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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

👏 nicely written...funny n romantic :)

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

You were saying something about me being a good writer... You're wonderful! I loved it. Especially Ayaan and his joke. I knew it! 😆

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

🤣 🤣 🤣 I died laughing during Ayaan's part! Hahahaha! 😆 But aside from that, this was really cute! 😛 Good job. 👍🏼

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ABI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

That was really beautiful and I would be super happy if this happened in the serial too cause it's romantic yet perfect for where Asad and Zoya are at in their relationship !!

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

BRILLIANT OS! JUST LOVED each and every bit of it. Especially the Ayaan's Masti wala part i couldn't stop laughing. 😆 You described everything so beautifully!

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honeyriaz

@honeyriaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Omg.. Just wow... LOVED it!!! So beautifully written! I totally felt the moment!! Great job!!!

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

It was very beautiful and touching!

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

its beautiful... u seriously should write more

loved Ayaan's trick

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Iqra81

@Iqra81

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Awesome you should continue plzzz???????

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Fizzi, You are one of the best writers on the forum. However, I don't often get to read stories where you keep Asad and Zoya in character. I really prefer this over many of your other stories. I would like to read more of these over the others - clean or raunchy - I'd prefer to read stories with both of them in character. This was sweet and funny - do we get to have more?

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