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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

<font color="#9900FF">simply amazing i totally love this.lease continue soon and pm me.
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Thanks Dear for reading and loving it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ranz

This is a Pakistani Serial!!!!

yes dear it is inspired from that Pakistani serial but I have made lots of changes in it to add more and more Islamic teachings in it!:-)

On first page I have clearly given credit to that serial so don't worry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a ton dear for reading and loving it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
As I expected, asad insults her.
hate her for shouting at the poor servant.
She needs to learn her lesson.

At last, very good chapter. Will wait for the next one.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Jassieg

As I expected, asad insults her.

hate her for shouting at the poor servant.
She needs to learn her lesson.

At last, very good chapter. Will wait for the next one.😊




Awww Thanks for Loving my ff dear.:-)
Just relax enjoy this roller coaster ride as it has just started.;-)
Zoya will learn her Lesson it's my promise to you!:-)
Keep reading ff:Zawaal as many interesting twists are coming up!


Edited by I-Luv-Rashi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ff:Zawaal-Har Mohabbat Ko Zawaal Hai Siwaaye Allah Ki Mohabbat Ke!
(Every Love except Allah's Love has an End! )


Disclaimer: Resemblence to any OS,SS,FF is purely co-incidental and This ff is on a very senstitive issue and it is not meant to hurt anyone's feeling so if this hurts anyone's feelings then I am extremely Sorry.


Episode # 5:

Recap :
This Story revolves around Zoya.
Zoya is a care-free Happy go lucky girl.She is only single heir of a Filthy Rich family.Erum and Hamza are her childhood friends,Hamza is madly in love with Zoya and many times he tried to propose to her but was unsuccesful.All three of them are in same university and are art students.Zoya loves to make Sculptures.One day in a hang out she meets a guy who resembles her master piece.Zoya recognizes some unusual feeling about that.Zoya's one friend knows that man and his name is Asad Ahmed Khan,Zoya meets him.Zoya's Naani is a religious women and wants to give Islamic teachings to Zoya which Mehr-Un-Nisa (Zoya's Mother ) has missed but all in vain.Zoya meets Asad in a Mall but he refuses to recognize her and Zoya is devastated!Zoya succeeds in Meeting with Asad through Ayesha and is happy that he has started talking with her!
Zoya meets a palmistry expert woman and that Woman suggests Zoya to seek Allah's forgiveness as she can see that her Bad Luck is soon going to knock at her door!Zoya wipes off these talks off her mind and Hamza professes his love to Zoya!Zoya clearly tells Hamza that she doesn't love him and she loves Asad.Hamza again tries to warn Zoya but all in Vain.Naani questions Mehr-Un-Nisa about her negligence towards Allah and Islam and Mehr-Un-Nisa says that she doesn't get time as she is too busy and she can only do one thing at a time either match society standards or Complete religious duties and she prefers society first as whole life is left for religion.Asad Insults Zoya because Zoya tries to trace Asad everywhere by texting and calling.Zoya is hurt and she vents out her anger on Nasra (Servant ).

Update:

Episode starts from Zoya's Room:

Zoya's Phone rings and it's Asad.Zoya picks up the phone and says," Hi Asad how are you,You know I was so concerned,,,,!''
Asad shouts''Why? Why were you concerned? Why are you bugging me? Why were you concerned about me? what is your relation with me? are you my mummy? girlfriend? wife? then why were you concerned for me?''
Zoya says,''I just wanted to...!''
Asad shouts,''You wanted to spoil my image in front of my friends Ayesha and Farhan and nothing else.I am warning you the last time please Stop Stalking me!''
Asad disconnects the phone and Zoya cries!

At Dining Table:

Naani comes and says,"Assalam-o-Alaikum ( Peace be upon you and May you live long ) Mehr-Un-Nisa,Where is Zoya?''
"I sent Nasra but Zoya refused to eat anything and said that she is not feeling hungry!",Replied Mehr-Un-Nisa.
''But beta this is not good atleast a little but food should be taken!'',Said Naani.
Mehr-Un-Nisa says,"Amaa you know these girls they are health or figure concious so must be on dieting!''.
Naani gives a sad look and starts eating!

At Hamza's House:

Hamza is painting a painting of Zoya and is sad,He gets flashbacks of him proposing to Zoya and Zoya all going Asad Asad Asad.!
Hamza gets out of control and he throws all his paints and brushes on that painting and lies on a couch.His eyes turn teary and he leaves.

Next Day:

At Zoya's Room :

Mehr-Un-Nisa comes and tries to wake Zoya up! She says,"Wake up Zoya Jaanu,don't you have to go for university?"
Zoya says,"No mummy I am not feeling well!''.
Mehr-Un-Nisa puts her hand on Zoya's forehead and says,"Zoya beta you have high fever! should I call doctor?"
"No Mummy I will take medicine then I will be alright!'',Claimed Zoya.
Mehr-Un-Nisa says that she is going to take food for Zoya.At the same time Naani and Nasra enter.Naani asks what happened and Mehr-Un-Nisa tells that Zoya has fever and nowdays her mood also remains off but she never tells anyone anything!
Nasra says,"Begum Sahiba I think Some one has casted evil eye on Zoya bibi I know a Babaji who is very much knowledged about these things I will bring Taweez for Zoya bibi from there."
"Oh Nasra don't start with this crappy BabaJi I don't believe on all this.'',Said Mehrun-uN-Nisa.

"Exactly who believes on this shit",Said Zoya.
Naani says,":Zoya beta Evil eye casting is true on Holy Prophet (P.B.U.H) also people casted black magic but with Allah's help He got rid of it,and in Islamic books of Ahadith it is clearly stated that Evil eye is casted on humans,Thats why I say Offer prayers and Recite Holy Quran and obey it's teachings."
"Oh Ho Amaa leave her she is ill!'',Said Mehr-Un-Nisa.

At University:

Hamza calls at Zoya's cell but no response,He then calls on landline and Mehr-Un-Nisa picks it up,he informs him about Zoya's illness.Hamza tells Mehr-Un-Nisa that he is coming to visit her!

At Zoya's Room:

Hamza enters and Zoya wipes off her tears.
Hamza asks,"Zozo tell me what happened!''
Zoya again starts crying and says,"Hamza...Asad...!''
"Asad?..zozo tell me what he did? tell me?'',Questioned an angry Hamza.
"He insulted me a lot Hamza!'',Said Zoya.
Hamza says,"I told you! you were believing on a wrong person!''
Zoya cries more and says,"Hamza in my whole life no one screamed at me and he yelled at me and he thinks I am a flirt!..Hamza I feel like killing myself I can't live without him!''.
Suddenly Zoya's cell phone rings and Asad's name flashes on it.Hamza tells Zoya to reject his call but Zoya picks it up and leaves for washroom to talk to him peacefully and Hamza is hurt!
Asad says,"Hello?""
Zoya also replies,Asad asks,''Were you crying?"
Zoya says,"You tell why you called?"
Asad:"I am extremely sorry Zoya I yelled at you,actually I was tensed because of a business problem so...!''
Zoya wipes of her tears and says,"it's ok!''
Asad asks,"So can we meet now?"'
Zoya says,''Ofcourse!''

Zoya runs and takes out a dress from her wardrobe and when Hamza asks she says she is really happy as Asad apologized to her and now she is going for lunch with him!She also says that Hamza needs not to worry as afte talking to Asad her whole illness has vanished!

Hamza says,"Seriously?''

"Don't worry Hamza he called na that means he cares for me!'',Said Zoya!
"But Do you know if he loves you?'',Asked Hamza.
Zoya says,"Do you Know if I love you? then also you care for me and love me na?' Hamza is hurt with Zoya's statement and he leaves.


At Restaurant:

Asad is waiting for Zoya and Zoya arrives with her sculpture,"I can't believe it,This resemles me!'',Said Asad.
Zoya says,"Yes this is that sculpture I talked about!''.
Asad asks Zoya if he can keep that sculpture and Zoya happily agrees.
Zoya says,"I have very well print of this face in my mind so I don't need this!''.
"Yup that I can see through this sculpture!'',Said Asad.
Zoya says,"Thank God now you have become my friend I was trying to befriend you since last two months!''.
Asad asks,"And may I ask why were you trying to befriend me?''
Zoya gets shy and says,"I will tell you this some other time.''.
"Ok no problem,Btw I am very much interested in art and I love sea paintings ,I am looking for a best sea painting for my bedroom but I am unable to get a painting which fits to my requirements.'',Said Asad.
Zoya says,"Interesting Sea also fascinates me!''
Asad smiles and Zoya gives a lovable look to Asad.

At Zoya's House:

Nasra is sitting with Naani and Naani says,"Beta Hazrat Yousaf (A.S) was so handsome that when Zulaikha saw him,She fell in love with him and that too that in that kind of Love that she forgot her limits and tried to cheat on her husband but Hazrat Yousaf (A.S) was pure.When People of Society came to know this they started accusing Zulekha.Zulekha called women of her area to her house and she gave knives and fruits in their hands,Then she called Hazrat Yousaf (A.S) ,he was so handsome that all the ladies cut their hands instead of fruits."
"Thats why I say this love is useless it always leads human to wrong path!'',Said Nasra.
Naani says,"Beta Allah has not forbidden from love but He has forbidden to love anyone more than Him ( Allah ).and as covering of body is necessary like that covering of sight is also necessary as half obscenity is in sight only. "
Nasra says,"Subhaan Allah ''.

At Hamza's House:

Zoya comes and says,"Hamza where is that sea painting which you were making?"'
Hamza tells Zoya that it is in store room and Zoya runs to storeroom.Zoya returns with the painting and says,"Hamza why didn't you completed it yet?''
Hamza says,"Because I was busy but why you have remembered this painting Urgently?''
"You know what? Asad is looking for a sea painting so I thought of gifting him this one!When are you completing it?'',Said Zoya
Hamza is hurt and says,"When do you want it zozo?''
Zoya says,"hmmm in 3-4 days.''
Hamza says,"You will get it!''
"Aww thank you hamza you are such a sweet heart Hamza.",Says Zoya and leaves.
Hamza is hurt.

Next Day:

At University:

Hamza comes with that painting and gives it to Zoya.
Zoya is surprised as Hamza completed it in one night.Zoya is amazed to see her name at the end of the painting and asks,"What is this Hamza?"
Hamza says,"This is my girft to you and you will tell Asad that you painted this painting!''
"Hamza you are crazy,Thanks a lot Hamza.'',Said Zoya,
Erum also comes there and joins them.Hamza takes out nuggets and gives them to Erum.Erum starts eating and he also gives them to Zoya.
Zoya asks,"Hmmm who made this?''
Hamza says,"No one! I bought them from that stall outside teh university!'
Zoya throws all the nuggets and Hamza and Erum are shocked!
Zoya says,"How can you buy and eat these you know these have so much cholestrol and it contains soda which increases fats and affects digestive system!''
Erum says,"Behave Zoya whatever it is but you shouldn't have throwed eatables like this!''
"Oh please Erum,you are calling this eatables these are ewww and stop talking like my Naani yaar please!'',Said Zoya.
Zoya leaves and Hamza and Erum are irritated with her this behaviour.

At Asad's House:

Zoya comes with painting and she tells a servant to hand over painting to Asad when Dilshaad ( Asad's Mother ) comes out and sees Zoya.Dilshaad asks about Zoya from a servant and Zoya comes forward and saysm"I am Zoya sher Afgan,Asad's friend,I just came to drop this painting!''
Dilashaad insists Zoya and on her insistence Zoya comes inside the house!
Dilshaad says,"Pretty dress from where did you get this?''
Zoya says,"Aunty from Fiya's lawn exibition last week!''
Dilshaad says,"I must say you choice is very nice!"
Dilshaad thinks,"And I must say Asad's choice is also very nice!"
Zoya says,"Aunty I have to rush home so I am leaving!"
Dilshaad says,"No beta have lunch then leave!"
Zoya says,"Some other time aunty! Promise!'

Zoya thinks,"Hmmm I think Asad's Mother is impressed and likes me ,Good Very Good Zoya."
Episode Ends on Zoya's smirking face!

Precap:

At Asad's House:

Asad says," I do believe in love and I want to expreince it and I have a belief that one day I will get a girl who is in my thoughts and for love I don't care about beauty!and I think marriage is something differentfor marriage I can marry anyone even You!"
Zoya says,"Then Marry me na?"
Asad says,"Think again living with me will not be a easy task?"
Zoya says,"I hate easy tasks.'' . Asad smiles.

Next Episode Update will be posted Tomorrow!😳
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Please do comment and you can also give your feedback through pm's.😳


This Week's Promo:



At Asad's House:

Everyone is happy as Zoya and Asad are getting engaged and Zoya is superhappy!Zoya and Asad exchange rings.

At Restaurant :

Zoya and Asad are talking and having dinner suddenly Asad gets angry and he removes his ring and keeps it on table and says,"Sorry I cannot Marry you Zoya!" Zoya is shocked!Asad leaves and Zoya runs behind him with that ring and says,"Please listen to me please listen to me!" But Asad leaves.

What happened that Asad got ready to break engagement with Zoya? To Know Keep reading ff:Zawaal as many interesting twists are coming up!

Please Do Comment!😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
i m hooked up wid dis story...plz continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
i simply love reading this story 😛
superb writing 👍🏼
do continue soon🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Aww grt story yar !! nd looks lik Asad is totally mad in ths story huh..bt i likd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
M confused... Nyc updt. Cont Soon

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