NEW FF: Memories- A Tug of War (Chapter7, Page35)

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Gudduluvs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow...awezum...luvd it...continue soon...plz update nxt part soon...thnks 4 pm...

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teddyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Hahaha, I literally fell off the sofa laughing and crying! Your comment has put a huge smile on my face, I don't know how to thank you. Will update very soon my lovely, now that I have received everyone's thumbs up! I hope I can live up to your expectations. Thanks for the support!

Lol I'm glad I made you laugh! And even happier I made you smile hehee :D Yay, I can't wait! And I'm sure you'll exceed my expectations! And you're most welcome (:

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hey bhagwan char din tak bhuka tha asad 😲 main to 4 ghante bhi bhuki nai reh sakti😆

so ray will be the cupid...and asad is coming for his lady love...!!!😃

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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Nice ff...I want Asad to suffer more and more...😆

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Yes yes yes.. You need to continue this.. Perfect.. Will elaborate the review after exams.. Will just say I enjoyed reading it...

Dee

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little.princess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hey the story line is fabulous.. Love ur writing.. Eagerly waiting 2 see how Asad is gonna redeem himself.. Loved Dilshad and Zoya's friend..

Update the next part soon and plz PM me..:)

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Of course u have to conitnue this beautiful script tooo...u r amazing dude...

thnx for the PM

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Oh God dis is sooo good. it was heart wrenching to read asad's state after Zoe left him. its his fault always but its so painful seeing him cry for her. Dilshad is a sweetheart, she always helps Asad wid his complexes but beta doesn't get anything in his head. I hope he tries whole hearedly dis time. waisey, Asad n all think she's back in NY, isn't it?

I like da guy Ray, he's sweet n caring. I wish him luck in teaching da dumbest lover Asad a lesson or two for hurting Zoe.

lets see how dis project paves way for them to be together.

cont soon dear n plz don't write short ones thinking we'l like it or not. believe me dere needs to a love button on our QH forums, cox u guys r exceptionally talented.

love.

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
hey bhagwan char din tak bhuka tha asad 😲 main to 4 ghante bhi bhuki nai reh sakti😆
so ray will be the cupid...and asad is coming for his lady love...!!!😃

Hahhahaha! I felt so bad because i realised afterwards, ahahha we'll imagine he didn't starve! Saaamees, I don't go an hour without food, I feel faint! Yes he's coming but he has a hell of a lot of grovelling to do!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
Nice ff...I want Asad to suffer more and more...😆

Yaaar the way you're speaking, you want me to torture him badly! Bechara will die! But your wish will be fulfilled, he has so much of grovelling to do. Don't curse me when you feel sorry him afterwards!