I love you Zoya...Short Story (PART 5; PAGE 6)

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PART 1: PAGE 1

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PART3:PAGE 3

PART 4:PAGE 4

PART 5:PAGE 6

PART ONE!


With all the anticipation of tomorrow's episode I feel like letting my imagination get the best of me

Mera Ishq da Rang
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Asad sitting outside in the yard just looking out into the darkness with a dim light shining almost beyond his vision...but he could still see the light...so close yet so far
Darkness is what his life felt like before, empty, cold...but now he felt differently . He felt like maybe if he just stretched his arm out a bit he could feel the light...it's warmth and maybe even see it even closer.
That's what Zoya was to him, a light. A source of warmth and brightness. Zoya he whispered softly...i i i

Just then he felt a hand on his shoulder...and thought she finally came

Asad: "Ms.Farooqi leave me alone...I'm not in the mood for bakwas"

Girl: "Jammy? It's me Tanveer"

Asad: "Sorry! Tannu, I thought that it was Ms.Farooqi..."

Tanveer: "Jammy it's okay...I just saw you sitting out here and wanted to know what was wrong?"

Asad: "Kuch nahi, how are u feeling?"

Tanveer places her hand on Asads shoulder and says: I'm good, thank you for taking such good care of me Jammy

Meanwhile Zoya watches everything from the window pissed as ever

Zoya mumbles to herself: what does she think of herself, "oh jammy, oh tannu...jammy would you like some jam on ur jam neh neh neh." Uuuf Mr. Khan is in so much trouble !

Asad and Tanveer get up and Tanveer notices Zoya watching and pretends to trip and Asad helps her up and walks her inside just then he notices a beautiful figure cloaked in white and smirks

Next day at the breakfast Table

Asad and Najma are sitting down while Tanveer kaam wali makes breakfast and Zoya walks in and takes her seat next to Asad, he smiles at her and she glares at him

Dilshaad enters

Dilshaad: Zoya, what color do you think would suit Asad for the Sangeet?

Zoya: Black and silver (escaped her mouth quickly) mere maatlab phuphi didn't I tell you to ask Tanveer? She knows Asad...matlab mr.khan better and she knows his likes and dislikes better hain na Mr.Khan

Asad: Ammi...whatever you want is fine with me

Tanveer: Khala I think green and silver would suit Jammy
More

Dilshaad: Nahi, what my Bahu wants is what Asad will wear...Zoya neh kaha Black aur Silver and black and silver it will be. *winks at zoya*

Zoya smiles, Asad smirks, and Tanveer just looks pissed



Next room-Dilshaad and Zoya

Dilu: Zoya, this is your Sangeet dress handing her a black and silver anarkali with pink accents

Zoya: phuphi this is beautiful !!

Dilu: now you and ur Dulha can match

Zoya blushes and leaves with her clothing, and bumps into Asad and the dupatta falls on her head

Asad: Mashallah

Zoya: what?!

Asad: Maine kaha, masala...masala chai chahiye...

Zoya: whatever, rolls her eyes and walks off


The next night, Asad found himself sitting on the same bench staring at the same light

Asad thinking: why hasn't she come with my coffee? Okay okay coffee isn't my greatest concern...I just want to spend some time with my soon to be wife...WAIT what am I thinking . This nikaah is fake...but...what if it was real...then what...

Just then he saw steam coming out from a cup and smelled the darkness of the coffee , Ms.Farooqi?

Zoya: Haan...you know what Mr.Khan...I can't sleep

Asad: why not? Trying to figure out new ways to torture me ?

Zoya: ...no...it's just the Sangeet and phuphi...and I don't know...Mr.Khan I know it's all fake...and we're doing this for Phuphi...but I don't know

Asad: huh? What are you saying

Zoya: I mean what if...we're not doing anything good for her...I mean this whole fake nikaah...what's going to happen when we tell her it's all fake...Mr.khan...

Asad: ...

Zoya: hello, earth to jahanpana!

Asad: woh...Zoya...what if it wasn't fake?

Zoya: what do you mean? We've said this time after time it's fake

Asad: I mean...what if it was a real nikaah with real ceremonies and real...

Zoya: real what?

Asad: Kuch nahi, it's stupid

Zoya angry: Mr.khan! This is your problem! You never want to discuss anything with me. You rather discuss everything with others like Tanveer!! For gods sake Mr.Khan in a few days I'm going to be your ...

Asad: my wife...


Zoya: I'm sorry...I didn't mean to come off like that...

Asad: it's okay...Zoya...I have to tell you something

Dilshaad: Mr and and Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan get inside right now ! I have something to tell you both

Asad: Ji Ammi

Zoya: theek hai phuphi

Dilshaad: Tum dono nahi mil sakta, after tomorrow until the nikaah . It's tradition so Asad, Zoya say your goodbyes till later

Zoya and Asad eye lock: Bye<font size="6">PART 1</font>Part 1
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Mashallah & masala chai LMAO continue soon :D
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PART 2


*Zoya laying down in her room listening to her iPod*

Zoya singing:" lalalala ho Gaye re, paani Da...uufff Teri adaaa, tumhiii ho"

Zoya thinking: I wonder what Mr.Khan wanted to tell me today...he looked serious and what was he going on about what if? Just then she gets a call on her iPad from her jeeju

Jeeju: Zoya?! Asalam-Wale-Kum.

Zoya: Wale-Kum-a-Salam jeeju, vaah Ji vaah...you finally remember your saali

Jeeju: well I don't think you should be talking, what's all this we hear about your nikaah and everything?!

Zoya:...voh...jeeju...where's aapi...does she know??

Jeeju: uh of course as a matter a fact she's almost there...

Zoya: KYA?! Allah-Hafiz jeeju I have to go. MR.KHAN!!!!!!

(Zoya runs into his room and crashes right into him knocking him to the floor- AsYa awkward moment Nd both try getting up but keep falling back)

Asad: yeh kya batameezi Ms.Farooki, didn't Ammi say we can't meet?!

Zoya: this is urgent mr.akdu Ahmed khan.. My aapi is on her way

Asad: KYA?!

Zoya: Haan

Doorbell rings

Zoya-Asad: oh shit.

Zeenat Aapi: ZOYA?! Zoya!! Tum kahan ho?

Dilshaad: Zeenat? What are you doing here?

Zeenat: Haan Haan, you would want to know Dilshaad Bi, I leave my sister with you as a caretaker and you hurriedly and secretly try to marry her to your son...yeh kya hai DILSHAAD bi?

Zoya: aapi...rukho...stop please this has nothing to do with phuphi.

Zeenat: Zoya chup raho. *goes up to Asad* what is this Asad? Are you and Zoya really getting married

Zoya: nahin, this is all fake..

Asad: nahin Zoya chup, Aapi all this is real...Zoya and I want to get married

Zoya:...

Zeenat smiles: Zoya, I am deeply upset that you fell in love and decided to get married BUT after seeing the love in Asad's eyes for you and seeing that Zoya Farooki, that Zoya Farooki that never wanted to get married by force and wants love, has chosen to finally get married I give in. LETS GET TO PLANNING DILSHAAD BI! Mere behen ki nikaah

Dilshaad and Zeenat leave, only Asad and Zoya left

Zoya: Mr.Khan?

Asad: Haan?

Zoya: is this all real?

Asad: *yawns* Ms.Farooki, mere paas time nahin hain for your bakwas questions good night *turns around and smiles and walks off*

Zoya: Hmmph, Akdu. *smiles*



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PART THREE!


Zeenat plans a huge function for Asad and Zoya's nikaah. Its more of a sangeet type thing i guess.
Where everyone is in attendance. And Ayaan and Humeira come along too.

Zeenat: ZOYA?! Are u ready yet?

Zoya: HAAN, aapi.
*zeenat chokes up and begins crying*

Zeenat: Yah Allah, is this my Zoya? My choti, natakati Zoya? So beautiful, all decked up.

Zoya: aapi, stopp...*laughs and blushes*

Zeenat: hain, Nazar na laag jaye tumhari mohabbat ko. Yeh hai Teri aapi ki dua. *kisses Zoya on her forehead and both hug*

Dilshaad knocks and enters

Dilshaad: kya hua? Why are u both crying?

Zoya-Zeenat: nothinggg...just a sister moment

Asad looks for Dilshaad and ends up at Zoya's room door and looks in and sees Zoya and just gets lost in her beauty.

Asad: 😳

Zoya notices him.

Zoya: Phupi someone's at the door looking for you

Dilshaad: Asad tum, aao tumhara dulhaan dekho. Isn't she a beauty?

Asad: Ammi...kya

Aapi: kya Ammi kya. *laughs and pinches Asad cheeks*

Dilu and Zeenat signal each other to give the couple a moment

Dilshaad: Najma? Najma ? Tum kaho ho. Zeenat aao meri Saath. I want to see if the flowers are set perfectly.

Aapi: ji

Asad and Zoya look away from one another nervously.

Zoya-Asad: kya?
Zoya-Asad: Huh?

Zoya: huh? I thought u said something...mr.Khan you were saying something yesterday?

Asad: Haan, voh actually...um ms.farooqi...matlab Zoya
Zoya thinking: he called me Zoya...he only calls me Zoya when theirs something going on...oh no

Asad: Voh actually I wanted to tell you something important...you know...we've known each other for a while and voh. And we're supposed to get married...

Zoya: stop Mr.Khan, I know what u want to tell me and I get it

Asad: um...what? You do?

Zoya: Haan, you consider this to be nakli, blah blah blah.

Asad: NO ZOYA...no...

Zoya: no? What no?

Asad: ugh. Ms...ZOYA. If you could shut up for just a minute and let me speak.

Dilshaad comes back: Ahem...come on we have to go the function is starting

Zoya looks at Asad in a questioning yet angered manner

And Asad looks upset

The function begins.

Zoya's aapi sings for them...mai ni Mai (from hum aapke hain koun) and Najma and Dilshaad joins

Then Ayaan and Humeira dance to mehendi Laga ki rakhna (DDLJ)

Then comes Asad and Zoya's dance; to ishaaqzaade. And they get real close during the dance and Asad whispers Zoya in her ear and Zoya breaks out of a trance. And he whispers I LOVE YOU. Zoya's face becomes red and she's in shock and their eyes meet for just a few moments.
Everyone claps! And their trance breaks. And their on different ends of the room and Zoya just has this questioning look on and Asad tries to avoid her !

They finally come face to face again and Zoya is confused

Zoya: Mr.Khan...

Asad: Ms.Farooqi...kya chahiye?

Zoya: what did u say to me...?

Asad: huh? I didn't say anything

Zoya: Mr.KHAN! You said something on the dance floor...

Asad: no idea what ur talking about...

Zoya: ASAD AHMED KHAN...!!!! This is what I keep saying. YOU ARE EMOTIONALLY CHALLENGED AND A COWARD. You are afraid of ur feelings...I'm leaving now...this nikaah is nakli for you well this is it good bye forever...Zoya runs away in years

Asad: ZOYA! Zoya! ZOYA WAIT.

Zoya: WHAT MR.KHAN

ASAD: I have something to say to you

Zoya: what? That I'm a troublemaker...horrible person, devil?!

Asad: yes. You are a troublemaker. A misfit. A little devilish at times...but ur mine...you are the perfect misfit to my fit and (gets down on one knee) and says Zoya Farooqi, will you keep torturing me for the rest of my life and my wife?

...to be continued

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