Asya S.S. Irresistible! CH. 5 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
oh my!!! uff i cant wait for the update!!!!
please continue soon..
cant wait foh tha kisss!!))
pm me when update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
ya... plz update... update... update.. update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Great update...pls update soon and pm me pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

lovin it! 😊 grt story..keep going!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
first i am really SORRY for commenting late !😭

OoOH MYYY GOoOD !😲

they are sooo damn cute like really really cute <3

ekkksss Zain and Asad are brothers :) love their bonding !! ummm they both fall for two friends
( zoya and najma)

awww Najma loves Zain but didn't tell him yet :( and she even writes latter
to him ( she really really loves him alot isnt it ??)

heheh Asad got kicked out of class on his first day🤣 (thats bad) !

zoya and Asad HUGGG❤️

OH MY GODNESS the Precap !😲😲😲

He ask her to "KISS" him (he ask her but i felt like he ask me)*Blushing*

please update soon :)
cant wait for it <3

Sophia <3
phia
Edited by sarun314 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Dedicated to Linsie and Sarun314
( for giving me such sweet and long comments and brightening my day <3 )
Here is it
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Chapter ( 5 ) - In love

*Asad & Zain finished talking*

Zain : So, Babbi! how did you started liking my brother? He's so unlikable
Asad : Zainnn! *He pinched him*
Zain : i'm sowwiiee
Najma : Yeah how about you jiju?
Zain : did you guys know each other before Asad came to Bopal?
Najma : Yeah, and how did you propose Zoya?
Zain : I bet it's not even a bit romantic!
Zoya : we're not -
Najma : c'mon not again, look at how honest I am :P I let everyone know who my bestfriend is even though it's THAT embarassing
*She giggled *
Zoya : Najmaaa!!!
Zain : tamatar's right yanno *He wink'd at Najma*
Asad : No, she's not right! wait tamatar?
Zain : ahan? *he raised his eyebrow*
Asad : No I mean -
Najma : it's okay I get it I get it
*She smiled*
Zain : anyways , you guys continue, Najma and I hab smth to do in the library
Najma : really?
*Zain grabbed her hand and left*
Najma : where are we going?
Zain : Sshh, they need some time alone
Najma : Oh I see...
Zain : Tamatar?
Najma : hmm?
Zain : I've made a name for Asad and Zoya, which is ... 'Asya'
Najma : Aw! That's sweet
*They were looking at each and every single action of Asya but were interrupted when someone patted their back*
*They turned and saw someone ... She seemed familiar*

It was Hafza! She was the most popular girl in their school and the most beautiful too! Each and every single guy loved her except Zain! She had long hair which were red-brownish and she had green eyes. She stood there wearing a red,pink and white dress.

Hafza : Yo!
Zain : Yo' vass up?
Hafza : OMG! guess what happened?
Zain & Najma : what?
Hafza : Professor Maryam has chosen Zoya's story!
Najma : Really? * she hugged Hafza happily*
Zain : Guys! I have a plan!
Hafza : what are you talking about?
Najma : yeah Zain?
Zain : Hafza ... Would you help us with something?
Hafza : Sure! *She smiled*
*After a few minutes*
Zain : Good luck Najma
Hafza : Gd Luck frm me too
Najma : thanks
* knock knock*
PM : come in
*Najma enters*
Najma : Ma'am actually I have to tell you something about the story which you chose, Um, Z-Z-oya is busy so she asked me to tell you that she was not the only one who wrote the story, Asad helped her too
PM : and?
Najma : and she said it's better if the main characters in the story are Asad and Zoya themselves as they have a better understanding of how the characters behave etc.
PM : oh yeah! They're perfect for this role
Najam : yeah ma'am I shall take your leave now bye
*Najma left*
Najma : congratulations! Plan A successful! Now plan 2 starts! Omg I was nervous
Zain : it's okay i'm here
*Najma blushed and Zain smiled*
Hafza : Guy! Group hug!
*Zain, Hafza and Najma hugg'd each other*
Zain : okay so plan B is ... hafza will ... Asad .. Zoya will
*They finished discussing the plan*
Zain : okay it's my turn now
Najma & Hafza : Good Luck
Zain : na no need ;) Yanno I'm just that good
*He went up to Asad and Zoya*
Zain : ZOYA!!!!
Zoya : what?
Zain : Professor Maryam chose your story!
Zoya : Really??? Omg i'm so happy!! Are you kidding me?
Zain : yesh!!!
*She got up and hugg'd Zain*
Zain : Congratulations
Asad : What about me?
Zoya hugg'd Asad and whispered : Thank you Asad <3
Asad whispered back : ur welcome Zoya :) <3
Zain : 'ahem'
Zoya : oh um...
Zain : im leaving .. Bye
Zoya : Bye'
*Zain left*
Asad : Zoya
Zoya : Jii?
Asad : if it was written 'Maryam escaped from her wedding', Professor Maryam would have not chosen your story yanno ...
Zoya : I know, thanks to you that you -
Asad : Nah Nah! Not like this, you have to do something special
Zoya : what do you mean?
Asad : kiss me
Zoya : W-W-what?
Asad : kiss me?
Zoya : U-Umm... Asad ... I ... Me ... You ..
Asad : just kidding
Zoya : Iya' I was like .. Ah leave it *She smiled
As she smiled, she felt something soft touched her Cheek? Or ...OH!' Asad! Asad kiss'd her just now! Did he ...?

Asad's POV :
I couldn't control myself, her dimples when she smiles, she looks cute, I kissed her dimple gently and sweetly ... I could feel the shape of her dimples. How I wish I would've captured this scene in my mind and replayed it again and again!

Asad to Zoya : Nice dimples Zoya *He whispered in her ear and left*
Zoya ( thinking ) : He just kiss'd me! :o his lips ... Sweet... Wait Zoya No No

*On the other side*
Zain : done!
Najma : Aw the way Asad kiss'd Zoya! Thank god you've took a pic!
Hafza : I know right! They look cute together! I ship 'em
Zain : anyways let's go! We've got more plans!

*Zain, Najma and Hafza left*
*After school*
Najma & Zoya : Bye Zain Bye Asad!
Asad and Zain : bye
* Zain+Asad's room*
Zain : Asad can I ask you something
Asad : Hmm
Zain : You love Zoya right?
Asad : What?
Zain : DO YOU LOVE ZOYA?
Asad : No... I mean she's just my friend
Zain : then why did you kiss Zoya?
Asad : What ? Wait what? Kiss? You saw me kissing Zoya?
Zain : Yeah, we could hear the kissy sound ! mwah mwah mwah
Asad : Stop it Chotu eek... >.<
Zain : Mwah mwah mwah
Asad : once more and i'm gonna kill you Chotu
Asad slapped Zain's butt and threw a pillow at him, Zain didnt got hit so Asad kept on trying his best to HIT Zain with a pillow!
Zain : Auu Bhai' stop it puchka tuch tuch tuch anyways mwah here's a kiss for you mwahhh *He want nearer and nearer*
Asad : Ew ew go away *kicks Zain*
Zain : Wah u kissed Zoya and now ur not letting me kiss you wa wa wa *le cries*
Asad : Chotu!!!!! World War III is in progress! Puchkian duchkian
Zain : Bhai stop stop stop.. Haha ... Ouchh
Asad : okay i'm hungry, let's go and eat something
Zain : Bhai we had dinner just now
Asad : Iya! Leave it i'll go by myself
Zain : No no bring something for me too
Asad ( thinking ) : Even Bhai noticed that... How can I tell him that Zoya reminds me of HER.
*Next day*
*Morning*
Zoya : H-H-Hi Asad ...
Asad : U-umm Hi... Yesterday I -
Zoya : Oh no no what happened yesterday... It's totally okay
Asad : What? Totally okay?
Zoya : Huh? No no no I mean uh... Umm... It's
Zain : Zoya? What's wrong? what's up with this uh um oh ey?
Asad : Nothing mind your own business
Zain : Oh is it about - he stopped and look'd at Asad and then said :
Mwah ?
Zoya : What?
Asad : Oh Zoya ... Um... Oh! -
Zain : he kiss'd his teddy bear yesterday
Asad : WHAT? Teddy bear?
Zain : Yes, that teddy bear is his favourite one * Asad then realiz'd that wht Zain meant was ZOYA ! As his bear!*
Zoya : Teddy bear? He kiss'd his teddy bear? *She bursted out laughing*
Najma : why are you guys laughing so much? Anyways... Zoya and Asad! Professor Maryam said that you guys are going to act like Asad and Zoya from the story...
Zoya : WHAT?
Asad : Really? Are you serious?
Zoya ( thinking ) : But in the story Asad'll kiss Zoya! And and... I didn't tell Najma bout this... Coz I thought of giving her a surprise :O I thought she would act as Zoya and Zain would act as Asad :O Freak man!
Zoya : NO!

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Hey guys :)
How was it?
I know it wasnt that good, I wanted to fix this ... But some of you guys asked me to update so ...
Anyways pls comment
And Hit like
Thanks
cya <3
Edited by Aileen134 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sarun314

first i am really SORRY for commenting late !😭


OoOH MYYY GOoOD !😲

they are sooo damn cute like really really cute <3

ekkksss Zain and Asad are brothers :) love their bonding !! ummm they both fall for two friends
( zoya and najma)

awww Najma loves Zain but didn't tell him yet :( and she even writes latter
to him ( she really really loves him alot isnt it ??)

heheh Asad got kicked out of class on his first day🤣 (thats bad) !

zoya and Asad HUGGG❤️

OH MY GODNESS the Precap !😲😲😲

He ask her to "KISS" him (he ask her but i felt like he ask me)*Blushing*

please update soon :)
cant wait for it <3

Sophia <3
phia

Thank you for giving me suchhh a looonnggg comment <3333
Thank you very much <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
this is good! continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Ohhh wow! Super nice! Loved it to the core. Especially the kiss! Can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
😃... you need to see my big smile... when i read your update...
thanks... sorry to bug you for the update... hehehehheh

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