My Version of Tomorrow's Episode

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Scene continues from where it left off Zoya and Asad looking at one another in utter confusion

Asad: Ammi, yeh nahi ho sakta...what's the rush?

Zoya: Ha, phuphi Mr.Khan doesn't want this...and if he doesn't I don't either...(goes silent)

Dilshad: Tum dono chup bilkul chup. Maine kaha key yeh nikaah hoga aur yeh nikaah hoga- (storms off and Asad follows her till her room)

Asad: Ammi, we can't make a decision in such a haste. It doesn't make any... Zoya isn't logical for our family

Dilshad opens the door and glares at Asad: that's your problem Asad you think too much with your brain and not enough with your heart...Asad...I see your love in your eyes for Zoya. You love her...Asad she makes me go against your vasools...she makes you smile Asad...you love her and your nikaah will happen with Zoya and only Zoya (she closes her door again and goes away)

Zoya comes there and looks at Asad: Mr.Khan I'm sorry that you're going through all this because of me...if you want I can leave...I don't want to cause you more inconvenience

These words pierce Asad like a sharp knife...

(Zoya walks off)

Asad thinks...she's not a bhoj...yeah she's a bit weird and unconventional...but not bad...when she smiles my whole life feels complete...but still I don't know...uuuf.

Next day.

Dilshad: Zoya Asad. Come here.

Asad: Haan Ammi?

Najma: Zoya nahin hain...subha subha utta aur Gaya with a big suitcase

Asad: kya?! Gaya? Suitcase?? Kahan Gaya?! Tamatar...

Najma: nahin janta bhaijaan... She looked upset

Asad runs to Zoyas room only to find her sleeping quietly and sound with Dilshaad and Najma behind him

Asad: ZOYA? (Not as dramatic as the airport šŸ˜› )

Zoya looks up from her bed all groggy: Mr.Khan ? (Pinches self) ouch...yeh dream nahin..Kya?!

Asad: uh nothing go back to sleep

Dilshad: dekha Asad dekha, you thought that Zoya was gone for a second and your heart sank to your toes Asad that's LOVE...pure love.

Asad: Ammi...no...I ...Mein woh...woh.. I just wanted to make sure she didn't leave with the ring...

Dilshad: the ring Tanveer removed? The one in my possession? Asad who are you trying to make a fool?

Zoya comes out and Asad leaves

Zoya: kya hua jahanpana ko? Kya inke tabeeat theek hain

Dilshad:haan, pyar ki bimari. šŸ˜‰

Zoya blushes and leaves...

Dilshaad called them again ASAD ZOYA!

Zoya and Asad: haaan?

Dilshaad: here are your outfits for the sagai. K bye.

Asad: look at Zoya and leaves

Zoya: Mr.Khan...what's wrong with me? Why are you continuously refusing me?

Asad speechless...she thinks she's the problem.

Asad: Ms.Farooqi mere paas bakwas keh liye nahin hain so if your done asking questions I'm going to get ready

Zoya confused: Ignorant egotistic emotionally challenged saru admi.

Next scene.

Asad with Dilshaad getting ready still trying to convince her this is rushed

Asad: Ammi this is too much too soon your emotions are clouding your judgment

Dilshad: your judgement is clouding your emotion now Stand still and let me pin this rose in your pocket

Asad grumbles and enters Zoya and Najma with Billo (can't forget Billo) following behind

Asad and Dilshad: Mashallah

Zoya silent and looking lost, Najma glowing and overflowing with joy, Asad lost in Zoya, Dilshad lost in Asads lost ness, and Billo angrier than ever

Zoya comes up to Asad and Asad stares at her and she stares back.

Dilshad gives them both their rings

And the precap scene. Both lost in each other hand in hand etc etc after that I dunno


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StonerGirL thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wish we get stuff like this..especially the mashallah..oh how I wanna hear those words frm asads mouth for zo!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked it! This was good and I loved the part where they tricked Asad into thinking Zoya had left
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The part where they tricked him was HILARIOUS. Although I feel he might have gotten angry at first and then stuttered his usual Woh Actually :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really good...me too liked the part where they trick him...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG
That was beautiful...
Asad very soon needs that other zor ka jhatka! šŸ˜†
very well written!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it!! Hope something like that happens!! Most of dilshads dialogues made me giggle lmao!!!!

Loool love the bit about billo the kam wali following behind šŸ˜†

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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 nice, i was laughing while reading this, especially when dilshad said K BYE..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila2009

I liked it! This was good and I loved the part where they tricked Asad into thinking Zoya had left

hehehe...true!!
that's a good one... doable šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice. I like the idea of dilshaad/najma teasing asad about zoya leaving. Serves him right šŸ˜†

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