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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Looking forward to the meeting. lovely update

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: friendsall
U write awesome

Aww thank you 😳

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Firstly I love how you gave all your updates a title to give a slight idea of what the update will be about 👍🏼

Part 1

Loved how the update started with tension.. which really made me want to read more

the update was lovely and as soon as it started Im starting to hate razia from the beginning itself 😆

the way Ayaan and Rashid were supporting Zoya was amazing ⭐️

I wonder what Shireen was gonna say about who Zoya is before she was cut in between by Razia 🤔

great introduction to most of the characters 👍🏼

and again,, Loved the introduction of the angry young man Asad Ahmed Khan 😳

beautiful start 👏

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

This is hell perfect. You know what I part of me wanted Asad to go after zoya to NY and get her back with full respect. I mean yeah the airport scene has been my favorite in the serial but then this is so much more perfect. Asad realizing his mistake and also trying to make correct decisions for once. I love the way the story is developing it self which making me more and more curious to see and learn what happens next. They are soon gonna meet once more. I really want Zoya to forgive him and give him a chance to make things right. But, a part of me wants him to suffer a little. You know just because he made a poor soul suffer. But, then imagining asad's bechara type expression my heart melts. I m sure same will happen with zoya too..

Anyways, I loved the update. Do continue soon.

Dee

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Wow..such an amazing update. I can understand zoya's state of mind..had gone through a lot..so definitely need some time,which asad understood..👏..can't wait to read about their meeting..I hope he can explain himself..plz post ASAP.

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: Enchantress
This is hell perfect. You know what I part of me wanted Asad to go after zoya to NY and get her back with full respect. I mean yeah the airport scene has been my favorite in the serial but then this is so much more perfect. Asad realizing his mistake and also trying to make correct decisions for once. I love the way the story is developing it self which making me more and more curious to see and learn what happens next. They are soon gonna meet once more. I really want Zoya to forgive him and give him a chance to make things right. But, a part of me wants him to suffer a little. You know just because he made a poor soul suffer. But, then imagining asad's bechara type expression my heart melts. I m sure same will happen with zoya too..

Anyways, I loved the update. Do continue soon.

Dee

Aww thanks 😳 Yes i was kind disappointed that it didn't happen in the show and just had to write my wish :)

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Part 2

Razia is so vicious ! 🤬

how she be so heartless! 😡

Poor Zoya 😒 so emotional but again .. Ayaan to the rescue!! ⭐️

how could Razia think she was gonna slap Zoya for the second time when Ayaan was around 👍🏼

it was so emotional her remembering when Asad slapped her 😭

poor Zoya .. its all so sad for her everything is going wrong and she didnt want any of this to happen 😭

I'm glad you didnt make Gaffoor say anything to Zoya but you let him think that she was familiar

lovely update 🤗

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Part 3

I loveeed this update ..

the bonding between Ayaan and Zoya was amazing 👍🏼

i feel sooo sorry for Zoya.. she's the one who is in most trouble because she wanted things to go well but nothing went the way she wanted 😭

Ayaan is the hero in this update.. the way he was so concerned about Zoya was just overwhelming

Asad again as the angry young man .. without listening to anything he just hung up the phone after telling Ayaan not to hang up 😡 if he didnt want to listen to anything then why did he call Ayaan in the first place 😡 Arrrggghh!! Asad just drives me crazy with his behavior sometimes 🤬

even before reading the next update I can tell that Asad will do something which is totally uncalled for towards Zoya 🥺

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
Part 3

I loveeed this update ..
the bonding between Ayaan and Zoya was amazing 👍🏼
i feel sooo sorry for Zoya.. she's the one who is in most trouble because she wanted things to go well but nothing went the way she wanted 😭
Ayaan is the hero in this update.. the way he was so concerned about Zoya was just overwhelming
Asad again as the angry young man .. without listening to anything he just hung up the phone after telling Ayaan not to hang up 😡 if he didnt want to listen to anything then why did he call Ayaan in the first place 😡 Arrrggghh!! Asad just drives me crazy with his behavior sometimes 🤬
even before reading the next update I can tell that Asad will do something which is totally uncalled for towards Zoya 🥺

Sadly true.. but I'll let you read and find out exactly what 😭

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Part 4

I was right in my last comment 😒

what Asad said was not right at all.. full of disappointment with what he said.. I was so sad literally 😭

I cant believe he said all those words to Zoya.. how can he be so insensitive towards her 😭

it was great to see that Dilshaad didnt misunderstand Zoya after all that happened and the way Najma was also disappointed by her brothers behavior was nice 👍🏼

woohooo Najma! you go girl!! good that she blasted at Asad like that!! and Dilshaad also supported her .. made me really happy.. serves him right!!

the last sentence and precap just shocked me 😲