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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Sry couldn't comment right away!

Well, I m being pulled into the story day by day. Zoya got a proposal?

Wow! I m waiting for u to update the next chapter soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Sry couldn't comment right away!


Well, I m being pulled into the story day by day. Zoya got a proposal?

Wow! I m waiting for u to update the next chapter soon.

👏



Aww No Problem Dear.

Thanks a ton for liking and appreciating my work.

Next Update will be posted Today. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

ff:Zawaal-Har Mohabbat Ko Zawaal Hai Siwaaye Allah Ki Mohabbat Ke!
(Every Love except Allah's Love has an End! )


Disclaimer: Resemblence to any OS,SS,FF is purely co-incidental and This ff is on a very senstitive issue and it is not meant to hurt anyone's feeling so if this hurts anyone's feelings then I am extremely Sorry.


Episode # 4:

Recap :
This Story revolves around Zoya.
Zoya is a care-free Happy go lucky girl.She is only single heir of a Filthy Rich family.Erum and Hamza are her childhood friends,Hamza is madly in love with Zoya and many times he tried to propose to her but was unsuccesful.All three of them are in same university and are art students.Zoya loves to make Sculptures.One day in a hang out she meets a guy who resembles her master piece.Zoya recognizes some unusual feeling about that.Zoya's one friend knows that man and his name is Asad Ahmed Khan,Zoya meets him.Zoya's Naani is a religious women and wants to give Islamic teachings to Zoya which Mehr-Un-Nisa (Zoya's Mother ) has missed but all in vain.Zoya meets Asad in a Mall but he refuses to recognize her and Zoya is devastated!Zoya succeeds in Meeting with Asad through Ayesha and is happy that he has started talking with her!
Zoya meets a palmistry expert woman and that Woman suggests Zoya to seek Allah's forgiveness as she can see that her Bad Luck is soon going to knock at her door!Zoya wipes off these talks off her mind and Hamza professes his love to Zoya!


Update:

Episode starts from University:

Zoya says,"H amza he is different!",Hamza says,"No zozo he is different because you want to see him different and it is in your mind that the first person you like is different but reality is that he is same as others!"
Zoya says,"I just know that no matter how much I try I am unable to take him out of my mind!"Hamza says,"Marry Me Zoya!!!" Zoya raises her gaze and is lost in his eyes.She says,''Come on Hamza this is not the time for your silly Jokes!"
Hamza says,''Zozo I am not joking not at all I am serious I want to marry you because I Love you!''
Zoya says,''No Hamza I cannot Marry you in fact I have never seen you like that!Your my best friend but I don't love you!"
Hamza is shattered and says,"Do you Love Asad?''
Zoya says,''Hamza what is love?...If Love is to be unable to take out one person out of your mind after trying hundred times and after talking to him you hold on to each and every word he said and you are obsessed with him? If this is love then Yes I am in love with Asad Ahmed Khan!"
Hamza says,"But zozo he even doesn't care for you!"
Zoya says,"I don't neet it!"
Hamza leaves and Zoya bangs her hand on her head!

At Night :

At Guest Room:

Nasra ( Mehr-Un-Nisa's maid) is pressing Naani's legs and Naani says,"Holy Prophet (P.B.U.H) said,"Allah the Dignified has no mercy for one who has no mercy for others." Nasra beta Allah always Loves those who love His creations and Humans,Animals,Birds,Plants and everything in this universe is His creation."
Nasra says,''Yes Naaniji ! Naaniji I really like sitting with you you tell me so good things about our Most beautiful religion Islam and Most Merciful The One and Only Allah!"
Mehr-Un-Nisa enters wearing a sleeveless and backless Saari!Mehr-Un-Nisa says," Amaa I have ordered Nasra that she wll not go home till you are here she will take care of you and Now I am going to part and I might return late!" Naani says,''Mehr-Un-Nisa what type of dress you are wearing this?''
Mehr-Un-Nisa tries to cover herself with Her saari pallu and Naani says,"Go and change beta what will sher afgan says?''
Mehr-Un-Nisa is embarassed in front of Nasra because of Naani's comment and She leaves saying,"Amaa this is todays fashion and Sheru (Sher Afgan) likes these type of clothes!Amaa I will talk to you tomorrow morning!" Naani is restless!

Next Day:

At Zoya Room :

Zoya texts Asad "Good Morning😊" and Leaves for University!

At Hall:

Mehr-Un-Nisa comes downstairs and Naani blesses her and prays to Allah for her wellbeing and happiness!
Mehr-Un-Nisa says,"Amaa waht was the need to comment on my dressing in front of Nasra? you don't know how cheap and double faced these low caste people are they back bite about us outside!"
Naani says,''What did I said wrong?''
Mehr-Un-Nisa says,''If your were not wrong then you were not also right,atleast don't talk like that with me in front of servants!''.
Naani says,''This is the reason I don't come here,When I come here my heart weeps a lot! Look Allah has given you lots of blessing,He has given you such a beautiful house full of things and Rizkq (Food ),But here is no one who takes Allah's name!''.
Mehr-Un-Nisa says,''Amaa what has happened to you,I do organize Meelad,I call children from mosque every month and they do read Holy Quran here,Now Ramadan will come and a series will come of Iftari's and Sehri's!What should I do more than that?''
''I didn't mean that,No one is here who offers Namaaz,when I come down after offering Fajr ,Silence of this house comes to kill me!'',Said Naani.
Naani says,"and what has happened to you Mehr-Un-Nisa? you used to wake up early in the morning and used to offer prayer of all 5 times.But I don't know what has happened to now?''
Mehr-Un-Nisa says,"Amaa now I don't get time to offer prayers I am always busy and I sleep at 2-3:00 am in then morning then how will I be able to wake up at Fajr?''
''What is the need beta to sleep so late?Sleep early don't go at these parties!'',Said Naani!
''Amaa I have to go to those parties it is necessary,We live in this High society and here everyone does this and we also have to do this to match their standards!'',Said Mehr-Un-Nisa!
''High people? Now how they became high by living in big bungalows and travelling in Bigg cars? Humans become high with their deeds and love towards Allah.'',Said Naani!
Mehr-Un-Nisa receives a call and leaves excusing Naani!

At University :

Zoya is sitting in front of her sculpture and is staring at her phone.She calls Asad but No response and she thinks,"Why he is not picking up the God damn phone?"
Hamza comes there and he sits infront of Zoya and says,@So again you have started you Asad Naama? Zozo the idol you have made of Asad na when it will break then it is going to pain you the most and him as well!" Zoya says,"His Idol will never break!"
Hamza says,''Zozo Breaking is every Idols fate and same will happen with Asad's Idol!Zozo please don't worship him!''
Zoya says,''Are you mad? worship? you also care for me do whatever I say then are you also worshipping me?"
"Zoya I love you but not more than My Allah,and I will never do any sin for your sake and I will never anger Allah for your sake but you are ready to do anything for Asad this difference of Love and Worship!"
Zoya makes a face and says,''oooh I am scared!''
Hamza leaves.Zoya again calls Asad but No response.


At Asad's House :

Asad is watching tv and having coffee while his phone rings and Zoya's name flashes on it!He sees it and throws his phone on bed and gives a "whatever" look!

Here Zoya is worried and she tells Erum,"Erum what would have happened he was not receiving my phone and now it's coming switched off?"
Erum says,"Relax, be patient he must be busy!"
Zoya says,''Relax? you know very well with Asad's issue I Can not be patient!" Zoya leaves.

At Zoya's House:

Zoya returns Home and Mehr-Un-Nisa tells her that they have to go to party but Zoya screams and Says,''I am not going anywhere you go!''
Mehr-Un-Nisa says,''Zoya Jaani what happened beta are you alright?''
''I am perfectly fine you please leave!'',Screamed Zoya.

At Zoya's Room :

Zoya calls Asad but No reply! and she cries.Zoya then calls Ayesha tells her that she is concerned for Asad as he is not receiving her phone since morning nor he is replying to her texts.Ayesha tells Zoya not to worry and she will tell Farhan and he will tell Asad and Asad will Talk to you!Zoya thanks Ayesha and Disconnects the call!

Zoya goes in Washroom and Washes her face again and again and thinks,"Why Why we don't get easily what we want?'' She then gets flashback of Hamza saying,''Zozo you are loving the wrong person!''.

Nasra comes with juice and serves it to Zoya,Zoya in anger throws the glass and it breaks.Nasra cuts her hand while collecting the glass pieces and her hand starts bleeding! Zoya shouts,''You don't know how to work properly? Now quickly clean this I hate blood so clean this blood of yours and these pieces and listen don't leave any glass piece it may hurt me!''
Teary eyed Nasra leaves cleaning the space.

Zoya's Phone rings and it's Asad.Zoya picks up the phone and says," Hi Asad how are you,You know I was so concerned,,,,!''
Asad shouts''Why? Why were you concerned? Why are you bugging me? Why were you concerned about me? what is your relation with me? are you my mummy? girlfriend? wife? then why were you concerned for me?''
Zoya says,''I just wanted to...!''
Asad shouts,''You wanted to spoil my image in front of my friends Ayesha and Farhan and nothing else.I am warning you the last time please Stop Stalking me!''
Asad disconnects the phone and Zoya cries!
Episode ends on Zoya's crying face.


Precap:

At University:

Hamza comes with nuggets and he offers them to Erum she eats and he also offers them to Zoya.Zoya takes one and asks''Hmm who made them?''
''No one I buyed them from that stall outside the university!'',Said Hamza.
Zoya throws all the nuggets and says,''Have you gone made this cheap stalls food is ewww it has cholestrol and it also has soda which increases fats.''
Erum says,''Behave Zoya how can you throw eatables like this?''
Zoya replies,''Oh please Erum don't talk like my Naani and eatables? seriously you re calling this eatables?''

Those who want to recieve Pm's whenever I update my ff please buddy me asap because from next update only buddies will recieve pm's.

Please Do Comment.😳Next Episode will be posted Tomorrow!




Edited by I-Luv-Rashi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
superb yaar 👏
its was really awesome,
do update the next episode soon , i m waiting eagerly for it now 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wonderful man... Though i dont like this Zoya... Bt i love ewr ff. cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
simply amazing i totally love this.lease continue soon and pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: veenisha

superb yaar👏
its was really awesome,
do update the next episode soon , i m waiting eagerly for it now 🤗



Aww Thanks a lot dear for reading and loving it.Keep reading ff:Zawaal as many twists are coming up!;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
aWW IDNT UNDRSTNAD D BEHAVIOR OF aSAD? POOR HAMZA
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Mehvish_fatima

aWW IDNT UNDRSTNAD D BEHAVIOR OF aSAD? POOR HAMZA



Asad is the most mysterious character of this story and you will see his new quality in each twist.
Zoya and Asad's characters will unfold as the further story unfolds so keep reading this ff as it is full of twists and Islamic teachings.:-)

Yup my heart also goes out for Hamza but what can we do he is very important character of the ff.:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Surprise with zoya's attitude ... wow okay

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