Forgotten Love SS: COMPLETED!! Part 10 on page 31!

heyy guys here's my very first SS; I was going to make it an OS but I had so much to add! Anywayss this is dedicated to -ElmoFuj- Thank you so much for all your help! I hope you all enjoy and if u dont understand something, just ask! (I'm not the best at Hindi.)

Qubool Hai SS Forgotten Love

He held her hand and a tear escaped his eye.

"I'm so sorry." he whispered, "Main tumare baat kabhi nahi sunta hu. Khuda jaane mujhe kya ho jaata hai. I'm so used to being right, that I never let you speak and prove me wrong. Tum asse pelhi ho joh mujhe aur mere soch kho challenge kerthe ho. That's what I love about you, Zoya."

He heard a knock on the door and a nurse walked in.
"Sir, we need to keep Ms.Farooqui under observation for some time. Please wait outside."

Asad wiped his tears and headed out of the room. He turned back and had a look of guilt and regret on his face.

He felt a hand on his shoulder. Without turning he said, "Ammi dekho kya hogia Zoya kho. Sab mere galte hai. Sab mere galte..." he repeated again and again, breaking down more each time.

"Asad beta, chup ho jao. Kab se roh rhe ho. Tumare thabeut karab ho jae gi. She'll be alright, don't worry. Hum sab ki dua aur pyar hey nah uski sath? Zoya khe Allah Miyan kuch nahi hone dhege usku. " said Dilshaad with tears flowing from her eyes. "Waise hua kya tha? Kisne us bechari kha yeh haal banaya hai?"

Asad suddenly straighten up. The sadness and guilt in his eyes suddenly changed into flames of fury.

*Flashback*
"Mr. Khan I'm telling you. Tanveer khe irradey tek nahi hai. She has a motive for staying here. And I have a feeling that whatever's going wrong in this house is because of Tanveer" stated Zoya.

"WHAT?!?!" roared a surprised Asad. Zoya was always coming up with random things to say but she had never suspected anyone like this before.

"What what? Wohee joh aapne suna." Zoya was getting frustrated now.

"Ms.Farooqui aap jaanti hai aap kya bolre hai? Aap Tannu peh kaise illsam laga suckti hai? Shayd isleye woh aap khe samne uncomfortable hai." Asad rubbed his temples. He hated when Zoya went all Bond-girl on himmostly because she was always right and it lead to discovering something horrible.

Zoya moaned, "Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr. Khan? Just hear me out once. Aap humesha yeh hi karthe hai aur her mar main he saahe hoti hu. Mujhe nahi pata usne woh transactions kaha chupadia lekin main jaanti hu kuch toh bath hai." explained a frustrated Zoya and she stormed out the room.

"Yeh laraki pehle say pagal the aur ab mujhe be aaise banade gi." Asad mumbled to himself, "But maybe she's right leken kya Tannu yeh sab kar sak ti hai? Nain nain aur wase bhi Tannu kho yeh sab karke kya milega?"

***Several Days Later***
Dilshaad and Najma went shopping. Tanveer was supposedly at her friend's house and Asad was at office. Her Appi had some work and so Zoya was home alone.

Kitne bored ho gaye hu main. Chalo ek movie hi deklungi. Wow! Do Chor is on! I love that movie! she skipped around happily.
Arz kiya hai
Gar peh baithe baithe ho gaye thi bore...
Gar peh baithe baithe ho gaye thi bore...
T.V. on kiya aur dekaigay Do Chor!
Shukriya Shukriya" she said as she took several bows around the room.

Suddenly she heard noises; one from her room and another from upstairs.
Yah Allah yahan such main do chor hey kya?

She grabbed the remote and went to her room, aware of each and every sound. The noise led her to her closet. She gulped "Allah Mia please mujhe bacha le nah." Zoya opened the closet down with her eyes closed and screamed at the sight
To be continued

Sooo how was it? pure bakwas? time waste? please do honestly comment on how it was. If you would like me to continue please say so! oh and sorry for my bakwas shyri I tried but that was just a fail

😃

Part Two: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=6&#85586844 (page 6)


Part 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&PID=85980454&#85980454 (page 8)


Part 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=11&#86927044 (page 11)


Part 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&PID=87459787&#87459787 (page 13)


Part 6: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=15&#87776957 (Page 15)



Part 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=18&#90873021 (Page 18)


Part 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=23&#p91327352 (Page 23)

Note: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=26&#p92047774 (page 26)


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&TPN=27&#p93067451 (page 27)


Part 10: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3609258&PID=93942868&#p93942868 (page 31)

Yes i Like it
Its too goood not at all wasting of Time
Ofcourse u should continue i want to read the whole story 😉

Cliffhanger...uff...but its nice...do continue...and thanks for the pm

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE

interesting..continue soon..😊

Ofcourse u should continue i
want to read the whole story..i lykd ur shayari..plz pm me..

Great work dear!!! So all you have to do now is:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Jazzmyn dear you didn't have to dedicate this to me, sweets! 🤗 So sweet of you and i'm so happy to see your work.

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<b>it was wonderful and you have to continue soon because this is a cliffhanger! What exactly happened to Zoya? Who did it? Why is she in the hospital?? Contiiinnuuueee sooon!

Faiza❤️

haha well u tolerated me and my questions for so long it was the least I could do!