New FF: Tere Pyaar Mein Fanaa ChapterOne/Page5

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I couldn't help myself, had to start this. It's different from the original QH, although I've kept the names and characters; however the relationships are different. I didn't know how to start so it's not too great, but please do have a read...

New FF: Tere Pyaar Mein Fanaa

She ran as fast as she could, away from the cruel world and its oppressors. The air brushed her face wiping away her tears as she moved forward, the further she went; the lighter she felt. She let the air caress her hair, making it dance freely behind her as her duppata swayed crazily. Her feet moved in sync as she carried on running finally stopping and falling on her knees. She steadied her breathing as she closed her eyes. She felt the fresh breeze against her skin, she tilt her head sideways where it touched her. She listened as the waters splashed against the rocks. A smile formed on her lips as she slowly opened her eyes and smiled. This was her favourite place, a place where she could just forget her pain and be happy... She moved her eyes taking in the scenery in front of her, she watched as the trees swayed side to side, the birds singing choruses dancing in synchronisation in the clear blue sky and the deep blue river flowing in one direction despite the wind trying to stop it from achieving its purpose. How she wished she could be the river; she needed a purpose. How she wished she was a bird; she wanted to belong. How she wished she could be a tree; she wanted to be surrounded by her own. A lone tear peeped from her eyes.
She was an orphan trying to live her life despite her setbacks; every time she thinks she has found life, she is forced to drop back again. The teacher, who teaches the people around her to live, has lost her way trying to find her destination. She was happy she was blessed with some family; her uncle, aunty and her little cousin sister, however it's always them that makes her realise how alone she actually is in this world. Zoya has wished for nothing but to belong. She wanted a family of her own; to complete her incomplete self.

He grunted lightly as the knife brushed past his stomach, he held the attacker's wrist and twisted it. The knife fell to the ground with a clang as the guy fell back on to the floor after a full blow to his face. He looked up helplessly as the guy now had the advantage. He stared down at him, the attacker had now become the victim, he chuckled inawardly,

'Mujhe double cross karne log pasand nahi! Agar baawafadaar kutta rehte toh aise nahi hota' he shook his head side wards as a smirk played on his lips. He walked away turning his back towards him, he took his gun out and pointed it behind him. The gunshots echoed into the distance as the victim's screams filled the air. Seconds later, everything was silent again. He stared ahead as he sighed heavily; he walked off with his gang without sparing the dead body a single glance.

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Each of them searching for a reason to live... They were both living but both were like a ship without a compass; they had no purpose. One knows how to give life and other only knows how to take life. What will happen when their paths cross? Will the wind be able to take out the fire? This is a simple love story of a beautiful Zoya, who is simple in her nature, who knows how to hide her deepest sorrows behind her one genuine smile. The other is a gangster whose harsh past has made him stone hearted; he only knows how to wipe smiles of the faces of those who cross him. Asad Ahmed Khan has only one funda; live only for yourself. What happens when the love of his life enters and threatens to pull him out of his facade? Will he be able to overcome the responsibilities of a lover or will she too have to face the consequences of crossing his path?

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Okay horrendous I know, nothing too exciting but I really wanted to pen this story down. It was in my mind for some time, the starting isn't great and I'm not good with this stuff, but I want to take this challenge on. Please tell me how this is, if you guys like it then I will continue this one side by side with Ek Nikaah Aisa Bhi. If you don't, I will discontinue and update my MEMORIES FF.

Please leave your feedbacks behind beautifuls.

My other works:

Ek Nikaah Aisa Bhi
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3528028/ff-ek-nikaah-aisa-bhi-link-to-thread-two


Memories- Tug of War (Just started this, will start writing and posting from next week, promise!)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3598223/new-ff-memories-a-tug-of-war-chapter7-page35


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loved it soo very much. Pls continue
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Awesome job! 👍🏼 Beautiful descriptions and nice wording! 😳 It was lovely! Continue plzzz! 😉
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Sorry it took so long! Loved it! Please continue soon! Very interesting plot.. one of the few stories I've seen here where Asad is not a gentleman. But definitely the first one in which he's not a business tycoon or a construction mogul. But loved it! It shows just how opposite they are, yet how perfect they are for each other :)

Please PM me! 😛

Edited: Just realized that I saw this right after I finished Ek Nikaah Aisa Bhi and I didn't realize it was yours! LOL. We now I'm EVEN MORE excited to get an update from you 😃
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Amazing start! Please continue!! LOL Now you'll have three on your plate! Loved it! Awesome concept!
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Wow..nice concept...waitng 4 d part...update soon..thnks 4 pm..
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gr8 concept dear

plz continue ...
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This has the concept of my dream!!!!


Please make Asad a 'one woman man' in dis ff...All others who hav Aasd as a grey character, hav denoted Asad as an womaniser..

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very nice start👏do continue😳

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