AsYa SS: |Busted| (Epilogue, Page 54, Complete)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan
Girll!! I am in love with this, you leave me speechless with each part! This was beautifully written, i love Asad's inner turmoil and how he unknowingly gives in to his heart! And yes she's taking over his life and he claims he doesn't want to marry her?! Awww i love these family moments, soo sooo cutee! I had a huge grin on my face reading this, loool at Najma! Lmfaooo! I loved the ending, i loved all of it! Keep up the amazing work, you're a wonderful writer, mashAllah! I want moree moree and moree! Thank you for the pm, and continue sooon lovely! xoxo

What is there left to say???😆

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Ooo I love this I can't wait to read the next part! And I would love it if you could pm me on your future updates :) Thanks in advance :))

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Very entertaining! Keep up the good work!

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jazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow u have updated so quickly lovd it

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Okaay I just finished reading part 2 and I have no idea what to say... all I can really say is that I've like totally fell in love with this SS and am really eager to read more so do continue soon and please pm me when you update in the future( I'll send you a buddy request, kindly accept it) Thanks a ton in advancee :))

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Okay. This might be one of the best SS's out there!

Holy shiat!

Write more!

And pm me?

I can't wait for the next part.

And hell's to the yes. Zoya is smart and educated and awesome in your ss. Love it!

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sujata

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

😊beautifully written..loved reading it...hope u update next part soon

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

wowww!!!!!! u r really a gud writer ...😊pleaseee update soon 😊

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Arnavdewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

one question, r u a pro ?

the whole time I was reading I kept thinking is there anyway this cud be sent to the CVs. I mean , not only the story is well knit and free flowing, THIS CUD HAPPEN ON THE SHOW. I think it makes perfect sense. anyway one prediction tht will most likely happen on the show is

" I don't know why I did it but I brought her arm to my face and kissed it..."There is no need to hide it Zoya, you are beautiful, just the way you are." I whispered."

and this is my POV

Edited by Arnavdewaani - 12 years ago