NEW FF: Memories- A Tug of War (Chapter7, Page35) - Page 6

Really good! Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Eeek! :D

Nice I read it all in one go its awesome do continue

wow...lovely update...asad's convo with najma was really good...

wow nice waiting fr d next chapter sooon

very nice! I love how you described Zoya's feelings.

Okey so I've heard the saying patience bears good fruits or was it hard work? Anyways lool, the wait was DEFINITELY worth it! Firstly I love how you give us long updates and its not like your just rambling on, you somehow manage to include everyone's story and their reactions/responses. I think my favorite part was Najma and Asad's conversation. Najma and Zoya's relationship is one of my favorites on the show and I don't get to see too much of it and its degree. You fulfilled each one of my wishes. Today Zoya wasn't Dilshaads guest or Asad's love interest, she was Najmas sister and best friend. I love love love how you indirectly showed growth in Najma's character yet kept it intact. Najma would never have voiced her opinions before Zoya entered her life. So when she was reprimanding Asad, I was going, " you go gurl!" LOL. Despite doing this, she stayed in her limits as the younger sister and that scene was just beautiful. Also when she said that Asad had given her her life and yet he hurt the one who taught her how to live that life, that was beautiful! Your writing skills deserve endless apreciation! And omgosh when Asad said that he was in love with HER FRIEND, I dunno that just killed me and madee feel all happy. Asad HAS A LONG WAY to go before he can get Zoya back and I can't wait to see Ray and her in action. I love their friendship <3 Also, the ending is horribly amazing because now I can't wait for the next update :/

Keep up the amazing work! I love it (:

woah! finally face to face.,...waiting for more..

Beautiful as usual...Continue the next chapter sooon as tat is the most awaited chapter...how they meet each other after a break...the dhak dhak of their hearts, their naino kii baashaa and alll...very curious to read further..

loovee this SS! I've always wanted to read some sort of a redemption track where Asad has to work and toil hard and long for Zoyas forgiveness and this was just perfect! Continue soon <3

Amazing.. But, you stopped bang on time .. They were face to face I guess.. You better continue asap.