SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

kamal ka hai yr... Cont soon

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Mishali Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Why did you stop there??? Now I'm wondering and imagining what is going to happen next!!! Please update the next part soon!!!!

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teddyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I loved it! I like the storyline and this first chapter was amazing! I liked that it was funny and then intense in the end! Don't leave me hanging here! Update soon and I prefer long chapters! They make me happy :D

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Nandini

@Nandini25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow nyc part. Poor Asad. Bura fasa!

Akram! Again! Oh no!

w8ing fr the nxt part.

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

OMG Ranjana! Sooo glad to see you on this forum... idk do you even remember me? Lol Its Fizza from the DEK Forum :p Anyways this was amazingg and now I can't wait to read the next part so pleasee do continue soon girl and pleasee pm me if possible! Thanks in aadvancee :))

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delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

This is good! Update soon :)

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day_lily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Interesting Update!!

Pls do continue soon...

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whoops

@whoops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Loved it! 😃

Nice concept, and very relate-able too!

You should have seen my expression when i read the title ☺️

Keep writing, we need more of this 😆

Personally I love loong updates, but if that means you'll update lesser, toh fir shorter hi theek hai! :P

I think this size or a little more will be perfect.

If you pm, then pm me as well 😊

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Its interesting and nicely written.. i think i remember reading your FFs at DEK forum.. you used to write very well... so do continue this Dear.. im sure everyone here will love your writing.😃