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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb...!!! did a great job...
this part was sooo hilarious.. speciallyy dilshads reaction.. n i loved some dialouges specially the crocodile one.. couldnt help rolling onbthe floor laughin.. :p
ur punches r sooo good... :D
n i am veryyy excited for the next part... plz update ASAP... n pm me... i am sending u a buddyy request... :)
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awesome update...loved bathroom fiasco😃...i hate that tannu more than anything now😡...poor asya... anyways can you please send pm to me??? anyways waiting for the update...
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Hi guys! I know I'm more than a month late in updating and I'm VERY VERY VERY sorry for that. Ok, I know its stupid that Tanveer is still in the story considering the fact that she is out in the show. I was supposed to kick her out in this update coz when i updated the last chapter which was a month back, Tanveer was still there in the show and the track was so horrible and I didn't want to keep her in my story anymore. But I'm not changing my decision. I'm still gonna kick tanveer out. So here goes chapter 9:

The Cat is Out of the Bag

She stepped into the house into the slowly, clutching the bags in her hands tightly, still scared out of her wits by what had happened just a while ago. He heart was beating a million miles per second. She was starting to feel dizzy from all the questions buzzing in her head, she had no idea of who the man was, or why he would behave in such a disgusting manner with her. She knew the fault wasn't hers, but she couldn't help but feel ashamed and guilty, "What will I tell Mr.Khan?" She knew very well that she would have to tell Asad about what had just happened and she also knew for a fact that he'll yell at her for being stupid and she was ready to accept that, but she didn't know how to confront him and even if she did, she didn't how she could actually explain the situation. She snapped out of her thoughts as she felt someone's hand resting on her shoulder, she quickly changed her expression and turned around, only to find Tanveer smiling at her. She didn't know why, but she felt something was off with Tanveer, something about her was not right. She managed to crack a small smile, but her her horrified expression hadn't gone unnoticed by Tanveer, she took that as affirmation that her plan had succeeded. She smirked and asked in a sugar coated tone, "What happened Zoya? Why do you look so worried? By the way, I was searching for you for so long? Where did you go? Oh, were you worried about Jammy shouting at you, like last time?" Zoya was extremely irritated by her rapid fire of questions and her last one really put her off. She grudgingly smiled at her and replied, "I didn't go anywhere and I'd like to ask the same question. Where exactly were you? I did come looking for you." Tanveer gave her a lop sided smile and replied, "Oh, I'm sure you went somewhere! I was looking for you for so long! You could have called me, na? What have you been busy with? Meeting up with some guy, were you?" Zoya glared at her, gritting her teeth, "I'm sorry? Maybe you've forgotten, me and Mr. Khan are engaged, mind your tongue." Tanveer smirked at her even more and replied in her sweet tone again, "Arre! Why're you getting so angry, Zoya? I was just joking! Why would you ever do something like that? I know, if you did do something like that, Jammy would bury you alive. So why would you do something like that?" Zoya glared at her some more, before marching off to her room. Tanveer smiled victoriously as she watched her retreating figure, "Check mate, Zoya. Your king is nearly dead."

Asad walked in to her room, only to find her hugging a pillow, crying her eyes out. He immediately rushed over to her and set beside her, "Zoya, what happened? Why're you crying?" Her head sprang up as she realized that Asad had just walked in to her room. She quickly wiped away her tears and looked at Asad who as staring at her with questioning eyes. She hastily put up a cheerful face again and replied, "M...Me? I wasn't crying!" Asad looked at her curiously, trying to figure out what was wrong, "Don't lie, you were craying and I saw it. Just tell me what's wrong." Zoya stared at him speechlessly, she didn't know whether she should tell Asad about what had just happened, or not. She squeezed her eyes shut, in attempt to make up her mind, she opened them again, after a few seconds and replied, "Mr. Khan, don't be stupid. I wasn't crying and nothing's wrong. You're imagining things." Asad ket his eyes on her, he could clearly tell she was hiding something. He knew something was bothering her, but he also knew that his ziddi Zoya would never admit it out of persuasion, unless she decided to do so, herself. I'll have to deal with this, later, he thought. He nodded at her and smiled, getting up and walking out. Zoya stared at him, bewildered by his action. She'd expected him to sit there and argue with her for the next five hours, but she was relieved that she wouldn't have to do any more convincing, because she know that it was a job to make Asad fall for a lie. She fell back on her bed, covering her face with her palms. She was in an extreme dilemma. If she didn't tell Asad and if he found it himself, she would be dead, she knew that as a matter of factually. She finally made a resolve, "I'll have to find out who that guy is, first." She didn't know when she fell asleep, neither did she know that when she woke up, she would be faced by a hurricane.

That was when his whole world came crashing down, the very thought of someone whom he loved betraying made him shudder. But this was way bigger than just betrayal. He clenched his fists in anger, trying not to lose control, "I'm not believing this. She would never do that to me." Tanveer sighed irritated and replied, "Jammy! Don't be stupid, she's been taking you on a fool's ride along. Are you still gonna stay a fool, even after knowing the truth? Khala, you explain to Jammy, na?" Dilshaad stared at the photos in Tanveer's hands, in utter disbelief. She pinched herself, hoping that it was all just a crazy figment of her imagination, but nothing changed. "How could Zoya do this, to us?", she asked, tears pouring down her face. Tanveer flashed a small smile, but covered it up with an expression of horror, "Khala, we've all been so stupid to trust that woman. She was so desperate, that she ran off after I went to another shop. She's been cheating on you, Jammy." Asad looked up at Tanveer, who was looking at him in sympathetic manner. He turned his head too look at his mother, who was at the verge of a break down. Najma was also there, witnessing everything. She was shocked, but at the same time, something else was bothering her. She decided to wait until she heard the whole story. She looked at her bhaijaan, who was trying hard to control his tears. He gritted his teeth and spoke, "This ends now."

"Allah miyan! What's wrong with you, Mr. Khan? Have you ever heard of something called waking up someone without screaming in their ears? Why did I ever decided to marry Mr. Akdu Ah-?" "You're right! Why did you ever decide to marry me? So that you can break my trust? Well, your games is over, I know you've been cheating me along. Get out of this house before I drag you out myself!" She laughed at him and replied, "Nice try. You can't fool me that easy. Better luck next time." Asad clenched his fists and screamed at her, "Don't you dare act! Do you think I'm playing the fool here?! All of us know your true face! How could you be so shameless?! Do you know how much I respected you?! You shattered all of that in a second!" Zoya stared at him, bewildered and shocked by his accusations, "Mr. Khan, what are you talking about?" Asad gritted his teeth and replied, "Oh, so you don't know what I'm talking about? Then I'll make you understand." He grabbed her by her wrist and dragged her out to the living room, where the rest of the ladies were standing in complete silence. He walked over to Tanveer and snatched the photos in her hands. He held it up, for Zoya to see and spoke, "This is what I was talking about."

To say that she was shocked, would be an understatement. She cringed as she remembered what had happened just a few hours ago. She stared at the photos for a few more seconds and that was when she realized someone had planned all of it. Someone had purposefully wanted to sabotage her marriage. She looked back up at Asad, who was staring at her, a few tears sliding down his cheeks, "Mr. Khan-" "There's nothing left to explain. You've clearly shown your loyalties and I'm sure that I'm not a part of it. Please. Just leave, I don't even wanna look at you, before I do something over the top, leave." Tears started making their way down her face, she took a step forward and to hold Asad's hand but he took a step back, making sure that she stayed well away from him, "I said leave. Just leave! LEAVE!!!" Zoya took a deep breath in and gathered her wits to speak again, "Mr. Khan! Why do you always think that I'm at fault? That-" She was cut off by Asad, "Shut up Ms. Farooqui! I saw it! I trusted you and you shattered my trust. I f you didn't want to get married to me, why couldn't you have just said so, instead of betraying me? Tears were streaming down her face, she watched Asad storm away into his room. Slowly, everyone retreated to their own rooms. She was the last one standing.

"Najma! I said, not now! Please leave." Najma snapped back at Asad, "No! Bhaijaan, you have to listen!" Asad yelled at her, "I don't wanna listen! I said, leave!" Najma stormed towards her bhaijaan and grabbed him by the wrist, "This time, you're listening. I don't care-" She was cut off by Tanveer, who'd just walked into the room, "Najma, leave him. He needs some space." Najma glared at her and retorted back, "Shut up! I know more about my bhaijaan than you do." Tanveer stared at her, a little shocked by her sudden rudeness. Najma glared at her some more and spoke again, "Fine. Leave bhaijaan. Just answer my question, ok?" Tanveer nodded at her. Najma took a deep breath in and spoke, "You and Zoya left at around 11 'o' clock, right?" Tanveer still didn't know where she was getting around to, she nodded again. "And you came back home in less than an hour. And if you would remember, I called Zoya's number at around 11.40, because I'd forgotten to tell her to buy something that I needed and you picked up her phone instead, remember?" Tanveer was getting a little scared by how Najma was beating around the bush, she hesitantly nodded again. "And you said that Zoya had dropped her phone and she was in another row. You also said that you'll call up after you let her know that I'd called and you did call me about 2 minutes later, saying that you told Zoya." Tanveer stared at her in shock, as she realized where she was getting around to. Najma saw her terrified expression and smiled, "And the funniest thing is that you called me up from Zoya's number again, instead of giving her phone back and the even funnier thing is when you called me, you were in the car, not in the shop." "How do you know that I was in the car?", she asked stupidly. Najma smirked and replied, "Because, it just so happened that the driver asked for Zoya, when you were on the phone and I could also hear the other vehicles on the road. And you came back home in less than 10 minutes after I called and the shops are a 20 minutes drive away. That's proof that you weren't even with Zoya when I called you. Isn't that right, Ms. Liar Tanveer? Asad who'd been listening to the whole conversation, silently, yet intently, turned around and looked at Tanveer, who was fuming at Najma. Najma looked at Asad who was staring at Tanveer in disbelief, she walked over to him and held up her mobile in front of Asad's face, "Here's the call log, bhaijaan." Asad took the phone from her hands and stared at the screen, he clenched his fist and looked back up at Tanveer who was just getting ready with another excuse. He handed the phone back to Najma and walked up to Tanveer, slowly. He gritted his teeth and spoke, "Why did you lie? Why did you put the blame on Zoya?" Tanveer stared at him, scared beyond her wits, he looked like a volcano ready to explode any second, she drew a deep breath and spoke, "Jammy, even if I was lying. What has that got to do with Zoya and that other man?" Asad kept on staring at Tanveer, but Najma smiled and replied, "Oh, stupid me! How could I forget the most important detail?" Tanveer turned her head and looked at Najma curiously, "How could I possibly forget the fact that I found this voice message on your phone, just 2 hours ago?" Najma pulled out the phone from her dupatta and pressed the play button. The room fell silent as the message echoed in the room, "Tanveerji, your plan worked out perfectly. One of our boys did went an did the misbehaving and one of them hid behind a building and took the photos. The photos are so perfect, you can't tell even the slightest bit that the girl was struggling to get free. I've already sent the photos to you, Tanveerji. When will we be getting the money you promised us to give?" Tanveer's eyes grew wide, hearing that. She looked at Asad, who'd gone red with rage. How did my plan go so miserably wrong?! This bloody Najma! How the hell did she find all this?, she thought to herself. Just when she was about to open her mouth to speak, she felt a sharp sting on her cheek. She looked up to find a fuming Dilshaad, glaring holes into her, "HOW DARE YOU?!?!?! We treated you like someone who was a part of this family but you have been nothing but a disgusting witch masking your real self with innocence! Why did you do this to us? Why did you do this to Zoya?! What could she have possibly done to you?!" Dilshaad grabbed her by her shoulders and shook her, screaming the same lines into her face over and over again. She shrugged her hands of her shoulders and bellowed, "HAAN! I was trying to get rid of Zoya all the time! I got Asad to book Zoya's return tickets on purpose, but at the end she didn't leave. When Asad gave her the letter for the job, I sabotaged that, as well. When that Bhatevdekar man came to take Zoya away, you people came up with the fake engagement drama! I called up that Bhatavdekar and told him that it was fake. But when he came to investigate, you got through again! And I also was the person who mixed the poison in the sweets Zoya took to Ayaan's engagement, because I knew Asad would chuck her when he found out about it, but then again, he brought her back. After that, I decided to kill Zoya, I mixed poison in that pizza, but you saved her again. And I'd tried to create several misunderstandings between Asad and Zoya, but those plans failed as well. And I did all of that, because I wanted to get married to Asad! And that bloody Zoya was the biggest obstacle, so I'd tried to remove her! And why did I wanna get married to Asad? Because, I needed to give my child a father's name. I'd been deceiving all of you all the time! So there! Are you happy now?!" Asad stared at her, he was shocked beyond his wits, he clenched his fist screamed into her face, "GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!!!" Tanveer look at him and replied, gritting her teeth, "I'm going now. But I'll make sure you and Zoya don't get married. This is my challenge and you'll surely lose, because no one will ever win against Billo Rani Tanveer!!!" She cast one last glance at everyone and turned around to leave, just as she about to leave, she turned around again and said, "You will regret this, Asad."

Asad walked into Zoya's room and found her sitting on the floor, her head resting on the bed and sleeping. He noticed her suitcase lying on top of her bed, her clothes laying sprawled across the place. A tear made its way down his cheek, but he quickly wiped it away and slowly walked over to her and knelt down, he stared at he tear stained for a few seconds for a few seconds, before trying to wake her up. He called out softly, "Zoya?" She stirred a little, but didn't get up. Asad touched her cheek and called out again, "Zoya, get up." She slowly opened her eyes and foun Asad staring at her with teary eyes. She rubbed her eyes sleepily and asked, "Jee?" Asad bit his lip, trying to think of something to say, he knew that Zoya hadn't realized the situation yet. Zoya looked up at him, still a little confused, she got up and stretched. She yawned and turned her head, she found her suitcase lying on the bed with clothes all over the place. She furrowed her brows, still confused but then it struck her. She realized that she was supposed to leave the house, she took a few steps away from Asad, apprehensively and spoke, "I...I'm leaving." She quickly turned away, to hide her tears from Asad. Asad stared at her, his own eyes brimming with tears. He grabbed her by her wrist and pulled her towards his body. He held her in a bone crushing hug, crying into her shoulder, he composed himself and whispered into her ears, "I'm sorry, Zoya. I love you." He felt Zoya go stiff against his body, but he felt her relaxing slowly. He pulled away after a few seconds and caressed her face, "You could have just told me in the first place about what happened, right?" Zoya stared at him, bewildered. Just a couple of hours ago, he'd told her to get out oh the house, but now he was apologizing. Asad, knowing what she was thinking, replied, "Tanveer was fooling us all the while. She set you up." Zoya stared at him, even more confused. Asad guided her to the bed and made her sit, doing so himself. He started explaining how Najma had come and told them everything and how Tanveer herself confessed her deeds. By the time Asad finished, Zoya was nearly in tears, she let out a silent sob and asked, "But what'd I do to her?" Asad smiled at her sadly and moved the lock of hair falling across her face, "You didn't do anything. She was just too selfish." She wiped her tears away with the back of her hand and looked up at Asad, he gave her a reassuring smile and she smiled back at him. Before she could stop herself, she found herself saying, "So, no one's gonna Jammy my Jahanpanah Six Packs anymore! And finally, I can have all the attention to myself!" Asad smirked at her, while Zoya bit her lip, smiling sheepishly, as she realized what she'd just just said. "Jealous, Ms. Farooqui?" Zoya glared at him and snapped back, "Jealous, my foot!"

to be continued...

Precap: "I'm not dancing!", yelled Asad for the umpteenth time. Zoya put up her pouty face again, placing her hands on her hips. Dilshaad smiled and said, "Your sangeet, so you ARE dancing and that's final."

So that was chapter 9! I finally kicked out Tanveer from the story! I typed up up all of this in one go and I got bored in the last one hours so i guess it was not really good or anything. I didn't proof read the chapter, so there will be several typing errors and i'm sorry for that.I don't know how many more chapters there'll be for those story. I'll probably end it somewhere during the 15th to 20th chapter. I've got a few aims for the story and until I complete those i can't end it. Don't forget to leave ur comments behind! Hope u liked it! Au revoir!

Note: Plz send me a frnd request if u wud like pms on updates coz it makes it much easier for me to send them in one go rather than individually. Thnx.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally happy days r here again ❤️ ;)
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Finally Tanveer is out

Yipee

Awesome work

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Posted: 12 years ago
yeah!!! finally...
tanveer say it out everything...
zoya is so forgiven... how sweet..😊
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back dear...nice update...infact loved it..billi out..asya together...

a small req..hope u don't mind...pls write a little recap whn u update after so long...so tht we don't hv to go back 4rm starting...hope u understand yr...thts its so time consuming...& mummy won;t allow to sit 4 so long on net...

thnsk 4 d pm dear..continue & update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
coool nok jok at sangeet now :)
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Great update...finally that tanveer is out...i loved how najma shouted and glared at tanveer...and the best line"So, no one's gonna Jammy my Jahanpanah Six Packs anymore! And finally, I can have all the attention to myself!" 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god. I loved it. Amezing

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