Asya S.S. Irresistible! CH. 5 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zoya was writing a story ( which is chapter 1 )
And she made up all those characters ( dilshaad tanu asad except for Najma ) Najma is her friend and she's writing a story... It's in a story that Asad proposes Zoya
She doesn't know who's Asad dilshaad or Tanu
Edited by Aileen134 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nyc start... Lvng it... Pm me next tym...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Wow
Part 2 changed d story fully
Gr8 start
Pm me plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Omg...dats quiet interesting...
Very nice concept👏
N ya thnx fr d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Hey guys :)
( Asad's character is completely different in this story )
Thank you for your lovely comments for the pervious update <3
irresistible (3) - Closer and Closer
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Zoya went to the library and returned her books
Librarian : You still have one more book to return, could you return that book before4:00 p.m. today?
Zoya : Wait I - Um... Okay
Zoya kept trying to remember where's her book. After a few minutes. she fiinally remmebered that she accidentally gave it to Asad when she was giving him back his book.
Zoya : I'll just look for him later... Najma is waiting too
She went to the cafeteria and noticed Najma smiling sweetly at someone ( she turned a bit and saw a guy ) It was Zain, Zoya knew that Najma would hate her for the rest of her life if she'll disturb their so called little conversation so she left without hesitation. Zoya was just walking around the college and listening to songs. Suddenly she tripped over and fell into someone's arms. It was Asad Ahmad Khan, she couldn't stop looking st him... She was lost in his eyes.
Asad : Zoya?
Zoya : oh.. Yeah anyways what a coincidence hun
Asad : Is it really coincidence? Or are you purposely ... You know that's what you do after you see a guy like me.
Zoya : Woah Woah! Are you flirting?
Asad : ahaan?
Zoya : wahtever
Asad : i'm just kidding
Zoya : Oh thank god you're here
Asad : why? You're missing me already?
Zoya : why weren't you like this the first time I met you?
Asad : girls easily fall in love with guys that are innocent
Zoya : so you were trying to be innocent? and oh you wanted me to fall for you?
Asad : oh Uhm..anyways I proposed You? When?
Zoya : what?
Asad : it's written on this paper and you left this in your book.
Zoya : oh it's my story for the coming drama competition.
Asad : well then We should be the main characters?
Zoya : no no you should be Maryam OH shit!
Asad : what happened?
Zoya : I wrote 'Maryam escaped on her wedding!'
Asad : So?
Zoya : What would professor MARYAM think?
Asad : hahahahhaha he couldn't stop laughing... Professor MARYAM
Zoya : What should I do? Agh
Asad : just get it back from her
Zoya : no she said today's the deadline... We cannot get it back once we're done with it. She said so.
Asad : I have a plan
Zoya : go ahead
*They both agreed to what Asad's plan was*

*knock knock*
Professor Maryam : Come in
Asad : Ma'am someone told me about the story selection day and I want to write a story, could you change the deadline please?
PM : Well, since you've just decided to write the storyi'll give you more time...
Asad : thanks ma'am
*knock knock*
PM : come in
Zoya : Ma'am I have to make some changes in my story can I ? I will give it to you before4:00 p.m., I promise...
PM : it's okay, you can give it to me tomorrow.
Zoya : thank you ma'am
PM : Could you help this student too?
Zoya smiled at Asad and replied : sure!
Asad smiled back and replied : Nice to meet you :)
*They both left*
As they both left PM's room, Zoya hugged Asad!

Zoya's POV :
I could feel the warmness of his body when I hugged him. My heart was beating. *bum bum bum*

Asad's POV :
I loved the way she hugged me, her hands around my neck. I could hear her heartbeats. I wrapped my arms around her.

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That's it!
How was it?
Pls comment ^^
Hit like! ( 20 at least )
Thnx
Chapter (4) - Page 7

Edited by Aileen134 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Read all 3 in one go :) please continue :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
aww!! so sweet!!
i cant wait for the next part :P
pm me sissy :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
that's sooo sweet yaar very nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
lovely update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
WWOOOWW 👍🏼👍🏼

LOVE the Concept !!! its really Different then other Stories !!! <3

love this Asad so mcuhhh :)

please update soon !!!


Love
Sophia <3

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