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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: mochhug

Haha I love how you jot down your reactions to every bit of the chapter. I'm literally refreshing every minute to read your comments 😆

😆 it has to be done.. especially in your FF.. i get different reactions with every singly bit of the story i read 😳

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Part 14

Just the title of this chapter made me smile 😳

and now.. finally we get a smiling and bubbly Zoya .. Zoya's Jeeju ki jai!! 😆 i wanted to get back the bubbly Zoya back since I started reading this FF and now we finally get her back 🥳

shifting to the Asad scene.. i just love the words you choose to describe his feelings 👏 Asad is in love but he still thinks that he wont be able to keep her happy he's such a confused man! 😳 he's okay with his pain but can't see her cry and the only way to soothe his pain is by being with Zoya and the only way to stop Zoya from crying is by keeping her by your side .. whats so hard to understand about this Mr Khan?! but again Asad's words are sooo emotional !! 😭 but Dilshaad is great! making him understand everything.. Oyee Mr Khan.. get off this merry-go-round and stop going back to your old feelings .. you're busy driving yourself crazy when you can easily get all the answers to your questions just by asking Zoya herself 🤔 I smiled at the "brace yourself Ms. Zoya Farooqui.. aapka jahapanah aa raha hai" made me jump with joy

great to see Zoya adjusting with her aapi and jeeju again finally a happy Zoya even though her heart is full of pain at the moment 😔 loveeed this update 👏

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Part 15

I'm finally commenting on part 15 😆

the first scene was great!! Zoya,phoopi and Najma .. the awesome threesome again great to see their bonding again.. just a day or so away from each other and they felt like they were away for years!!

once again Zoya.. Mr. Khan is back into your life .. even though they havent met at the moment and Zoya is hurt and angry at Asad.. I'm still happy that he's in NY just for her 😳 and now I can once again understand Zoya's feelings.. he's confusing her in leaps and bounds.. she has no idea what this man wants from her well Zoya baby its about time you realize he wants nothing but you ☺️

woohooo!!! Mr. Khan to the rescue 😆 he got everything done and dusted ready to go to his love 😳 then Tanveer 😡 arghh!! i just want her to know that Dhurandar told Zoya that he will extend her visa 🥳 and again Phoopi working her magic!! she knew what Zoya was thinking about just by a single glance at her I love the Phoopi&Najma pairing.. its like the heroine and her sidekick 😆 Asad has just fallen in love with Zoya real deep and now every time he hears her name, he either smiles or blushes 😳 Dilshaad&Najma were trying to make it look like Zoya refused to meet him and it worked as they could easily see the disappointment on his face 😆 Najma referring to Zoya as bhabi was nice 👍🏼 and Asad saying "i'll make it up to you Zoya, I promise" seemed like his life depended on it and if he isnt able to make it up to Zoya then he wouldnt be able to live in peace cant wait for AsYa to meet again ☺️

Loveeed the chapter!! update soon pleaseee & thanks for the pm 😛

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
Part 15

I'm finally commenting on part 15 😆
the first scene was great!! Zoya,phoopi and Najma .. the awesome threesome again great to see their bonding again.. just a day or so away from each other and they felt like they were away for years!!
once again Zoya.. Mr. Khan is back into your life .. even though they havent met at the moment and Zoya is hurt and angry at Asad.. I'm still happy that he's in NY just for her 😳 and now I can once again understand Zoya's feelings.. he's confusing her in leaps and bounds.. she has no idea what this man wants from her well Zoya baby its about time you realize he wants nothing but you ☺️
woohooo!!! Mr. Khan to the rescue 😆 he got everything done and dusted ready to go to his love 😳 then Tanveer 😡 arghh!! i just want her to know that Dhurandar told Zoya that he will extend her visa 🥳 and again Phoopi working her magic!! she knew what Zoya was thinking about just by a single glance at her I love the Phoopi&Najma pairing.. its like the heroine and her sidekick 😆 Asad has just fallen in love with Zoya real deep and now every time he hears her name, he either smiles or blushes 😳 Dilshaad&Najma were trying to make it look like Zoya refused to meet him and it worked as they could easily see the disappointment on his face 😆 Najma referring to Zoya as bhabi was nice 👍🏼 and Asad saying "i'll make it up to you Zoya, I promise" seemed like his life depended on it and if he isnt able to make it up to Zoya then he wouldnt be able to live in peace cant wait for AsYa to meet again ☺️
Loveeed the chapter!! update soon pleaseee & thanks for the pm 😛

Wow! Longest comment yet from you 😛 I actually have the second part ready, but again I'm waiting cause I won't be able to update after that part until the end of the weekend I feel bad cause when I first started the FF I used to update once a day, sometimes twice. And now I'm down to every couple days lol. But it's a asyalicious part, I can tell you that 😳

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: mochhug

Wow! Longest comment yet from you 😛 I actually have the second part ready, but again I'm waiting cause I won't be able to update after that part until the end of the weekend I feel bad cause when I first started the FF I used to update once a day, sometimes twice. And now I'm down to every couple days lol. But it's a asyalicious part, I can tell you that 😳

i'll be waiting 😳 if its AsYalicious then its definitely gonna be worth the wait 😛 take your timeee 😃

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

good one...eagerly waiting for the zoya - asad meeting...

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Amy

@angelgirl_a

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

i have read many other stories post on this forum before and i really like them all. But what makes me love this one the most is the way u played zoya's character out. Especially the part at the airport and the night at the house. u didnt make her seem so helpless towards her feelings! and her giving back asad a little of his own medicine was amazing! can't wait for the other update!!! LOve it👏

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: angelgirl_a
i have read many other stories post on this forum before and i really like them all. But what makes me love this one the most is the way u played zoya's character out. Especially the part at the airport and the night at the house. u didnt make her seem so helpless towards her feelings! and her giving back asad a little of his own medicine was amazing! can't wait for the other update!!! LOve it👏

Aww thanks 😊 Glad you like the feisty Zoya 😉