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Livingfree

@Livingfree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

This was so beautiful. So touching. Loved it. You portray all the emotions brilliantly. Great job 👏

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JJN

@JJyoN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

😭 So sweet yet so sad. Needs a epilogue. Hope Zoya remembers.

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 44

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Beautiful Part 2!!

Waiting for Epilogue! ❤️

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

awesome awesome awsome!! This story is so so emotional! You are just awesome faiza! Thnks a lot 4 d pm!

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Perfect. Oh, Asad.. I hope zoe remembers him soon. You need to put an epilogue.. Please...

Waiting.

Do continue soon!!!

Dee

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

aww it so beautifull...

the bond n love tat asad n zoya share is so beautiful...the emotion tat asad felt was just totally emotional...

it really brilliant...

thx fr the pm...

Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

That was so heart breaking. If you are planning to make this an SS, I would love to read how Zoya falls for Asad again and how Asad finally gets his love !!

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

my heart broken reading it😭zoya doesn't remember him and he is in so much pain...😭

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

beautiful portray of emotions...
thanks for the pm
pls post the epilogue soon...
wanted a happy ending..😉

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

A beautifully written piece once again written by the talented writer ELmoFuj- I can't explain how I felt while reading it

happiness sadness a mix of emotions

I felt the pain of Asad as much as he did

and the confusion and shock of Zoya

Only an amazing writer can make a reader feel the characters in the story and that's what you are.

I enjoyed reading this and lived inside the story while I read it

thank you so much dear

and keep writing because you are a TRUE WRITER

--Dua

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