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Akilla

@Akilla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

eeep, i was all angsty and utterly heartbreaking😭...but at the same time the love was heartwarming😳...i loved it😃...and you are a superbly amazing writer😛...*biggg huggg*👏👏👏

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

It was beautiful, sad, lovely.

I love your writing

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Loved it!! The hope and faith Asad has is just beautiful! So much emotion! Absolutely perfect!

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

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-Anji-

@-Anji-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

That was really.. Truly.. Beautiful...
You write beautifully...
Touched my heart. :)

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Riti

@-Reeti-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Hey really nice.
good job.. 👏👍🏼

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Poor Zoya, poor asad. The pain of the one you love not remembering you... Is just unbearable and you've described it so well here. Really. It reminds me of that movie 50 first dates only because of the memory thing. But you've recreated it so much more beautifully. It fits Asya so perfectly. Zoya the fragile but determined flower and Asad the selfless but extremely sensitive and broken Lion. Just too good. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. Epidlogue will definitely NOT BE ENOUGH.

LOVED IT

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Heyyy

OMG!!! this was so cute and yet heart wrenching!

your writing is absolutely beautiful

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crazzychips

@crazzychips

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

BEAUTIFUL!!!
i have no words to describe how beautifull this is . you describe everything so beautifully .poor asad & zoya they are seperated by fate but bound by love .loved it .you should definitely continue . an epilouge will definitely not enough
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE
thanks for the pm dear