{|AsYa| SS: Jungle Mein Mangal} EPILOGUE PAGE 106! - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update loved it...
love your humor..
plz conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just peeked in to ask about the next update? 😳

When are you gonna update, girlfriend? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Faziaa :D

Lady, I'm the 100th liker of your SS :)
Zoya is just so awesome!

I love the brother sister duo's they are like AMAZING!
I so want to read the next part, jaldi update karo aur thoda romance do na? LOL.

Waiting
XOXOXO

Nisha
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Faziaa :D


Lady, I'm the 100th liker of your SS :)
Zoya is just so awesome!

I love the brother sister duo's they are like AMAZING!
I so want to read the next part, jaldi update karo aur thoda romance do na? LOL.

Waiting
XOXOXO

Nisha


Hahahahaa im sooo glad you like my SS, Nisha! 🤗

Sachi! Thank you sooo mega much! 🤗 haahhaa haan haan this one is all about romance, romance hi romance hoga do not worry. 😆

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

Just peeked in to ask about the next update? 😳


When are you gonna update, girlfriend? 😆


Hahaha today pakka, girlfriend! 😆 😆

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA

awsome update loved it...

love your humor..
plz conti soon


Thank you sooo much, im glad you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: luvushivin1

behna update krdo..reham ho jayega humare upar


Late hogayi na? Its so hard with 2 2 stories. Idk log 5 5 kese handle karte hain! 😲
Haan aaj pakka.😳


Thank youuu😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rennie

those guys are so wicked...eagerly waiting for the fun to begin...


Hahaha wicked they are. 😉

Originally posted by: ...shruti...

Lol asad always has an idea or two
Love the update


He's the smart pants, no? 😆
Thank youu😃

Originally posted by: sohu_ksgian

Ahahahah I absolutely loved this 😆
Asad and such plans??? ahaaa 😉
Lovely update ❤️
Continue soon 🤗


He is learning the route to fun. He is a little late to understand such things, but he comes around. 😆
Thank you sooo much! Will do! 😳

Originally posted by: skavya

nice update !!!!!


like the plan of Asad's, now looking forward for the girl's reaction

plz plz continue soon ...


Haha girls are in for a surprise. Good or bad? We shall see. 😆 thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Khushi2187

SUPERB Update Faiza...👏

Loved the update alot...❤️
Specially the last part...😉
Asad is getting naughtier...😉
Waiting for their Ladies reaction on their plan...😛
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...😛


Thank you Mariam! 😃

Hehe im glad you're liking it. 😆
Asad is naughty, yeah! Chuppa rustam! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thankyou so much 😳

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

You never fail to surprise me with your updates, you know.

There is something new and unique in every part of yours. And I love it.

Though I again missed the Love-Fate conversation at the end.
And I am trying to catch up with all the 10 parts of Black. I'll be there to pester you for updates of your FF sooon 😆

There were some parts which I really liked in the 8th part.

This particular one I really liked 😳

'One day, when we have kids', Zoya began once again hugging Asad from his waist, resting her head on his hard shoulders as she stood beside him. 'We could bring them here. ... His heart swelled with love as she spoke of their future while the wind made her hair fly behind her, and the orange glow eminating from the sky creating a soft glown on her face.

The entire two paras were really well written and I could imagine Asad- Zoya like that 😳

And this one was hilarious 😆

'Lying on the grass, watching the stars', Ayaan said in a sarcastic dreamy voice, getting up to sit, before he yelled, 'with my BROTHER is fun?'


Hahaha awww! Im sooo glad you liked it! Yesss i always wished for a scene where they compare Zoya's beauty with nature. Its the bestest compliment ever one could recieve.😳

Hahaha the lying on grass wala i was laughing while i wrote too 😆

Originally posted by: Cup-Of-Chai

RESWAAA!

I read till 4 chapters so far. DUDE! FAIZA! Can i have your autograph? 😆 i am your PANKHA! PANKHA BOLE TO FAN. Ise pehle ke your novel comes and you become another Paulo Coelho or Khaled Hosseini gimme your autographwa. ☺️

Anyways i'll get back to you when i read the rest of the chapters later.


Hahaha awww! Im glad you're liking it. 😃
BUAHAHAHA. OH PLEASE! 🤣 you're making me blushwaaa! 🤣 itni tareef na karo, asmaan mei uchlungi warna. 🤣

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Loved the update
Continue soonThanks for the pm


Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

lovely update faiza<3
loved the bromance...i have to see the girl's reaction now...cont soon!


Thanks a lot Vidhi babes! 🤗 glad you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-


Hahahahaa im sooo glad you like my SS, Nisha! 🤗

Sachi! Thank you sooo mega much! 🤗 haahhaa haan haan this one is all about romance, romance hi romance hoga do not worry. 😆


Hahaha today pakka, girlfriend! 😆 😆


Thank you sooo much, im glad you liked it. 😳


Late hogayi na? Its so hard with 2 2 stories. Idk log 5 5 kese handle karte hain! 😲
Haan aaj pakka.😳


Thank youuu😳

u know what i handle 5 stories
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shami810

That was a lovely update dear..!!!

Just loved it...nd thanks for pm..Do continue soon


Thank you so much! 😳 Will do dear.

Originally posted by: Kaya13

Awesum amazing chap...i can't wait for the next!!!

Thankyouuu! Glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen

that was awesome!:)

i loved it:))
pls pls pls could you continue soon ;) :)


Wll do dear. Glad you like it 😳 thankyou 😳



Thankyou 😳

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

omg tis is just awesome...totally luv it...it just superb...

ayaan is just too innocent tat he took time to understand wat his brother plan n the way he said 'lying down on the grass with my brother : was totally hilarious...asad is just brilliant hw he plan n nvr inform his wife bout it ...
thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next update...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...


Hahaha yesss! He's innocently dumb 🤣 thankyouuu im glad youre liking it. Will pm you for sure.
Thankyou soo very much! I love reading your comments! 😳

Originally posted by: asad-zoya

love it awsome

please update it soon
i cant wait :)


Thank you sooo much! 😳

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

Awesome!!

Gr8 writing!!
TY for the PM.


Thank you sooo much! Im glad you liked it. 😳
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Originally posted by: luvushivin1

u know what i handle 5 stories


I salute you!!! 😲 Thats super amazing. I would defo read them soon! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada

really beautiful part👏


Thank you so very much 😳

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE

Omg omg i love this cheeky side to asad. I want zoya to prove hin wrong instead of screaming and running into their arms. It would be funny to see the boys annoyed faces


He's a chuppa rustam! 😆 Hahaa i like how you're thinking. 😆 Im glad you liked it.


Will do dear.😳


Thank youuu😳


Thank youuu 😳

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

such a awesome update

lying n the grass with u r bro. part was too good


Thank you sooo much! Hahah im glad u like it 😳

Originally posted by: s120

Lovely update 😃 But was a bit short.


My fav part, "Asad was having a hard time deciding which way to look. The dropping sun at the sky, or the beautiful woman next to him? His heart swelled with love as she spoke of their future while the wind made her hair fly behind her, and the orange glow eminating from the sky creating a soft glown on her face."

So beautiful! ❤️


Yesss i'm aware, i was in a hurry when i wrote it. 😆

Awww thank youuu! I love it when someone describes ones beauty through comparisons with nature😳

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