{|AsYa| OS: I'm A Star} - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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whenever it s your writing, i dont wait. it s so heart touching, i love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
OMG...this is so touching!! Too good ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: viya.mallik4eva

OMG...this is so touching!! Too good ❤️


Awww thankyou so much🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DoNotDisturb

Oh My God. 😭 You really did make it sad and intense. In the begninning I couldn't imagine it too well😕, because I thought it was Zoya who was crying but later it made sense. Complete sense. I could actually imagine Asad looking up at the stars and talking to them. The bond you showed between Ameena & Asad was beautiful😳 And when he said "Allah Miyaan" I laughed 😆 And its no sin writing a sad story. Sad stories are the ones with the depth and emotionally overwhelms us! ⭐️ This was very well written! ❤️ Fantastic and I would love to read more stories by you If you write anytime soon, do PM me 😉 You can add my name in your fan list 😛Very Very Well written & Keep it up ! I really admire people who can write well, so 👏🤗


-Manjari :)


Hello Manjari! Thankyou for such a wonderful and an extremely encouraging comment 😃
Hehe yes i know i intended the whole identity crisis thing! Smething i learnt while i did my GCSE! 😆
I'm glad you liked it! Sad stories have never been my forte but im glad im not totally horrible at it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Something that i and my father share. Thank you! :') ❤️


Aww Ankie! 🤗 🤗
I can only imagine what a beautiful bond you share with your father then! Stay blessed! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Msash

so beautiful and touchng...father daughter perfect


A father-daughter bond is one of the beautiful bonds ever and i really wanted to do pen down something about this and im glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: anjebhandari

ohh i cried while reading this! ;(


Originally posted by: ...OohLaLa...

I hate u.. It was so damn beautiful.


Yes yes i know you hate me, both of you but im sorrry😆
Thanks for liking it thouuugghhh😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
*Sigh* Its so sad.. But.. so very beautiful.. Loved it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-


Hahaha i came around that thought too but then i cant see Zoya sad cz obviously if theyree apart, she'd be sad unless she is dead which i dont want 😆
Thankyouuu😳

Yes even I can't see Zoe sad but I noe it if ever anything happens to Zoe we all will be the first one to bash gul 😆
Even how much we say we want asad to regret whole life in the end we actually want a happy ending 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
It was beautiful...and i'm not embarrased to admit that it made me cry... Ameena...the perfect mix of my Asad and Zoya...could feel Asad's anguish...ameena's tears...and Zoe's smile to see her family together...
No words to describe how much i loved reading it...
Do keep writing...
AsYa rule...

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