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parthpathak31

@parthpathak31

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Asad and Zoya are exceptionally good n perfect couple 👍🏼

rocking update..

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Zoya is such a brave and intelligent girl. I wish I could be like her.
Next friday seems too long but would wait for it. Just loved this one :)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

Awesome update!! Zoya did not panic and acted so smart hiding herself at first and then she also knows about guns!! 😃

I loved it when Asad handled Tej and said 'Malak and Mr. Nair send their regards.'😆😆

And finally Asad admits Zoya is amazing and loved Zoya's reply to it!!

"You're just figuring that out now, Mr. Khan? And you call yourself an intelligent man."

I am in awe of your writing Paly!!👏👏

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

So what did you think of the story? Did you enjoy it? Do you want more? I'll post the epilogue and a sneak peak of ALL THE RIGHT MOVES next Friday. YES PLease

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Can i say YOU ARE THE WHO IS AHHMMAZZZINNGGG???

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

ohh my my my!!!!

U R A GENIUS MAN!!!

n zoya ur shadow!!!

asad's security system helped zoya a lot!!!!

aaah tht hug...was shooo lovely...!!!!!

zoya's knowledge of gun besides d internet knowledge is worth applauding!!!!

I mean awestruck man!!!! fab update!!!!

tnx 4 d PM!!!

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rashi

@rashimusiclife

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

awssooommmee updatee.. :D :D

in ur story..zoya never fails to surprise me..!!!!!

what she doesnt kw... she is the best at computers.. now guns too 😆

SUPERWOMAN SHE IS.. 😃

but she always needs SUPERMAN ASAD.. to get her out of troubles... 😆

cheers to our.. SUPER COUPLE 😳😆

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

this was amazing and loved each and every part of it and the way zoya shot and revealed her efficiency abou guns was the shock and loved he way she did that all I mean super impressed she is intellingent she is brave she is just too good I love her yaar and asad he is the hero and your update is fabulous I am running out of words but it was awesome awesome please do write more and more love reading it don't end it and thanks a ton for pm really i enjoy this more than anything