Asya S.S. Irresistible! CH. 5 updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, this is my first time writing a S.S. so if there's any mistake sorry ( Oh and Tanu's excuse is kind of stupid but I couldn't think of any other so yeah... )
Hope you'll like it! :)
(P.S. You have to watch Qubool Hai 7th May's episode or else you won't understand what's going on)
Chapter ( 1 ) - Confession ~ page 1
Chapter (2) - Coincidence ~ page 2
Chapter (3) - Closer and Closer ~ page 4
Chapter (4) - god-gifted misunderstanding ~ page 7
Chapter (5) - In love ~ page 10
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Zoya was dejected and she couldn't stop crying because of those nasty words Asad said. That niight just passed like this. Zoya crying...

*Breakfast time*
Zoya : Najma hummein water de do please
Asad and Najma both picks up the glass of water to give it to Zoya but Zoya simply ignored Asad and she took the glass of water from Najma and said thank you Mr. Khan placed it on the table back as he had no choice.
*In the room*
Asad and Tanu were talking while Zoya came holding her iPad
Zoya : Mr. Khan meine ap ko kaha tha na meine sahi blood lia tha and mere paas proof bhi hai, yeh dekho
Asad takes Zoya's iPad from her.
Asad was shocked and Tanu got more worried by seeing the look on Mr. Khan's face.
Mr Khan and Zoya both look at Tanu...
Asad : Tanu, Ap ne blood kyun change kiya?
Tanu : Jammy woh ... Hum ...
Zoya : haan?
Tanu : woh actually hum blood ko dekh kar gabra jaatay hai toh humne box ko khola toh blood dekh lia toh change kar diya
Zoya : but ap ne jo blood replace kiyamwoh bhi toh blood haina?
Tanu : nai human blood se...
Zoya : And ap ko kaise pata chala woh human ka blood tha?
Tanu : woh hummein laga human blood tha toh change kar diya.
Asad : Miss. Farooqui ap itne questions kyun pooch rahi hai?
Zoya just ignored him
Asad : Tanu go and have some rest
Tanu : okay Jammy
*Tanu leaves*
Zoya was going back to her room when she heard Mr. Khan say :
Asad : Miss. Farooqui ap hummein ignore kyun kar rahi hain?
Zoya : let me go
Asad : Is it because of what I said last time?
*Zoya didnt reply back*
Asad : I'm sorry Miss. Farooqui, I misunderstood you
* She turns back to face Mr. Khan*
Zoya : Mr. Khan ap ko sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Since mere liye rishte kuch mainay hee nahi rakhte toh let this misunderstanding continue!
Asad : Miss. Farooqui...
Before Asad could say something more rather than 'Miss. Farooqui'
Zoya : Mr. Khan ap ko kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai ! Is se hummein itna bhi pata chal gaya ap hummein kitna trust karte hai! Last time mein gai thi Ayaan ki sagaai ko sirf ap ki waja se, and in the end ap ko yeh laga ke humne us FOOD mein kuch daala!!! Ap ne hummein ghar se bhi nikaal diya! Oh yeah iss se pehle ke ap hummein iss baar ghar se nikaal de mein hud hee chali jaati hoon!
Asad : Miss Farooqui -
Zoya : And mujhe rokhne ki koshish bhi nai karna agar ap ko yahi karna hai future mein mere saath after asking me to stay!
Asad : Miss Farooqui suno toh -
Zoya : nai sun na mujhe! Just leave me alone! Ap ko daante ke bina kuch -
Asad : Zoya!! I love you!
zoya kept quiet for 5 minutes after she heard those 3 words that Asad said!
Asad : Zoya ... I love you...
Zoya : W-w-what? Mr. Khan ap pagal hain! Who the heck in this world iss tareeqay se baat karay ge woh bhi us se jis se woh pyaar karta ho?
Asad : Zoya agar mein ap se pyaar nahi karta toh ap ko bachanay nahi jaata jab Akram ap se forcefully shaadi karna chahte tha, Ap ko rukhne ke liye nai kehta agar mein ap se pyaar nahi karta, mein ap ko gundo se bachata nahi even though ap kisi aur ki jaga shaadi ke din beht gai agar mein ap se pyaar nahi karta, mein ap ke peechay baag ke nahi jaata and ap ko ring pehnata agar ap se pyaar nahi karta...
Asad : Zoya ...
He sits on the floor with Zoya's hands in his hands. His knees touching the floor.
Asad : I love you ...
Zoya was almost in tears when those words reached her heart!
Zoya : I love you too
Asad was quite relaxed when he heard those 4 words from zoya's mouth.
Asad stands up while holding zoya's hand, both of them looking into each other's eyes.
Asad and Zoya both felt interfered when they heard someone saying 'ahem'
Zoya turned back to see who it was as she wasn't facing the door anyway.
She truned back and sees Pupphi and Najma smiling and teasing Zoya.
Dilshaad : Humne kaha tha na ap dono ek doosre ke liye hee banay ho!
Najma : bhaijaan ap toh wow! Im speechless! Ap ko meine itna romantic khabi nai dekha! Zoya! Ap ne toh humare bhaijaan ko aise change kar diya ke i'm wah wah
Asad : Shut up Zoya and Amii, Najma ap log yahan kia kar rahay hai?
Dilshaad : kyun? Torri dehr aur rehna hai Zoya ke saath? AKELA?!
Asad : Ammi ..
Zoya : Uh... Hmmm mein chalti hu good night (while blushing )
Najma : oh aww Zoya you're blushing, and mein bhi aati hu story suni hai hummein bhi :P
* Zoya and Najma leaves the room *
Dilshaad : Hummein pata tha ap Zoya se pyaar karte ho
Asad : Ammi... woh... meri kal important meeting hai toh .. good night...
Dilshaad : acha good night
*Dilshaad leaves*


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That's it peeps!
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Pls comment ^^



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Irresistible Chapter (2)
~ (Conincedence) ~

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Zoya : How I wish I could add more romantic scenes, but I think I should remove the scene where Dilshaad comes maybe? InshaAllah everyone would love this story.
She was trying to write more but she was interrupted when she heard someone saying : Zoya! Come quickly I gotta read the story!
Zoya : ok wait a minute...
*Zoya goes to That girl*
There was a girl who was chubby with brown watery eyes which were attractive to boys, her hair almost covered her waist, she was wearing a 3 layered white and blue dress.
Zoya : Najma! Guess what? I wrote this part where Asad proposes Zoya! And oh you're Asad's sister in the story and your name is Najma!
Najma : Really? How? When? Did they kiss?
Zoya : Well of course they didn't kiss, Professor Maryam wouldn't allow
*Najma reads the part where Asad proposes Zoya*
Najma : Aww how I wish there was someone like Asad who would confess his feelings this way to me!
Zoya : same here! Anyways let's continue writing the story and give it to Professor Maryam.
Najma : okay
* They continued writing the story and gave it to Professor Maryam after finishing it*
Zoya : Ma'am We're done with our story when can we knowmp if our story's chosen or not?
PM : After two days which means on Tuesday
Zoya : oh thanks ma'am
*Zoya and Najma left*
Najma : Zoya I can't wait! omg I hope everyone would like our story
Zoya : hopefully they will and wait let me go to the library and return these books, Wait for me in the cafeteria
Najma : okay cya
Zoya was heading towards the library when she bumped into a guy and he dropped all his books.
Zoya : I'm sorry..
Zoya was helping that guy pick up his books BUT she stopped when she saw something.
She couldn't believe her eyes! It was written 'Asad Ahmad Khan', it was exactly the same name she used in the story for their drama competition. Zoya looked up immediately, the first thing she was those watery green eyes. She was lost in his eyes.
Zoya's POV :
I stood up and saw those watery green eyes,those eyes had something in them but I didn't cared at all as I was totally lost in his eyes. Then I saw him, his face... and then his body!He was hot, I felt like he was meant for me!( after I came to know his name was Asad Ahmad Khan )
Asad's POV :
That girl was beau-ti-ful! I glanced at her and saw her picking up my books for me, she had straight hair which were covering half of her face, she had beautiful eyes and her lips were perfect, Well I wasn't thinking of ... You know.. But without hesitation I would say I would kiss her if I could, wait what? What am I thinking? Stop it Asad!

Zoya stood up and apologised
Zoya : so-sorry
Asad : it-it-it's okay?
Zoya : why are you stuttering?
Asad : Coz yo-you were stuttering
Zoya : Ha.. Anyways are you a new student?
Asad : yup, how do you know?
Zoya : oh I've never seen you before so yeah...
Asad : Oh...anyways, what's your name?
Zoya : Zoya - Zoya Farooqui and you are Asad Ahmad Khan right?
Asad : yup, how do you know?
Zoya : it's written on your book
Asad : Oh ...
Zoya : so ... see you
Asad : InShaAllah :)
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That's it peeps!
How is it?
Sorry it was short.
I will try to make chapter 3 longer :)
Pls comment ^^
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Edited by Aileen134 - 12 years ago
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PLEASE CONTINU NEXT PART SOON
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Hey guys thanks for your lovely comments =) ( ah this face is scary!)
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I'm confused!

Is it not a continuation??? 😕

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