Forgotten Love SS: COMPLETED!! Part 10 on page 31! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Note: in part one, the last part takes place the next day but I changed it to a few days later. During this time, Zoya would continuously try to explain to Asad about Tanveer with proof but he wouldn't believe her as Tanveer manipulates the situation. My story has nothing to do with the current track. Also please do tell me if you don't understand something—there may be a few mistakes due to auto correct*
ughh I was going to post it today but my laptop crashed and I didn't save it and now there's no way to restore it. I'm so sorry I'll try to post it by Saturday
Edited by jazzmyn - 12 years ago
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Its seems so interesting
u should continue it
waiting dear update fast plz 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Y? Y? Y? Y u r doing ths to us? Oh nooo u cnt do ths! U cnt pause sch an amazn updt here! CONTINUE NOW R8 NOW! n please please PM me! Gosh i jst love readng bout zoya's life in danger n asad cryn 4 her! Thaaank u sooo sooo sooo much 4 writing ths n sharng it wid us!!!! :) it is hell intrstng dea! Please cntinue it now pleaaach! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT WAS SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

PLZZ PM ME 4D NEXT UPDATE...
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Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

Y? Y? Y? Y u r doing ths to us? Oh nooo u cnt do ths! U cnt pause sch an amazn updt here! CONTINUE NOW R8 NOW! n please please PM me! Gosh i jst love readng bout zoya's life in danger n asad cryn 4 her! Thaaank u sooo sooo sooo much 4 writing ths n sharng it wid us!!!! :) it is hell intrstng dea! Please cntinue it now pleaaach! :)


awww thank u but as I mentioned before it got deleted and now I have to write it all over again
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SS Forgotten Love: Part 2

"TUM? T-tum mere closet mein kya kareho T-Tanveer? A-aur yeh ch-chacu?" Zoya screamed.

Tanveer stepped out of the closet with a smirk on her face.

"Aaj tumare zindagi ka akhari din hai. No one can save you today" she grinned evilly.

"Chalo! Bahar chalo!" Tanveer ordered while pointing the knife at Zoya's face.

"Tanveer tum aesa kyu kare ho? Maine, hum sab neh, tumara kya begarda hai joh tum jeh sab…"

"Tumne kya begarda? Woh kon tha joh Asad koh mere kalaf saboot dikha rahe the? Ek baat kaan kolke sunlo Zoya, Asad is mine and mine only. Tum beche meh aayi aur ub toh tum mera pardafash ki peche pardi ho. Tumhe marna saroori hai." she said while coming closer to Zoya with her knife.

Smiling wickedly, Tanveer revealed everything she did, from trying to set the house on fire and planning with Razia to destroy them, to trying to gain Asad's sympathy.

Zoya was in tears after hearing how Tanveer tried to ruin everyone's lives but most importantly of those who mattered the most to her.

"Phoopi, Najma, Asad…in sab ki kya galti the? Tumhe joh karna tha mujhe kar the. Why did you have to hurt them too?" asked Zoya with anger steaming up in her eyes.

"That's because…"
Before Tanveer could finish, she followed to where Zoya was looking. They both had this confrontation thinking they were alone but it looked like they weren't.

There stood a man on the top of the stairs, with about a thousand emotions on his face.

Both ladies gasped.

"Mr. Khan?"
"Jammy"

They both looked at each other in realization; Tanveer with shock and Zoya with happiness.

"Mr. Khan! Aap yahan…?" asked Zoya while she ran up the stairs.
"Yeh Tanveer…"

"Meine sab sunlia hai aur police ko be phone kardea hai. Don't worry I'm with you Zoya. Always and forever" Asad comforted a shaking Zoya.

"Tannu mere bachpan ki dost. Friends usually give each other surprises but no one has given a surprise like this to their friend before." sarcastically clapping, he added "Tumne ek bachari ladki ki acting baut he khoob nebahe hai."

"Nahin Jammy. Aap hume galat samaj rahe…"

"Oh woh sab joh meine upne kaano tha ek misunderstanding tha?" tears had starting making their way out of his eyes. "You know Tanveer? Mein hamasha tumhe defend kartha tha. Jab bhi Zoya mujhe kuch batha thi tumare bare main, mein boltha tha ki Tannu toh mere bachpan ki dost hai. Woh yeh sab kaise kar sakthe hai? Aur aaj meine dekhlia aur sun be liya keh tumne kaise yeh sab kia hai." he spatted.

He turned Zoya and held her hand.

"I'm so sorry. Please forgive me."

They looked in each other's tear-filled eyes and tightly hugged each other.

Tanveer took advantage of this and stealthily went up the stairs, and stood behind them, creepily smiling at Zoya.

She was terrified and began to shake uncontrollable again. Asad realized that Tanveer was standing near them and he faced her, pushin Zoya behind himself.

Without saying anything he began slapping her.

"This one's for trying to hurt my family. This one's for lying. This one's for trying to hurt my Zoya." Zoya stared at Asad in shock while he continued to slap Tanveer for all her mistakes.

Tanveer screamed and pulled her knife out to stab Asad. He stared at her in shock, wondering if his so called bachpan ki dost would actually be able to stab him. Before Asad's thoughts could be answered, Zoya held her hand.

This one's for trying to hurt my Zoya

The words repeated again and again in her mind. They seemed like magic to her…giving her some newfound strength.

The two ladies struggled for the knife and before Asad could do anything, Tanveer pushed Zoya down the stairs.

"ZOYAAA!" a heart-broken Asad yelled, at the top of his lungs.

There went the rest of his world, crashing down the stairs while he could only helplessly watch.

Luckily the police saw all of this and arrested Tanveer and prepared to the mental institution. They also called an ambulance for Zoya, who kept floating in and out of consciousness.

At the hospital, Asad stayed by Zoya's side.

"I won't let anything happen to you. I promise Zoya. I promise" he whispered to her.

Zoya strained herself to stay conscious as the nurses were pushing her stretcher to a room.

"Aap ghar peh kyu the Mr. Khan? Aap toh office…" she struggled to say each word without being dragged back to the world of darkness.

"Woh…mein…"

No Asad. You'll have to answer her. You'll have to tell her why you lied and stayed at home without anyone knowing he thought to himself.

He took a deep breath.

"Main waha islie tha kyunki main aap koh surprise dena tha. Main…main aap koh yeh batana tha ki…ki…I love you Zoya I've always have and always will love you." Asad took another deep breath.

I did it! I actually did it!

He looked at Zoya for a reaction. She was smiling and looking like she was on top of the world. And with this smile, she slipped back into that dark world.



ok ok I'm sorry it took forever: Finals, it got deleted right after I was done ughh so many obstacles! comment away people! I'll try to update the next part soon.
Edited by jazzmyn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really good PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND PLZZZ PM ME ONCE U UPDATE :):):):)
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Originally posted by: princess101

This is really good PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND PLZZZ PM ME ONCE U UPDATE :):):):)


thank u! glad u liked it!

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