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t1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

I'm really loving this story!

And can I just say I love that you update regularly! And you don't make us wait eons for the next part, so please keep that up!

I love your writing style, it's such a pleasure to read and I always look forward to reading what's coming next!

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sasir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

i am glad u said no zoya-ayan. rest the update is nice. continue soon

isnt ashar was the zoyas brother. but y he bacame her enemy all of sudden.

plz update soon

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tvpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Amazing update...so a lot of fun coming up...just eagerly waiting for the next update...plz plz update soon...

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Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

Awexome update...

They way u write each n every scene n emotions u portray...that superb n fab...

Update soon

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Update soon!!!

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nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Allah Miya ! I just dont know what to say.

Zoya is such a gem of a person. Despite her plight, she never failed to touch others with her own tenderness. One of the reasons why we love her. And Ayaan - I wonderf how things are gonna lead through with him. Since u've assured us there will be no Zoyaan yet Ayaan seems to have developed some sort of feeling for her - what, that is sth only time and you can tell us.

And Asad. He is a hurt soul and he has got the first signs - feeling 'right' with Zoya.

Now I wonder who this Asher is and why he is after Zoya. Does it have sth to do with the death of her family? The poor thing.

I have a really bad feeling for this guy, Akshay.

Love this update, as usual. Reaally looking forward to the next part and the unraveling of this mystery.

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

Umm.. So Ayaan is feeling something something for zoya.. Well, she is beautiful, innocent and so very elegant.. Anyone will just fall for her.. Ayaan kya chiz hai.. And, more over they are leaving together... And, he could see how courageous she is, going through so much but still keeping the cheery side.. That is zoya.. Anyone would get attracted to her..

She is all alone.. Just has some memories of her parents, her family.. My heart pains for this poor soul.. Why are these people after her.. What harm has she done to them.. Their is so much yet to reveal and I really can't take it.. You really need to continue asap.

So she is finally working and in the same place where Asad is their.. Good.. It will be full one drama... Love it..

Off course we trust you , you will never bring ayaan and zoya together , that can't ever happen.. I trust you and m just enjoying the story , the way you are narrating.. I don't feel bad if ayaan or else any other guy has a soft corner for zoe.. It happens... I am all happy until I get good Asya scenes.. And, that we receive from this story.

Do continue soon.

Dee