{|AsYa FF: Chapter Black} THREAD 2 LINK PAGE 142!! - Page 40

Oh My God!! How on earth didnt i find this story before???
This is simply mind blowing, Faizu!
Love that he cares for her, even though she screans at him!
Love the way you put his emotions, very well written!!!
Pm me for the next update! And update haldi jaldi!

Love,
Shar

Edited my comment on page 59 😳 I was real quick this time, wasn't I? 😛

WOW!!! This is really really really good!

I love how you've given a background to every single character mentioned in this story.. and your writing is actually fantastic!! I mean, your story is progressing so well! And although I want Asad to redeem himself ASAP.. these little steps he's taking to do so are how life actually works. And I'm so glad you haven't made Zoya the girl who thinks.. 'oh he's hot so I'll forgive him for what he almost did'.. lol!! Plus, despite taking everything slowly.. you're showing the right amount of progression in everyone's relationship.. be is Asad Zoya.. Asad Ayaan.. or Ayaan Zoya. So Kudos to you for doing that.

As for your writing.. it actually leaves the audience enchanted and willing to read more. You drag us into the story with every chapter and although I can't empathise with anyone in this FF (Thank God I don't) You've written it in such a way that I sympathise with all of them at once and don't really know on earth to blame..! I have been a silent reader all along.. because when I read the first few chapters, I knew you deserved a good long comment on this. However, me being partly lazy and partly busy in exams kept putting it off. But after this chapter I couldn't not comment.. :D

So anyways.. Please do continue ASAP! I'm dying to read more about Ayaan Asad and Zoya. And please don't break one of their hearts. If it's Zoya and Asad (which I'm guessing it is because of the title obviously).. I really hope Ayaan's heart isn't broken. I do adore him so. lol!

Keep up the fabulous writing and update soon!

Love,
Sanaa

THIS WAS AMAZING! I love love this! You write so WELL! Awwhh Asad was such a sweetheart. Im glad he realized his mistake and feels guilty. Asad Miyan is already on his way to love:P YES! Zoya he's Mr. Complicated but he has a heart of gold and soon you'll love him too:D Brilliant update. Continue soon!

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..

THIS WAS AMAZING! I love love this! You write so WELL! Awwhh Asad was such a sweetheart. Im glad he realized his mistake and feels guilty. Asad Miyan is already on his way to love:P YES! Zoya he's Mr. Complicated but he has a heart of gold and soon you'll love him too:D Brilliant update. Continue soon!

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Amazing...

pls continue sooonnn...

Originally posted by: avi_12

perfect...😊😊 dat was such a nice update!!!! i loved it. felt tooo bad for everyone. you depicted everyone's feelings so nicely. only thing i didnt understand was that if rashid and asad were speaking so perfectly even after dilshad's death then why does he hate him nw.anyways the rest of the update was awesome. loved ayaan's caring nature and asad's thoughtfulness. do update sooon...😊 and pm please.

Awesome update! Feel so bad for Najma. And love seeing Asads less ruthless side! Can't wait for more!!!