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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

great one. Bt i seriously dont want zoyan track

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

nice update!eagerly waiting for ur next part!

dont forget to pm me!😛

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ABI

@ABBY92

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Finally Zoya has joined Asad's office but this Akshay guy doesn't seem right to me either. With both Ayaan and Asad feeling for Zoya, I wonder what's going to happen next !!

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

OMG Faizu !! Loved the Update 🤗

Is Ayaan falling for Zoya as well ?? 😲
Though I know u won't make Zoyaan happen still but 😛

Loved it soo much !! Update sooon ❤️

Edited by Zara_92 - 12 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

I'm resing again, I know. Feel free to throw tomatoes 😭

Exams babes... done in two days! And I'll update, and unres and PM all in one day 😃

Pakka promise 😉

Edited:

I'M BACK 😃 (though I'm sure you don't want to see my face 😆)

Soo since there wasn't AS MUCH happening this updateee I'm gonna keep it short. (Well i'll try 🤣)

Ok So I know a lot of people are bugging you about Ayaan falling for Zoya and how that will lead to a ZoYaan track. But I trust you. And I think that him falling for her, which you've depicted beautifully I must say, will add depth to your story. It's already so deep, but the beauty of it is there is still room for more depth and larger scope of emotions and story lines. He needs that affection. He's at AAK's mercy and has no one to really talk to. It's only natural that he's drawn to someone as bubbly and lively and caring and innocent as Zoya.

He flashback at the mall was so sweet and sad. I feel so bad for this girl. What all she must have gone through that her family is dead and mob boss is after her life. He wants her to suffer. But why? What does he have against her? What did she, or her family ever do to them? So many questions! Woman! You always leave me wanting more, and I'm not even at the end of the update yet!

OMG OMG OMG OMG I JUST REALIZED WHY YOU W'RE UPSET I DIDN'T REMEMBER ASHAR!!!! WHY IS HE DOING THIS TO ZOYA!? HE'S HER BROTHER!? OMG. Ok calming down now. But seriously... is he sick? And I mean that in BOTH senses of the word. Wonder if it's a terminal illness.. or if it's just medication for the scar. And what must have happened to make him so cold and just plain cruel. So Giselda works for him!? Mother of God. What will she think when she realizes he's Zoya's brother!? So much drama! And still so much to unfold!

Ayaan's uneasiness carrying all the way in the car ride and to the office was so sad. My heart went out to him. How he was so scared of telling her the truth. And watching Zoya being so excited gave him an even bigger sinking feeling. I like that she has him thought. Even if he falls for her, he'll be a strong pillar of strength for her, right? I'm hoping 😃

And this new guy... Akshay... hmm haven't seen him before, and didn't really read that much of him (you we're brief but to the point).. I have a gut feeling he's no good. Was he perhaps the one who bumped into Ayaan? In the next chapter 😛😃 Maybe I'm reading too much into it. But I don't really like him. But then again, first impressions can be deceiving.

Awww Asad is too cute! He's looking at her through his cabin's glass walls. I Like that he appreciates not only her beauty, but her ability to dress sensibly and her excitement. It's so sad that that same excitement brings him grief. Of the fact that when she finds out who she's working for, she'll be horrified. Just the thought is already bothering him. Not to mention her previous frightened looks.

Looking forward to another emotion packed chapter! And of course, I was wrong. There was alot going on in this chapter, as I remembered and went through it again in my head. My apologies 😆. And now that my rant is over, I shall go on to inform you of my multiple Unressing. 😃

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

It was interesting chapter. Love to see how she will react to when she comes to know the owner of this company. I wonder what Akshay has in store,..love to read the next chapter..plz post soon.

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

you are making me go all the way saying:

NO ayaan and zoya please!!!!

anyways it was an awesome update!!

too many mysteries lol

i somehow don't have a good feeling about that guy names akshay!!

and i wonder whose the man with the scar!

wonder what will be zoya's reaction when she comes to know that asad is her boss and ayaan also works there.

continue soon :P

cant wait for the next part :)

Farah<3

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

No. I can't even think of hating you. You are such a wonderful writer. Do continue soon. Waiting eagrly...😊

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Hey ...
Your note kinda assured me and made me happy too that there would be no Zoyaan track ... :)

Anyway fantastic update !!
Wokay !! So Is Akshay a negative person ???

Aha !!! Loving the jealous Asad to the core ... ;)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#690

When I started reading this chapter, I thought Why is this Ayaan thinking about Zoya like that???? because i remembered last time you mentioned there would not be Zayaan track and thought what is this twist now?😡 and at the end when I read about your A/N...i was relieved 😆

Btw...Nice chapter...You write amazingly well...All emotions are very nicely expressed ⭐️...Continue soon...