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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

RES

YESSS! I'm first! OMG You're updating sooo often! I love this! will comment when i'm home 😃

WHOA! You should try your hand at writing a steamy one 😉 I have a feeling you'd be good at it 😆

And I loved his line of "every cell of her body being marked by him." She fully belongs him. It was so sweet and touching. I loved how Humeira and Ayaan were affected by a diary entry 😆 and how he was crossing his legs to hide it 🤣 . I repeat, you'd be good at steamy writing 😛

I wonder if that pain in her head is symbolic. Or even a literal warning sign. Is she gonna lose her memory 😭 Is that why she leaves? She doesn't want to be a burden on him? GHAAA!!! I need to know !

Love you again for updating so fast 😃

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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teddy25

@teddy25

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

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OH NO ...2 ND 😭

I will be back...😃

unres

Check my PM dear.

Edited by teddy25 - 12 years ago

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

yaaahooo im 3rd!!!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Wow

Heart touching

Tanu is such a bitch here

AsYa rocked as usual

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pslove

@pslove

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

its really nice...

please continue soon...

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Head injury??? I am so happy that theirs a third update in the same day.. Couldn't wait you see... Loved it.. The diary entry somewhat made me blush too.. But, I had a serene feeling too.. They are so happy.. Head injury.. I guess this has to do something with the distance between them right now..

Continue soon!!!

Dee

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Janani24

@Janani24

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

wow 2 updates lovely👏 but is that witch tanveer behind this😡 zoya should have told asad😕 but i hope nothing serious happens with zoya due to the injury😕 continue soon😊