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@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Very well written. Loved the concept. :D

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..vidhi..

@..vidhi..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

it was beautiful faiza!!!!
but u know i felt the first part was complete in itself but after reading this part i am craving for more...please give it a proper ending...pleasee!!!

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viya

@viya.mallik4eva

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

This is one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read. 👍🏼 thanks so much for writing this for us 🤗

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

your os kade me cry literally...you penned down such an amazing story it was overwhelming. it would be so nice if u continue please do cont...but even as a ts it was lovely

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: AnjaliSharma
That was really.. Truly.. Beautiful...
You write beautifully...
Touched my heart. :)

Aww thankyou so much, dear! Means alot to me😳

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: mochhug
Poor Zoya, poor asad. The pain of the one you love not remembering you... Is just unbearable and you've described it so well here. Really. It reminds me of that movie 50 first dates only because of the memory thing. But you've recreated it so much more beautifully. It fits Asya so perfectly. Zoya the fragile but determined flower and Asad the selfless but extremely sensitive and broken Lion. Just too good. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. Epidlogue will definitely NOT BE ENOUGH.
LOVED IT

You know i always await your comments! They make my day! <3

You tell me exactly what you liked or disliked😃

I will try to bring in a longer epilogue with different time interrvals because seriously, continuing this might kill it ! I'm afraid but i wont say i wont try😃

Thankyou sooo much! 🤗

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Epilogue... plzzz i wish for nice ending.. do not separate them

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yashvi

@--Yashvi--

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Loved ur all works..its mindblowing..
Pls add me to ur pm list..
Waiting for more..

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

gah the ending aint happy and so i'm not happy.

arrey arrey dont pout! the OS or rather the TS is beautiful n amazing and always leave me in tears and that's why im not happy cuz i'm literally crying

plz plz plz make an epilogue! pretty please with a cherry on the top