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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

I loved this update Faiza!!! Too good!! The way Asad tried to apologize and those flashbacks...just beautiful!!! Please please do continue soon!! this was just fab!!👏

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

hey tis is just superb totally luv it...m just addicted to tis ff...it just brilliant...😊

luv every bit of it...they way u describe the flashback n wat asad when through n hws his feeling was just so touching n i nearly cried...it just so heart warmimg...n hw he tried his his best to ask zoya sori n bought fr her 3 suitswasn the concern he show fr he is just supeb... n zoya opinion about him is changing is just great...👏

thx fr the pm...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...😃

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

hey ..as i always said...i jst love ur story...so new, refreshing...

ur story is one of my few fav stories ...i was eagerly waiting 4 d updates...

so good dear...

pls update soon & ya pls don't forget to PM me ...i don't want to miss this story...

pari

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Yayyy finally a long update. This is was as usual a great update. Things more lear.

I liked how Asad was feeling guilty and Zoya confused, what to think of THE GREAT ASAD AHMED KHAN.

Though i feel for Najam my heart goes out to her. 😭 She feels she is not wanted.😭. I just waiting for Asad to start caring for his baby sister.
The first part was heart wrenching. Every update of yours leave me stunned and speechless.

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

AMAZING!!! Don't want to stop reading! Hurry next part plz plz! Thank you! Continue writing these amazing FF! Loveing the storyline!

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Loved it.. The story is moving and I love the way its going... Do continue asap.

Dee

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

The whole scene of Asad in the graveyard was really devastating. I can so feel his pain and later on, to face Zoya and see her terrified like that must have just made it worst. I hope Zoya is slowly realising now that there is more to Asad than meets the eye.

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#378

its so beautiful..i ws here after a the sleep and the first thing i saw was ur update ..i m so happy ..n its so good to see asad this vulnerable and thoughtful side.

but again same question ..can a girl ever get off from the moment where she was in this state..he had tried to touch her without her permission.its not easy for anyone to forget the memory even she forgive the person..so the time he will try to get close she gotta hit again by this memory..

ur stories character reacts as per the real ppeople will do..i would be happy if you maintain this real connection..

urs

milli

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Super Duper Update Faiza...😉

Loved the Caring ASAD... ❤️Ayan is also Caring..😛Waiting for next update...Continue soon..

Mariam...

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#380

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Phew! Well it;s actually nice to see a more mellow chapter.. Asad and Najma's pain was soo heartbreaking... I wonder how Asad really feels about his sister... does he really hate her? Poor Najma.. how is it her fault 😭 My heart literally went out to her... poor soul. Didn't ever meet her mother so I can understand her no mourning her.. but how I hate her thinking that she doesn't deserve to live.

Hmm "When he was wrong he was wrong" Loved that part. Shows that even though he tries to come off as this shrewd businessman, and emotionless person, he's still human and has his moments when his facade comes off, even in front of other people, and especially Zoya.

I also loved that Zoya was still afraid of him. I mean not loved it LOL but loved you for putting it in because god only knows how traumatic it must be to have someone tell you to strip against your will, and then some.

AND OMG ok my three favourite parts (besides the ones above of course! 😆 Who am I kidding? I love every bit of it, but these particular bits stood out the most!)

1. Asad seeing the scene of his mother's burial all over again through that little boy at the cemetery. My heart broke when I read how he screamed and how cold Rashid was toward him. Poor souls. One overcome with grief, and the other still hoping that she may somehow come back to him.

2. Asad's need to see her face, and how he changed his demeanour in front of her. How his coldness and his arrogance went out the window the minute he saw her eyes. How he was nervous seeing her because of his guilt and hatred for himself, was just too exquisitely written. And her reactions in turn were justified, but I couldn't help but feel a little more sorry for him, since he was trying to apologize, and I'm glad Zoya noticed this in his eyes.

3. AND the gift. The gift itself was insignificant, but his gesture, to show her that he was genuinely apologetic. How he acknowledged that she needed things and that it wasn't JUST Ayaan's responsibility, even if she was staying with him. And love her last line "I will never understand you Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan." Just because it's true that he's too multifaceted for her now, AND it kind brought a little humour (to me anyway) and reminded me of the show just a tad 😃

OK DONE WITH MY RANT 🤣 Didn't mean for it to be sooo long 😛 But I can't help it 😉

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago