Forgotten Love SS: COMPLETED!! Part 10 on page 31! - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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just now caught up with ur story. its amazing. continue soon plsss
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I read all the four chapters in one go!!!
Amazing!!!
I love this n need pm for this one!!!
I'm not worried about Farhan because I think he has an interest in Najma!!!
I loved Asad when he became angry at Farhan for flirting with his lil tamatar n to add to it Zoya thinks he's her fiance!!!
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SS Forgotten Love Part 5A:


Mujhe apne aap per control karna parega. Zoya ki kather. Lekin main usse quisse aur keh saat, quisse aur se itna kareeb hote way nahi dekh saakta hoon. I don't understand what's happening to me…is this what jealousy is? he wondered.

Asad knew that because of Zoya's condition and Farhan also being there, he was going to have a hard time, but he was ready to go through anything for Zoya.

Aur waise bi Farhan and Zoya sirf aur sirf dost hai. It's not like if Zoya's feelings are back then so are Farhan's right? …right? Frustrated by his own questions, Asad decided to take a little walk in his yard.

Stepping out of his room, Asad looked straight ahead, to Zoya's room. Her door was wide open and he saw her ballroom dancing with someone. To get a better view of the person, he moved a little. Asad clenched his fists and gritted his teeth as he realized who it was. Clenching his fists and gritting his teeth had become a reflex now that Farhan was here.

He was hurt and tried to look away but how could he just stand there, letting the love of his life dancing so closely with someone he despised?

This was too much for Asad now. Instead of walking away last time, he was gonna stop this romance right away.

Asad stormed into Zoya's room and the two just stared at him awkwardly.

"Uhh Farhan? Your phone's ringing outside. " he lied sheepishly, knowing very well that the phone ringing was his own.

Thanking Asad, Farhan rushed to living room and soon understood why he lied. He gave them some time to be alone before he interrupted.

Zoya crossed her arms.
"Lagta hai bahaut important call tha. Lekin yeh dance be toh bahaut important hai! After all I'll be doing it in mine and Farhan's engagement! Oh that reminds me! Mujhe Appi ko be batana parega ki main bilkul theek hoon aur woh humare saagai jald se jald kara they. Lekin usse pehele yeh dance be toh practice karna hai. Ya Allah ub main kiske sath practice karoongi? " she looked at Asad with a gleam in her eyes.

Asad was appreciating her beauty while she kept talking on, but he caught on to the last few words she said.
"Uhh I don't dance. "

Zoya groaned and sat on her bed.
"Allah Miya what's wrong with me? Of course you don't. Ab kitne boring hai Asad! Aap kya jaane dancing kishe kahete hai. " she subtly challenged him. She was just about to leave when Asad held her hand, recreating the scene of when they first danced.

With one hand, he turned on the music and with the other pulled Zoya close to him. Passionately dancing, he twirled her around which lead to a dip. Asad stared at her with love. To say her beauty was breathtaking would be an understatement; in fact it was life taking! There weren't enough words to describe what he was seeing.

Feeling a sense of nostalgia, Asad leaned close to Zoya's face and whispered, "Dance isse kahete hai Miss. Farooqui. " He added a smirk at the end. He twirled her around one more, making her sit on her bed and walked away after leaving her in shock.

But those lines had a bigger effect on Zoya. She started getting flashbacks of their dance months ago. She could see two unclear figures dancing and the guy saying the same lines that Asad had said to the other person. Zoya pressed her temples as she tried hard to remember everything. The image finally had some color creeping in and she realized it was Asad and herself. She gasped at this and fainted on her bed.

Asad was unaware of what was happening to Zoya and he smiled all the way back to his room. Farhan saw him coming out and decided they were done having their own private moment. He got up from the sofa, where he had been waiting for the two to be done, and went to Zoya's room.

"Zoya?" he called as he knocked
"Can I come in?"
Knowing his friend oops fiance as she liked to remember wouldn't mind, he walked in, surprised of what he found.

"Ya Allah! Zoya? Zoya kya hogia tumhe? Asad! Appi! Phoopi! Najma! Someone please call the doctor! " The four members he called rushed to Zoya's room where they were all shocked at Zoya's condition.

***Few minutes later***
"Farhan? Yeh sab kaise hooha? Zoya behoosh kaise hogaye? "

"I don't know Appi. Asad and Zoya were talking and when they were done, I went into her room and found Zoya unconscious. Shahid Asad aap ko kuch bata sakta hai. " Farhan replied, confused himself.

Everyone looked at Asad for some answers.

"Zoya toh theek thi jab main uske room say gaya tha. Patha nahi…"

The doctor came out of Zoya's room, after examining her.

"Doctor! Kya hua Zoya ko? Aaise kaise all of a sudden woh behoosh ho gaye?" Dilshaad asked, worried about the girl who was practically like her own daughter.

"Well she's conscious now but she needs some rest. If I'm not wrong, then unko kuch kuch yaad aara hai. I can't be sure why lekin unno ne kaha hai ke behoosh hone say pehle, unko flashbacks aarahe they. Miss. Farooqui ne in memories ko yaad karni ki bahaut koshish ki lekin woh behoosh ho gaye. " he replied, leading to everyone's face lighting up with hope.

"Zoya ki yaadash kya waapis aaje gi? " Najma asked excitedly.

"Well it's quite possible that either all of her memory or atleast some parts come back. " the doctor replied, not wanting to give them a false sense of hope just to be disappointed.

"But how did this happen all of a sudden? Unne flashbacks isse randomly kaise aa gaye? " she curiously asked. It made no sense to any of them.

Asad remembered how they were dancing. How he leaned close to Zoya's face and whispered, "Dance isse kahete hai Miss. Farooqui. "

He gasped in realization. That's it! That's why she fainted!

"I know what triggered her flashbacks! " Asad yelled a bit too loud.

With everyone staring at him, he knew that he couldn't tell everyone how he was dancing with her. Yes he was in love with her and everyone knew that, but dancing wasn't something he did. Asad didn't want everyone to see how the girl he once despised so much changed his whole lifestyle and behavior.

"Asad? Hum tumse kuch pooch rahe hai. Kya jante ho tum? " Dilshaad asked her son.

"Woh Ammi…" he couldn't find the words to tell everyone what happened.

"Kya Asad? Itna time kyu laga rahe ho batane mein? " Zeenat asked, now getting impatient.

"Woh jab main aur Zoya baat karahe they, thub maine kuch aaisa bola tha jo ki maine pehele be bola tha…before her accident." Asad said while looking at the ground.

"Aaisa kya bola tha aapne bhaijaan?" Najma teased him, in a tone that made everyone know why he didn't say exactly what. Asad blushed into a million shades of red. But luckily someone came to his rescue.

"Oh Najma! Baat jaan ki kya faaraq parne wala hai? We should just pray that Zoya remembers everything now. " Farhan replied putting his arm around Najma. Asad shot Farhan a thankful look but when he put his arm around Najma, he gave him his classic lion look.

Farhan quickly took his arm down and reassured Asad that no one would ask him any more questions about what happened.

The doctor confirmed that whatever Asad had told Zoya had probably triggered her flashbacks. He prescribed some medicines and left.

Everyone went in Zoya's room to see how she was doing.

"Zoya? Kaise ho tum ab? "
"Aap ko sab jaad aagaya kya? "
"Kya halath bana the tumne apni!"
Dilshaad, Najma, and Zeenat all asked at the same time.

While Farhan tried to get the three ladies to calm down, Asad took Najma with him to get Zoya's medicines. There was no way he was going to leave his little sister with that flirting freak.

When Asad and Najma came back, the three that stayed with Zoya told them that Zoya remembered parts of the events that occurred in the past two years, just as the doctor had said. She remembered why she came to India and how she ran away from her marriage with Akram. The things that she didn't remember were the most important things—calling off her engagement with Farhan and her relationship with her Mr. Khan.


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Edited by jazzmyn - 12 years ago
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SS Forgotten Love Part 5B:


***A few days later***
It has been as if Zoya never lost her memory. She was back to her joyful bubbly self. Nobody could even say that she had ever had memory loss. Nobody except Asad of course. Over these past few days, Zoya kept sticking to Farhan, still in the state of mind that she was going to be engaged to him. Asad interrupted quite a bit of their discussions out of jealousy but he was getting tired of this game now. Nothing he did helped Zoya get her full memory back and he gave up.

Asad got up from his room and went to get a glass of water. He heard some weird noises in Zoya room and decided to go check it out.

"Thank you so much Farhan! I seriously don't know what I would have done without you. " Asad heard Zoya mumble. His curiousity got the best of him and he wanted to know what his fiancee was thanking his enemy for.

Ok maybe he wasn't his enemy anymore…not after he kept saving Asad from embarrassing moments. But that didn't make Farhan his friend either. Maybe he could warm up to the guy…
Farhan's voice broke Asad out of his thoughts. He moved close to a place where he could see her and saw the two "friends" hugging.

"Anything for you Zoe. You know I'll always be there for you. " he pulled her close and stroked her hair while talking.

Warm up to the guy my foot! He keeps going so close to Zoya and Najma…there's no way we can ever be friends.

Without thinking, he knocked on the door. Farhan and Zoya broke out of the hug and sighed. They were used to Asad interrupting them.

"Sorry for interrupting…Farhan, Najma tumhe bulari hai. "

Hearing her name, Farhan practically ran out the door, nearly knocking Asad down. Asad mentally smacked himself.

Seriously? Najma out of all the names? I try to keep her away from that guy and instead keep pushing him towards her. he groaned

"Uh did you say something?" Zoya asked. She sat on her bed and started playing on her iPad.

"Um…woh…actually…sorry maine ek baar phir aap dono ko interrupt kia…woh…" Asad stuttered. Zoya always had this effect on him.

"Woh actually kya Asad?" she chuckled "Why are you so nervous? Anyways it's ok, don't worry about it. Y'know main itne khoshish kar rahi hoon Appi ko yeh saabit karne ki liye ki main ab bilkul theek hoon, lekin woh hai ki mere ek nahi soonthi. "

Asad opened his mouth to say that her Appi was absolutely right, but Zoya being Zoya didn't give him a chance to say anything. Instead she said something that made him speechless.

"…After all, meri aur Farhan ki saagai bi toh hone koh hai!" she smiled like a teenage girl in love.

Once again, she reminded Asad that she had no memory of him, of his love. The only person she remember was stupid Farhan.

"Actually that's what I wanted to talk to you about. Aap ki saagai Farhan ki sath toh…" he was prepared to tell her the truth today, no matter what the consequences.

***Najma's Room*** (the events in Najma's room took place at the same time as the events in Zoya's room)
"Najmaaa? Tumne mujhe bulaya? " Farhan singsonged as he made a dramatic entry in her room.

"Maine? Nahi toh. " Najma casually replied while texting.

I see what you did there Mr. Khan. Tum inte insecure kyu ho? Lagta hai ki mujhe tumse baat karni hi parige

"Well Najma darling since I'm already here we might as well talk about our lunch plans. "
Najma gasped and put her hands to her mouth.
"Kya hua? Bhool gaye? No worries. Kaal kaisa hai? Maine soona hai ki aas paas koi naaya Thai restaurant khoola hai. Vaahi jalte hai? " Farhan smiled at her.

"Oooh I love Thai food!" Najma squealed. "Theek hai. Aur uski baad ek movie! "

Farhan nodded. He knew she loved movies as much as him. It had been such a short time that he was here and he knew so much about Najma already.

As he walked out of Najma's room he looked back at her and grinned.
Asad Miya aap jithni be koshish karle mujhe Zoya se door karni ki, aap mujhe itne aur kareeb Najma ki paas laathe hai. he thought.

Farhan decided to see how much luck Asad was having with Zoya.
He walked over to Zoya's room and was shocked at hearing what Asad was about to say.

"Actually that's what I wanted to talk to you about. Aap ki saagai Farhan ki sath toh…"

"Uh Asad? Mujhe tumse mere business ki ek financial crisis ki baari main kuch baat karna chatha hoon. Can we talk in the yard? " Farhan interrupted. Out of all the people in the world, who had to come save him from telling the truth to Zoya, and in turn maybe keeping her health intact? Farhan.

Asad unwillingly walked with Farhan out of Zoya's room.
"Woh…actually… Aap kabhi be nahi badalege. " she chuckled after they left.

***In the yard***
"Asad I know what you're doing and I also know why you're doing it. Lekin tum Zoya ko sub kuch nahi bata saak they hai and you know that. Doctor neh kaaha tha ki is baar hum lucky they ki Zoya ko bahaut zayaatha effect nahi hua because of what you said. Aapne aap per control karo. "

"Oh toh tum uski sath dance karo, hug karo, joh maan me aaiya woh karo aur meh usse ek baar sach be nahi bol saktha? " Asad retorted but he knew that Farhan was right.

"Tum itne insecure kyu ho? " It was really important for Farhan to know why he was acting like this.

"Kyunki main Zoya say bahaubaat kar tha hoon. Islie hey. I know that Zoya starts everything but the least you could do is back off a little. " Asad replied.

Farhan put his hands up in surrender
"Ok Ok if that's what'll make you hate me little less. " Asad was surprised at this. "Don't be so shocked. Ab thak toh pura Bhopal jaanta hai ki tum mujhe kitna paasand karthe ho. "
Farhan was just about to leave when Asad stopped him.

"Farhan rukho ek aur baat hai. "
He closed his eyes and prepared himself for a long lecture.
"Um thank you for stopping me everytime I'm about to do something wrong. " Asad said sheepishly. He never thought there would be a day where he would thank Farhan but lately a lot of things were happening which he never thought would happen.

Farhan turned around.
"Bas? Koy lecture nahi? Wow Asad Miya kya baat hai. "

Asad smiled back at him.
"Well ek baat hai…"

Farhan groaned. He knew it was coming in some form or another.

"Najma se door row. Tum hamesha uske aas paas ghoom reh hote ho. Just stay away from my little sister. "

Farhan dramatically pouted. "Yeh kya baat hooey? Zoya se door I understand lekin Najma se door? " Farhan grinned mischievously and put his arm around Asad. "Haan! Yeh theek rehe ga. Tum Zoya ko choro aur main Najma ko choronga. Phir hum dono aapne kudh ke dostana baanege. " He put the word dostana in quotes.

Farhan laughed and walked away leaving a shocked Asad behind.
Zoya keh dost bilkul uski tara hai…absolutely crazy.


I know I promised a sooner update but this time I was really busy! 4th of July celebrations and then I had this impromptu audition for this dance company that's really really hard to get into. I practiced for days and I got in! And then I couldn't decide which way to take my story so I kept making changes and I'm also behind on all the pms I'll get to them soon! Im so sorry this time pakka promise i'll update faster. Plus its such a long update this time forgive me? Sorry of any and every mistakes I type fast and autocorrect changes most of the Hindi words. like and comment pleaseee
Edited by jazzmyn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read both parts. Very nice updates! Hope Zoya remembers Asad soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the updates...thanks for the PM
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I was smiling all the time!!!
Asad tries to keep Farhan away from Zoya but ends up bringing him close to Najma!!
Loved this Farhan guy!! He's good!!!
Asad aur Farhan ka dostana!!! 😆 too good!!!
N thank you for the pm!!!
Edited by mysticlover - 12 years ago
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awesome part
love it :D
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Hey amazing story loved it

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