I love you Zoya...Short Story (PART 5; PAGE 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wo! Its too good. Cont asap
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its good...cntinue...if possible pm me
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Amazing..just read all three chapters. Loving it! Asad confessing is just so romantic.

Keep writing. Will wait for ur update.
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great ,waiting for the next
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this ss is realy good! Great work! Continue soon!
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PART 4

Just before Zoya could understand what had just happened...there came Tanveer screaming Jammy...jammy...Zoya thought why why does she always come at the wrong time? I mean what has this world come to? Every time Asad and Zoya want to have a moment there comes Tanveer to ruin it? I know I know I shouldn't even think like this...she's a good friend...but she has very bad timing.

Tanveer: JAMMY JAMMY voh...voh...mujhe maaradalega. *cries loudly*

Asad: Tannu?! Koun?! Kya! Who wants to kill you? Relax tannu relax

Zoya: Tanveer calm down...

*tanveer looks at Zoya*

Tanveer: jammy do you mind if we talk alone, *still sobbing*

Asad nods to Zoya: Zoya...

Zoya: Haan...I know...*sighs and walks away*

Asad looks at her with regret. Regret that he had to leave her for Tanveer yet again. Yes Tanveer is my good friend...but she always comes at just the wrong time...but Zoya will wait...for me...

Asad and Tanveer alone in Tanveers room

Tanveer: Jammy...I'm sorry...for ruining your night

Asad: chup tannu, you didn't ruin anything

Tanveer: lekin...it looked like you and Zoya were having an intense conversation...

Asad blushes and a faint smile comes on his face: no nothing like that...

Tanveer: Haan Haan, I get it... Miyaan-Biwi convo...who am I anyways

Asad: no no , Tanveer stop...you know you are my closest confidant. Always. No matter who I marry. 🤢

Jammy: of course Jammy *and smiles*

Asad: so Tanveer what were u telling me? Someone is trying to kill you?

Tanveer: ...jammy...I can't talk about that...koi hain...she starts faking to be delusional and faints

Asad: Tannu? Tannu? Are u okay?

Tanveers fakes a fainting spell and slowly opens her eyes again: jammy I want to rest...

Asad: that's okay...we'll talk later good night

Asad speeds out and bumps into Zoya who is annoyed

Asad:...sorry

Zoya: okay.

Asad: what's wrong Zoya?

Zoya: Kuch nahin. Good night I'm off to bed

Asad: *grabs Zoya's hand* rukho...you never answered my question

Zoya blushes: what question ?

Asad: ...voh...Zoya you know! Which question...

Zoya: oye, Mr. Emotionally challenged...I can't remember which question...so good night I'm off to bed

*zoya smiles and runs off*

Asad: memory challenge paagal Larki...uuf. I worked so hard to ask her that question and she never even answered me.

Zoya runs into her room and her heart beats to fast she wonders if anyone else could hear her...and she wondered if Mr.Khan received her present. He had given her gifts before...now it was her turn..she wanted to recreate the Bhaang Pakore night...that's when she had first realized that there was more...a time before Tanu rani.

Asad walks into his room and notices a box wrapped in green and black wrapper...and smirked. Yeh kya? Opened it and found a white button down shirt with a note. Yes Asad...
Meet me where the stars fell...*flashback to the time he had really felt a feeling in his heart*

When Asad got there he noticed that there was a blanket and a picnic Basket...and four red candles at each corner of the blanket..and flower petals spread across the blanket.

Asad:Zoya? Where r u?
Zoya walks out behind him in a red saree and his jaw drops


Zoya: I'm here...

Asad: voh...um...hi

Zoya: hi...Mr.Khan...tum ko pata...tonight I was...planning this...well Phupi helped..but after Tanveer and stuff I figured you had more important things...but I figured...I should...I don't know what I'm saying...

Asad comes over and puts his finger of her lip and says "shhh"

*suddenly a giggle comes from the bushes and out walks Najma and Dilshaad*: uhhh we were just going... And Dilshaad winks at Asad

Asad looks embarrassed... And Zoya giggles

Zoya: you blush more than a girl...Mr.Khan...so Haan where were we before?

Asad: maatlab?

Zoya: you asked me something and I didn't really get to answer u properly can we have a do over?

Asad: yes yes we can.

Zoya: Mr.Khan wait two more minutes please !

Asad: kya? Kyun?

Zoya takes his hand and they walk to the edge and sit on the bench. Zoya rests her head on his shoulder and points up. : remember Mr.Khan that time when we hated one another and I had wished something for you and you had wished something for me?

Asad: it all came true :O

Zoya and Asad stand up

Asad gets down on both knees: Zoya, today with the moon, sky and stars as our witness I want to ask you a question...will you not just marry me? But stick with me thru thick and thin. Love me forever? Let me love you forever?

Zoya gets down on both her knees: Yes only if you promise me something from today: will you Asas Akdu...I mean Asad Ahmed Khan promise to love me forever, trust me when I say something, and take care of me and let me take care of you forever?

Asad-Zoya: forever <3
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Super amazing! Loved the way zoya had arranged everything for their night out...I enjoyed it a lot!
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Awesome!!!!!!! Lmfao. Mashallah n masala chai.
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This is just what I want to happen ! Throw me some comments, Chappals whatever !

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