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@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
aww its such a beautiful piece...
just love the way asad n zoya confess to each other their love...
it just amazing
luv the story...😊👏

Aww thankyouuu! Means alot😳

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Bore? NO WAY! This was like freaking amazing! 👏
I know I'm getting very repetitive when I say I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. ❤️ U just will have to deal wid being bored of dat statement!
Asad reacted in just the expected way. He only speaks his heart out in the spur of the moment or in anger and pain. Of course seeing Zoya break down was painful enough for him to have confessed and I love Zoya for instigating him to do it. Yup .. her tears and outburst instigated it. Am I sadistic? Wen it leads to such a beautiful confession , I cant help but be just dat.
So it all starts with a perfect yet hollow jashn-e-saugaat that become perfectly complete in every sense with the union of hearts.
Indeed another splendid OS. Cant tell u how much I love reading these pieces of urs. 😳 U dont fail to amaze me with ur awesome writing whether written at 2 AM amidst studying for a looming exam or otherwise. ⭐️
Once Again Best of Luck for the Exam. 🤗 U'll do great!

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

aww- beautifully written

so glad they talked (screamed 😉) finally...

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: nikki.171
Bore? NO WAY! This was like freaking amazing! 👏
I know I'm getting very repetitive when I say I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. ❤️ U just will have to deal wid being bored of dat statement!
Asad reacted in just the expected way. He only speaks his heart out in the spur of the moment or in anger and pain. Of course seeing Zoya break down was painful enough for him to have confessed and I love Zoya for instigating him to do it. Yup .. her tears and outburst instigated it. Am I sadistic? Wen it leads to such a beautiful confession , I cant help but be just dat.
So it all starts with a perfect yet hollow jashn-e-saugaat that become perfectly complete in every sense with the union of hearts.
Indeed another splendid OS. Cant tell u how much I love reading these pieces of urs. 😳 U dont fail to amaze me with ur awesome writing whether written at 2 AM amidst studying for a looming exam or otherwise. ⭐️
Once Again Best of Luck for the Exam. 🤗 U'll do great!

You know, the minute i hit 'post', my waiting starts for when you will comment! You always make my day with your comments! 🤗

And i can never get bored of that sentence, puh-lzz 😆

Im sooo glad you liked it! Just something i WANTED to happen, but didnt. :| happened in my OS though 😉

Thankyouuu once again! I'l be needing all the luck! And goodluck to you with yours tooo! 🤗

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: blueflames
yeah yeah i have your Pm in my inbox, because i opened this thread first and inbox later.
so does it count as me being first to spot the OS..😳
anyways it was damn refreshing after the movie i have just returned from.

the ultimate line was "'Why can't it be real, Asad? Am I that bad?"
its a question of every human, some in search of success, some love and some life... why cant they have their dreams.. why is the way too long and the maanzil far away.
kyn har roz we die and dream again for a better tomorrow, and sometimes despair gets us and we question ourself, m i tht bad, that i dont deserve it...

ok i know i have gone totally off track ...so apologies..

a perfect OS issey kehte hain... 👏

OMG IM FREAKIN' OUT HERE!

Why did i not see your comment earlier?!! 😲 😲

Here i was womdering howcome my lovely stalker didnt comment yet! 😆

Awww i couldnr have explained it better myself! 😳 So beautifully said! Not off track, u made me actually think over stuff! Interesting! OS please?😆

Perfect comment issay kehtay hainn 🤗

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blueflames

@blueflames

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

OMG IM FREAKIN' OUT HERE!
Why did i not see your comment earlier?!! 😲 😲
Here i was womdering howcome my lovely stalker didnt comment yet! 😆
Awww i couldnr have explained it better myself! 😳 So beautifully said! Not off track, u made me actually think over stuff! Interesting! OS please?😆

Perfect comment issay kehtay hainn 🤗

i have changed colors to a dazzler, my long worn golden coat has been now thrown out and people still dont knw that😆😆

i had read and commented before i saw the PM. pm is still unread in my box, 😳

m in a super DD mode right now, so aise philosophical off track explanations can be seen again again. 😳

aa laag jaa gale 🤗

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: blueflames

i have changed colors to a dazzler, my long worn golden coat has been now thrown out and people still dont knw that😆😆

i had read and commented before i saw the PM. pm is still unread in my box, 😳

m in a super DD mode right now, so aise philosophical off track explanations can be seen again again. 😳

aa laag jaa gale 🤗

Now i know why i didnt notice your comment! 😆

Congrats, sweets im so happy you turned green! But haaw, blueflames is now green! Haha 😆

Hahaha you're super quick man, i cant even explain how i enjoy seeing your comments so quick 😆

Haha DD mode? Ye konsa mode hai? 😆 philosophical-ness is so cool ! Me looovves!

🤗

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blueflames

@blueflames

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Now i know why i didnt notice your comment! 😆
Congrats, sweets im so happy you turned green! But haaw, blueflames is now green! Haha 😆

Hahaha you're super quick man, i cant even explain how i enjoy seeing your comments so quick 😆

Haha DD mode? Ye konsa mode hai? 😆 philosophical-ness is so cool ! Me looovves!

🤗

thank you so much dear 🤗

m flattered 😆😆

well DD mode is dukhi n disappointed mood. 😳