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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Part 9

omg!! this one was extremely emotional 😭 all your parts made me so emotional 😭

all im thinking is "why does Zoya have to go through all of this" 😔 Dilshaad and Najma are also breaking down without Zoya in their house.. only they understand the preciousness of having Zoya around in the house.. and Dilshaad was right.. Zoya was the one who turned that lifeless house into a home 😭

loved the conversation between Dilshaad and Zoya over the phone but Asad made me so angry 🤬 why couldnt he just walk out and talk to Zoya on the phone!!!! 😡 i just hope that one day his ego just punches him in the face 😡

i just love the dialogues you choose for Zoya.. they are so expressive and meaningful.. and once again .. Asad you are such a foool!!! 😡 making me crazy with his behavior the end was quite tense.. i wonder who called out to her.. i dont wanna make any assumptions because you can bring in a twist at anytime 😆

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: mochhug

Whoa haha I'm scared some of that anger is directed at me 😛

nooo none of the anger is at you 😆

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
Part 9

omg!! this one was extremely emotional 😭 all your parts made me so emotional 😭
all im thinking is "why does Zoya have to go through all of this" 😔 Dilshaad and Najma are also breaking down without Zoya in their house.. only they understand the preciousness of having Zoya around in the house.. and Dilshaad was right.. Zoya was the one who turned that lifeless house into a home 😭
loved the conversation between Dilshaad and Zoya over the phone but Asad made me so angry 🤬 why couldnt he just walk out and talk to Zoya on the phone!!!! 😡 i just hope that one day his ego just punches him in the face 😡
i just love the dialogues you choose for Zoya.. they are so expressive and meaningful.. and once again .. Asad you are such a foool!!! 😡 making me crazy with his behavior the end was quite tense.. i wonder who called out to her.. i dont wanna make any assumptions because you can bring in a twist at anytime 😆

I've never gotten so many long comments 😆 Thankss :) It's really heart warming ❤️ Aww yes I am a sucker for cliffy's and twists 😃

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Part 10

As I said before.. Zoya has such a clean heart that after all the humiliation Asad put her through.. she was still imagining him around and hearing his voice 😔

if only Dhurandar was like this in the show itself 😆 thinking over his decision would have been great to see in the show 😆

after all that happened her heart still told her that Asad might come to stop her 😭 at this moment.. I would say that Asad doesnt deserve a girl like Zoya 😒

every time I'm angry with Asad you write a scene that makes me feel sooo sorry for him 😔 and yeah.. poor him.. he cant stop thinking about Zoya.. Yes Mr.! its about time you start using your heart instead of your brain ⭐️

Yaaayyy!! Ayaan to the rescueee!! .. i was wondering what was in that CD.. but Ayaan made sure he watched it to the end 👏 but i felt extremely sorry for Asad when he started crying.. and the words "His Zoya" just made me smile 😳 Finally the knight in shining armor heads out to save his damsel in distress 😃 i hope he finds her 😳

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Mishti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Part 11

I just love Ayaan's character in this 👍🏼 the way he supports Zoya through everything is wonderful I loved the conversation between Rabart and Mona 👏 and why do i like Dhurandar in this story 😆 maybe because he wants them to unite and be together forever 😳

Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan.. This is what you get for listening to your brain instead of your heart 😡 maybe next time you'll listen to your heart without listening to your brain 🤔

I love how Ayaan is trying to figure out what happened.. he does love his Mona a lot.. and he wants to sort out her problems just like she sorts out his problems whenever he needs a helping hand 😃

Poor Asad going around crazy looking for his Zoya 😭

i loved Asad's "Zoya sirf meri hai" awww and once again a cliff hanger but I'm lucky enough to have the next part to read 😆

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Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Amazing update, i'm glad they left Tanveer...hahaha serves her right the b***h...i'm also happy that Zoya agreed to meet Asad, i just hope they sort it all out, can't wait for the next chapter, please pm me when you update 😉

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

OMG! Loved it! Love this side of Asad! Its adorable and just so awesome! Can't wait for the second half!

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Part 12

when I read the first bit I was so happy.. I was like 🥳 but as I carried on reading ahead .. I was like 🥺 but then it all sank in..

Zoya's words were so good!! i loved her dialogues to Asad!! serves him right again!! 👍🏼 finally Zoya's words manage to break Asad's ego and shake his consciousness Mr Khan! Its about time you feel something other than anger and hate but sorry Asad.. this time even your heroic entry wasnt enough to stop Zoya from going 😒 Mr Dhurandar Bhatawdekar!! you are amazing!! why couldnt he be like this in show itself 😆 he understood what was going on but he still didnt want to interfere in anything 😔

Asad made me so emotional 😔 he was crying so much because Zoya left 😭 "Mein uske bine jeena hi nahi chata" that dialogue was just heartbreaking .. even though its all his fault I still feel so sorry for him 😭

Dilshaad you rock!!!! well done for making Asad realize everything 👍🏼 wooo!! I loved the ending.. Asad Ahmed Khan was in love!!

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
Part 12

when I read the first bit I was so happy.. I was like 🥳 but as I carried on reading ahead .. I was like 🥺 but then it all sank in..
Zoya's words were so good!! i loved her dialogues to Asad!! serves him right again!! 👍🏼 finally Zoya's words manage to break Asad's ego and shake his consciousness Mr Khan! Its about time you feel something other than anger and hate but sorry Asad.. this time even your heroic entry wasnt enough to stop Zoya from going 😒 Mr Dhurandar Bhatawdekar!! you are amazing!! why couldnt he be like this in show itself 😆 he understood what was going on but he still didnt want to interfere in anything 😔
Asad made me so emotional 😔 he was crying so much because Zoya left 😭 "Mein uske bine jeena hi nahi chata" that dialogue was just heartbreaking .. even though its all his fault I still feel so sorry for him 😭
Dilshaad you rock!!!! well done for making Asad realize everything 👍🏼 wooo!! I loved the ending.. Asad Ahmed Khan was in love!!

Haha I love how you jot down your reactions to every bit of the chapter. I'm literally refreshing every minute to read your comments 😆

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Part 13

Asad Ahmed Khan is in loveee Dilshaad's dialogues were great 👏

finallyyy!! He realizes everything the way his heart wants him to.. not his brain 😆 but then again the emotional stuff.. "Can i be as good for her as she had been for me??" a sad Asad 😔 this update was just full of Asads reminiscing which was great.. all the flashbacks., could create a vivid picture of everything 👍🏼 loved how he also thought about how Zoya felt not just his feelings alone and realized that Zoya also loves him and thats why she did everything for him without thinking twice.. 😳

and it was about time we got a smiling Asad 😆 great to have pictured him smiling from ear to ear and the last sentence was just beautiful "I'm in love. I love her. I love Ms. Farooqui. No. I love .. Zoya. I love Zoya Farooqui" ahh this just made me smile!! 😃

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