{|AsYa| OS: Afterall, It Was Destiny} - Page 5

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

aww its such a beautiful piece...

just love the way asad n zoya confess to each other their love...

it just amazing

luv the story...😊👏

Bore? NO WAY! This was like freaking amazing! 👏
I know I'm getting very repetitive when I say I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. ❤️ U just will have to deal wid being bored of dat statement!
Asad reacted in just the expected way. He only speaks his heart out in the spur of the moment or in anger and pain. Of course seeing Zoya break down was painful enough for him to have confessed and I love Zoya for instigating him to do it. Yup .. her tears and outburst instigated it. Am I sadistic? Wen it leads to such a beautiful confession , I cant help but be just dat.
So it all starts with a perfect yet hollow jashn-e-saugaat that become perfectly complete in every sense with the union of hearts.
Indeed another splendid OS. Cant tell u how much I love reading these pieces of urs. 😳 U dont fail to amaze me with ur awesome writing whether written at 2 AM amidst studying for a looming exam or otherwise. ⭐️
Once Again Best of Luck for the Exam. 🤗 U'll do great!

aww- beautifully written

Originally posted by: nikki.171

Bore? NO WAY! This was like freaking amazing! 👏
I know I'm getting very repetitive when I say I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. ❤️ U just will have to deal wid being bored of dat statement!
Asad reacted in just the expected way. He only speaks his heart out in the spur of the moment or in anger and pain. Of course seeing Zoya break down was painful enough for him to have confessed and I love Zoya for instigating him to do it. Yup .. her tears and outburst instigated it. Am I sadistic? Wen it leads to such a beautiful confession , I cant help but be just dat.
So it all starts with a perfect yet hollow jashn-e-saugaat that become perfectly complete in every sense with the union of hearts.
Indeed another splendid OS. Cant tell u how much I love reading these pieces of urs. 😳 U dont fail to amaze me with ur awesome writing whether written at 2 AM amidst studying for a looming exam or otherwise. ⭐️
Once Again Best of Luck for the Exam. 🤗 U'll do great!

Originally posted by: blueflames

yeah yeah i have your Pm in my inbox, because i opened this thread first and inbox later.

so does it count as me being first to spot the OS..😳

anyways it was damn refreshing after the movie i have just returned from.

the ultimate line was "'Why can't it be real, Asad? Am I that bad?"

its a question of every human, some in search of success, some love and some life... why cant they have their dreams.. why is the way too long and the maanzil far away.

kyn har roz we die and dream again for a better tomorrow, and sometimes despair gets us and we question ourself, m i tht bad, that i dont deserve it...

ok i know i have gone totally off track ...so apologies..

a perfect OS issey kehte hain... 👏

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

OMG IM FREAKIN' OUT HERE!

Why did i not see your comment earlier?!! 😲 😲

Here i was womdering howcome my lovely stalker didnt comment yet! 😆

Awww i couldnr have explained it better myself! 😳 So beautifully said! Not off track, u made me actually think over stuff! Interesting! OS please?😆

Perfect comment issay kehtay hainn 🤗

Originally posted by: blueflames

i have changed colors to a dazzler, my long worn golden coat has been now thrown out and people still dont knw that😆😆

i had read and commented before i saw the PM. pm is still unread in my box, 😳

m in a super DD mode right now, so aise philosophical off track explanations can be seen again again. 😳

aa laag jaa gale 🤗

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Now i know why i didnt notice your comment! 😆

Congrats, sweets im so happy you turned green! But haaw, blueflames is now green! Haha 😆

Hahaha you're super quick man, i cant even explain how i enjoy seeing your comments so quick 😆

Haha DD mode? Ye konsa mode hai? 😆 philosophical-ness is so cool ! Me looovves!

🤗

This was just perfect. I m glad I came across it and read it. Do write more and temme about your work , I love your writing..

Originally posted by: blueflames

thank you so much dear 🤗

m flattered 😆😆

well DD mode is dukhi n disappointed mood. 😳