FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

amazed what a twist I really didn't thought of surita as an option oh my god when I read the sentence she is mastermind a hurricane came in my stomach and I just shouted " how could she " just loved it I mean there was nothing sort of hint but you wrote it superb loved it to the infinity and thanks for pm dear really waiting for next part you bought me to the edge and really curious now for asad reaction and then zoyas

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

I really really like ur ff pls add me into in ur pm list pls pls pls.. N do pm do..u r an amazing writer..awesome updates loved them..keep it up :)

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

❤️ ❤️ "The classic mistake," Zoya explains, "is that I underestimated a woman." ❤️ ❤️

waiting for the next update

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

hey tis is superb...amazing...luv it...

beautifully written...

so dev was behind it all with kesavan n surita n malik is also with them n they are trying to get her codes...

luckly zoya manage to send to asad computer her webcsam on wats going on...

wonder will asad do n help zoya out...

u r a great n brilliant writer...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

so dev was behind it all with kesavan n surita n malik is also with them n they are trying to get her codes...

No, Malak and Kesavan are innocent - they were never involved. Most readers thought Malak was a bad guy because he and Asad are at heads with each other. Kesavan was too friendly and OTT with Zoya and Dilshad, which also put off readers. But either had any bad intentions against Zoya. It will make more sense in the next chapter.

Paly

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

You can't stop there!!!!!! Amazing update. Continue soon.

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

sarita...OMG..waiting 4 next part..thnks 4 d pm

pari

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Oh my God!! Wow *jumps up and down* this is BRILLIANT!! The way you built it up to eventually turn out like this, it's GREAT!! I can't believe it was Surita after all of that, Zoya is sooo smart, she figured everything out in a minute and was so fast that she even sent Asad the links to her website so he could see everything, she is just AMAZING!! I can't believe you stopped there, please update soon i'm too eager to read on and thank you for the pm!! x

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Loved it!

Surita is such a bitch!

Poor Malak! All along Asad and I thought he was bad!

Hope Zoya and Malak will be safe!

Update soon!:)

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Ruchika

@bruno567mars

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

Okay so that was sooo unexpected but why wouldn't Malak warn Zoya about the trouble she was in. Haha maybe I missed something. You should seriously publish a book with your own characters. Your writing is out of the world. Bet you'll be famous soon enough. 😃