SS: There they lay l Part 3+ Note l Page 28 - Page 6

hehehe omg that was soo funny :D

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Hey Diya

Darling this as just unbelievable yet beautiful.

OCD Freak stress Ahem Khan is laughing and playing a food smudge game with Zoe.

I loved the way these two fought.

And now they fell.

Hoe dare u stop at such a point?HMPH!!

I badly wanted to read ahead yaar...

ASYA's cute bickering was awesome.

I loved it when Zoe shocked Asad by placing the jam on his and called him Jammy.That was hilarious..

So Mr. Akdu was gawking at his fiance just before the whole drama begun.I guess his wish of making out with her is going to get fulfilled soon.

This was an amazing part.I'm in love with ur works sweety.

You are a wonderful writer.

Keep writing!

And yeah! You may better continue it soon before I die out of excitement.😆

love u

Muah!

Thank you so much didu.

And I'm sorry for leaving it half way. It was supposed to be a OS but turned it into TS as my hands pained to hell when I started writing it. I could only type this much before I collapsed on my laptop. My body suddenly started to shiver due to all the medicines and illness that I had just a few days back. I thought I was fine but my body gave up too soon.

Chodo, now I'm fine again😎 Will start thinking what to write next😉 in my dreams. Now off to sleep. Good night Didu

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

omg it ws cracking

I do not know about my story but your signature really cracked me up🤣

Thank you for reading it

Amazing start!! It was awesome to read! Can't wait til you continue so do continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

hey

OMG

Diya

It was damn hilarious but still romantic
Loved it poor asad but man he got more evil than her
Totally loved it
Can you con soon plzz

Hilarious!!

that was really nice
continue soon

Continue... Please give some really hot mitwa moments.. Haha