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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Nandini0910
heart touching..😊

Originally posted by: latanzia
Very touching

Originally posted by: iLuvYellow
Thats soo sad but well written

Thankyou guys! Im glad you liked it😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ridhima_017
u... u made me cry... i hate u for doing this...

but i loved it...
do write stories like this...

Yes i got many people telling me they hate me for this😆

But im glad you liked it😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: supreet_dmg
I know it was sad and emotional but I did like it. it was very well written.

Thankyou dear, im glad you liked it😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Dil ko chu gaya yaar!
I loved it x's infinity!
Great job Faiza
Beautiful OS
You made my night
Love :)

Far! 🤗

Thankyou so much! Im glad you liked it! I was missing your cmments 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: anushka2112
Awww it is damn Beautiful ...hats off to you darling ..my eyes were breaming with tears bluring while reading

Thanks for wonderful os ..
.love you

Awww im sorry sweets, but sometimes the emotional os's do bring forth beautiful stuff which i tried to portray 😳 im glad you think i did justice to it😃 loveee you😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Linsie
I forgive..u for the injustice you did to zoya... but i like father daughter convo... beautiful

Aaahh thankyouuu!!! *dances in circles for being forgiven*😆

Thankyou im glad you did😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

This was beautiful. Aww his daughter calling him Mr. Khan.. I didn't expect that. This was sad but really well written and sweet. Love how he talks to Zoya still and knows when she's smiling :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: mochhug
This was beautiful. Aww his daughter calling him Mr. Khan.. I didn't expect that. This was sad but really well written and sweet. Love how he talks to Zoya still and knows when she's smiling :)

Thankyou so much, Mochhug! I was hoping you would comment 😆

And i'm so glad you liked it! I've seen people believing celestial bodies to be the final form of a person who passed away! Usually children or people wh were deeper in love more to console themselves than anything else actually! So thought about writing this and im glad you liked it😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Ya Allah!!!

Right now, I have a lump in my throat, tears in my eyes and a sharp sting of pain in my heart 😭

This was so Beautiful Jalebi!!

I love the way you put your words, it keeps me holded.

And u know that u are an awesome writer, dont you?

I loved this Shot so much!! It was so Intense...

I mean.. I could feel Asad talking to the star and crying...

OMFG!!!! Asad crying!!! and I was like "Dont cry Baby... Please😭"

You made it feel so realistic!

And Zoya's Death... Well, with the current pace of the show its like I'll get to see Asad's emotions only after that!

But I have to tell you... This piece got me!!!

You are One awesome Writer Jalebi...

Thank u so much...

And sorry for being such an awful Friend. I should have commented earlier... Sorry...

Keep Smiling

Loads Of Love

Yashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: ForeverArhi
Ya Allah!!!
Right now, I have a lump in my throat, tears in my eyes and a sharp sting of pain in my heart 😭

This was so Beautiful Jalebi!!
I love the way you put your words, it keeps me holded.
And u know that u are an awesome writer, dont you?
I loved this Shot so much!! It was so Intense...
I mean.. I could feel Asad talking to the star and crying...
OMFG!!!! Asad crying!!! and I was like "Dont cry Baby... Please😭"
You made it feel so realistic!
And Zoya's Death... Well, with the current pace of the show its like I'll get to see Asad's emotions only after that!
But I have to tell you... This piece got me!!!

You are One awesome Writer Jalebi...

Thank u so much...
And sorry for being such an awful Friend. I should have commented earlier... Sorry...

Keep Smiling

Loads Of Love

Yashi