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Posted: 11 years ago
Woww. I didn't realize Surita was trying to get Zoya's codes but i though something was off with the coffee thing. Plz updatee sooonn
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dayyum! One very good chapter. Loved it...getting so intense!
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Posted: 11 years ago

This chapter gave me ONE of the MOST BIGGEST shock of my life...!!! 😲 lol It was Awe-SOME...so full of surprises... mind blowing...Wow...😲

I loved the start...Dilshaad and Zoya conversation...How Dilshaad tried to make her see what Asad was trying to do...that Zoya IS family to him...A very sweet conversation...love their relationship...and love how motherly Dilshad is...😳

Haha, Dev under the effect of Dilshads silent rebuke...🤪 That is what that lil thing needed...If that silent rebuke can make Asad Ahmed Khan forget his Sher-giri then who is he...?? 😆

Finally Malak DID said that Asad isn't the only one...the feeling is mutual...

When Surita said Zoya, may I borrow your cell phone? I didn't suspect anything...even when Zoya said that the coffee tested awful...I don't suspect anything...only when she heard the thump...I said okey something is bad happening...And when Tejs the ever so expression less face cracked into a malicious smile..that smugness made me so afraid and creeped me out...🤢 God, he is scary...

But MUST say...Zoya is so so so smart...!!! She was on her way to make her Mr.Khan know that she is in trouble...to come and save his musibat...😆

Asad Ahemd Khan is something...when he read the "SYSTEM SHUTDOWN" message..he thought that his phone is failing...🤣 lol and when when Presad came in, all panicked and said "Sir,the system shut itself down. he just simply looked at his cell phone and said "No, my phone is working..." 🤪 lol My God, can he get more adorable than this...?? 😳 lol

Love the way he gets worried for his Musibat...and with saying "This is a waste of time. I'm going over there." He is trying to do what he is good at...to understand all that technology and digital world is out of his reach...Not doing something makes him more anxious than anything else...It was making me anxious...

Oh, Boy...Tej is going to regret holding a gun to Zoya's temple for his WHOLE existence...Asad will make sure of that...😈 lol

Now Shocks:-

Shock No'1) Malak...He is an innocent...?? GOD, really...?? 😲 STILL I don't like him...even though he was'nt trying to trap Zoya or use her...I STILL don't like him...I mean he was there to ask her about her hacking codes almost every day...And he was being beaten up by Taj or Dev or whoever...He KNEW something was wrong...Its not possible that all those were just simple accidents or that he didn't know who was beating him up...HE KNEW...and he still was asking her about her hacking codes...?? He KNEW and he still let her come there and work with those people every day...and not only that...He was ponting finger at Asad when he was trying to make the office safe place as possible...calling him an overprotective and that she doesn't need his protection...that he was there to protect her...He was/IS at fault...and that is why I still want to Asad beat him up...😡

Shock No'2) Kesavan aka the old man is an innocent too...?? 😲 I mean I was sure that something was wrong with him...as after all he has Taj, the ex wrestler as a bodyguard and his right-hand man...I was kinda sure that he must be one of the main antagonist...And here he is the most innocent one...😲 Loved that he tried to save Zoya...!!!

Shock No'3 and the BIGGEST ONE) Surita...really...?? 😲 The thing only thing I thought about her was that Dev could be her that boyfrind whom bring and take her from the office...The woman who in the last chapter thought that they were creating a wall that has fire around office, is a mastermind...A MASTERMIND... 😲 I feel betrayed...The only person I like from Malak's office was Surita...Last time I was so confused that should I laugh or smile at her for being thoughtful for vegetation...and Now I found out that Women is the person who is behind all this...?? 😲

Suri darling, why you did do this to me... 🥺 lol

"The classic mistake," Zoya explains, "is that I underestimated a woman." The ending was perfect as always...😳

So this chapter was a mind blowing one...so full of surprises...after all these days I AM SHOCKED...😲
Edited by A.Hajnal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG you are amazing, what a write up, superb, you can write a movie script, too good.. Please update soon, I am totally hooked.. 😊 this was just mind blowing.. Hope Asad saves our Zoe..
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Posted: 11 years ago
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE NEXT ?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE NEXT ?


I plan to update this Friday but it depends on how my betas feel about the chapter. I've sent them the first draft and am waiting for their comments. I normally write three drafts before I post a chapter. I want to make sure you have clean, interesting chapters to read.

Please be patient with us!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PalyGirl


I plan to update this Friday but it depends on how my betas feel about the chapter. I've sent them the first draft and am waiting for their comments. I normally write three drafts before I post a chapter. I want to make sure you have clean, interesting chapters to read.

Please be patient with us!

wow

you surely make a lot of effort
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PalyGirl


I plan to update this Friday but it depends on how my betas feel about the chapter. I've sent them the first draft and am waiting for their comments. I normally write three drafts before I post a chapter. I want to make sure you have clean, interesting chapters to read.

Please be patient with us!

wow... you surely put a lot of effort
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow... you surely put a lot of effort


But it's worth it, isn't it? The story is so much easier to read if I write clearly with good grammar, complete sentences and proper spelling. It's really hard on my betas but they see the end is near. Two more chapters and the story will be complete. Aren't they just fabulous? 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PalyGirl


But it's worth it, isn't it? The story is so much easier to read if I write clearly with good grammar, complete sentences and proper spelling. It's really hard on my betas but they see the end is near. Two more chapters and the story will be complete. Aren't they just fabulous? 👏

i totally agree

your work is flawless

simply one of the best stories

i so love your work

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