wonder what her methods will be 😛 At least Asad knows that she won't give in that easy, but then he also knows his effect on her 😆

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

WOW...baarish ne to kamaal kar diya

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Oh, I hope she succeed soon. Waiting for the next update. Loved this chapter..

Dee

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Nai

@zoas91

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

this story is making me mad with anticipation... plz continue soon! and plz plz plz pm me when you update next!

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

How could u stop at this interesting point yaaar...it was such beautiful...i literlly got carried away...truly speaking i din feel as if i am reading, felt as if i am watching these scenes...

Continue soooner plzzz

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Kurup
How could u stop at this interesting point yaaar...it was such beautiful...i literlly got carried away...truly speaking i din feel as if i am reading, felt as if i am watching these scenes...

Continue soooner plzzz

Thank you!! That is really quite a compliment, because I am really trying to paint the picture I see in my head with my words, glad that it is indeed coming across (:

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Allah mia.. y did u stop at that time..?? like i read ur story in one go last nite n it had sumthin that i didnt skip a line or got bored... u r a beautiful writer... plzzz update soon.. n if u do pms then plz add me also to ur pm list... :)

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