{|AsYa| TS: Under The Rain} LAST PART PAGE 14!

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aditiarora

@aditiarora

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

its so nicely written...😊

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Faizaaa????
Can I kill u? Strangle u? Shit man! I mean my first ever read story on Asya! N u did this to me? Not at all liking the end! I desperately need another update...! I would have preffered the other end more thn this one! I dont like this end! N now u have to give another part be it part 3 or epi but with a proper ending else u sooo dead! :(

wooopppsss so Zoya n Asad face off was awesome well written expressiona and words! Just loved how you porteyed Zoya's state in words! And then the final blow when Asad took Zoya to her house and the emotional flow! Just loved each and every word of the update

but defo not the end! I need a proper end now!

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lDirectionerl

@lDirectionerl

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

GOODNESS! This update literally brought tears to my eyes!

You made me emotional yaar! *sniffs* *dabs eye with tissue*

I would say that this was the best-est update of any of your stories yet (for the ones I've read 😛)

I would give you one teeny-meeny suggestions, why don't you turn this into a SS or a FF?

I would love to read the whole story! (And not only me, I know every one of your readers would love to! 😉)

In the end I would say I loved your update! Gosh you're really talented man! 😃

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betelgeuse

@betelgeuse

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Your writing is pretty good. The first part was really like a fairy tale, it had a magic. I didn't want it to have another part cause it was prefect as it was. The second part is well written as well but the story seems incomplete now.

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mpreeetkaur

@mpreeetkaur

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

I need to know what happens to Asad. Does he end up winning the war? This TS needs an epilogue.

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radhika

@Radhika_ksgian

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Loved the first part ... as an OS it was juzzz perfecttt.. n as a TS .. the second part is vry well written..bt den it needs to b complete .. like hw he vl win d war.. bt it was great