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Maryam Hassan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Superb Update!
I totally loved it.

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

i love dis chappi

bt i hate tanveer

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mhd72

@mhd72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Hey Ruksar,

Just came across your work & read all the chapters in one go 😃

Beautifully written..

Awaiting an update eagerly 😊

Love,

Mili.

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princess101

@princess101

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

AMAZING UPDATE I LOVED IT ESPECIALLY TANVEER GETTING YELLED AT AND FALLING THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Awesome update :)

I love all the AsYa bit and also the way Asad is behaving with Tanveer :P

Zoya's reaction when she saw her family was so Zoya that I loved it :P

Please continue soon

I can't wait to read more

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royalsgirl93

@royalsgirl93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

when are u updating next been a while

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komalpreet kaur

@Komal_gill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

heyy Ruksar awesome update...full entertainment👏

i know i'm very late at commenting but what to do..firstly exams..then christmas...then SALMAN KHAN's b'day and majorly my internet problem😕

anyways loved the conversation of Jahapanah Six Packs and Miss-know-it-all in the bathroom😳

that bloody tanveer was eavesdropping on our ASYA's convo...Asad really taught her a god lesson by not catching her when she was about to fall

OMG! ayaan and humaira came to meet our asya...i was actually imagining Rishabh Sinha as Ayaan..coz he is the only one who could do such besharam things. miss him

aww humaira came to clarify everything between her n Zoya...wish Qubool Hai CV's could do such sensible scenes

OH MY GOSH my ASYA r sooo damn hot😳

oh they were watching ek the tiger...one of my fav. movies of MY SALMAN KHAN

why didn't zoya pick up asad's phone??? 30 missed calls and 6 texts...lolz...asad would have been so worried...so cute

Asad heard the knock on the door and decided not to respond. The door creaked open and shut slowly. Soon he felt the bed dip next to him and he could feel Zoya's presence right next to him, he sighed and stayed like that. Zoya slowly reached for his hand and moved it away from his forehead. Asad slowly opened his eyes and looked into Zoya's doe shaped eyes. The soft look in her eyes melted him. Zoya slowly leaned forward and placed a kiss on Asad's head. Asad sighed content and felt his anger melt away slowly. Zoya leaned back up and Asad moved and placed his head in her lap. Zoya settled her hands into Asad's hair and slowly started to play with it after a couple minutes Asad guided Zoya's hand to his temples and motioned for her to massage it.

this was my most favorite part of this update..i just loved it so very much...ASYA r so adorable, and hot at the same time

how i wish to see KABHI doing such cute asya scenes...i don't want to see that raqesh as asad...i want KSG back😭

my god..loook at tanveer's guts...she is such a cheap girl😡

loved amaan n najma scene

asad was quite jealous of amaan...wonderful part

i must say it was a very long update...i read the whole story once again...u r doing a great work ruksar

update soon😃

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

read all in one go

it was awesome

i wish tanveer don't plays any bad trick like which she played on asya 1st marriage day in Qh.

and pls update me soon

and pls do pm me for next update 😊